VGC 21 Yveltal [QC 1/1] [GP 1/1]

[pix]

[SET]
name: Assault Vest
move 1: Oblivion Wing
move 2: Snarl
move 3: Foul Play
move 4: Sucker Punch
item: Assault Vest
ability: Dark Aura
nature: Timid / Modest
evs: 236 HP/ 4 Def / 68 SpA / 12 SpD / 188 Spe




[SET COMMENTS]
Even though Yveltal isn't been the most dominant restricted Pokemon, it has made a name for its ability to deal good damage thanks to Dark Aura while also providing good support to its teammates. Oblivion Wing threatens common Grass-types such as Rillaboom and Whimsicott, is able to 2HKO Bulky Urshifu-R, and provides a fairly reliable source of recovery. Snarl is an awesome tool to lower the Special Attack of many threats such as Kyogre, Xerneas, and Palkia and has the added benefit of bypassing Calyrex-S's Substitute to inflict an OHKO. Foul Play allows Yveltal to 2HKO Adamant Assault Vest Rillaboom and Interepid Sword-boosted Zacian-C. Sucker Punch allows Yveltal to get the upper hand against faster Pokemon such as Calyrex-S and Regieleki and secure safe revenge kills. This EV spread enable it to live a Magnet Thunderbolt from Regieleki and Play Rough from a neutral-natured Zacian-C.

Stakataka is a great partner to get rid of Fairy-Types that give Yveltal a hard time while also giving the team a slow option. Rillaboom checks Tapu Fini and provides Fake Out and U-turn support to put Yveltal in better positions. Incineroar provides Fake Out, Snarl, Parting Shot and Intimidate support to gain momentum and protect Yveltal by softening damage dealt by opponents such as Xerneas and Zacian-C, possibly turning many OHKOs into 2HKOs.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[ PixxelsVGC, 554354]]
- Quality checked by: [[ Giokio, 517038 ]]
- Grammar checked by: [[Lumari, 232216]]

 

[pix]

Ready for qc!

 

[Giokio]

QC

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[SET]
name: Mixed Support Assault Vest
move 1: Oblivion Wing
move 2: Snarl
move 3: Foul play
move 4: Sucker Punch
item: Assault Vest / Black Glasses (less than 2% usage on Pikalytics)
ability: Dark Aura
nature: Timid / Modest
evs: 236 HP/ 4 Def / 68 SpA / 12 SpD / 188 Spe (fixed spacing)


[SET COMMENTS]
Even though Yveltal hasn't been the most dominant legendry restricted this meta it has made a name for itself by dealing being able to deal good amount of damage while also providing good support to it's teammates (fixed spacing). Foul Play allows Yveltal to punish physical attackers heavily. Snarl lower's both of the opponents special attack while also chipping down the opponent. Sucker Punch allows Yveltal to get the edge against faster pokemon and secure safe revenge kills.
Oblivion Wing provides a way of recovery while also having STAB. Sucker Punch OHKOs Calyrex-s. Foul Play 2HKOs Rillaboom. Snarl weakens down Kyogre. The set is able to survive magnet thunderbolt from regieleki. (ok so, moves description is a bit too hasty and it has your usual syntax errors, try explaining them a bit better and respect the set order: Oblivion Wing, Snarl, Foul Play, Sucker Punch.)

Common Partners include Stakataka, The standard s10 FWG core and Regieleki (notice that not all people know what FWG is, so you should write about it). Stakataka gets rid of the fairy types that give Yveltal a hard time while also having a slow option in the fast metagame. Rillaboom, Incineroar and Urshifu-Rapid-strike allow for common VGC positioning and board control plays (work on this a bit more, explain why they benefit Yveltal). Regieleki provides speed control while also dishing out good damage. Yveltal is easily checked by boosted Xerneas, Interpid sword boosted Zacian-C and many more (so? What to do since it is easily checked by them?).
[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[PixxelsVGC, 554354]]
- Quality checked by: [[Giokio, 517038]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]

you gotta work on this a bit more, also remember to always add you Username and ID in the credits. Tell me when implemented.

 

[Giokio]

QC second encore

[SET]
name: Assault Vest
move 1: Oblivion Wing
move 2: Snarl
move 3: Foul play
move 4: Sucker Punch
item: Assault Vest
ability: Dark Aura
nature: Timid / Modest
evs: 236 HP/ 4 Def / 68 SpA / 12 SpD / 188 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Even though Yveltal hasn't been the most dominant legendary restricted this meta it has made a name for itself by being able to deal good amount of damage thanks to Dark Aura, while also providing good support to it's teammates. Oblivion Wing provides a way of recovery while also 2HKOs Bulky Urshifu-R and Focus sash Whimsicott Oblivion Wing threatens common Grass-types such as Rillaboom and Whimsicott and provides a fairly reliable source of recovery while also being able to 2HKO Bulky Urshifu-R. Snarl lowers Kyogre, Regieleki, Calyrex-S and Xerneas Special Attack Snarl is an awesome tool to lower the Special Attack of many threats such as Kyogre, Xerneas, and Palkia and has the added benefit of bypassing Calyrex-S's Substitute and inflict a OHKO. Foul Play allows Yveltal to 2HKO Adamant AV Rillaboom and Interpid Sword Boosted Zacian-C. Sucker Punch allows Yveltal to get the edge against faster Pokemon such as Calyrex-S and Regieleki, and secure safe revenge kills. This EV spread is able to live a Magnet Thunderbolt from Regieleki and Play Rough from neutral Zacian-C while also OHKOing Calyrex-S with Snarl. (I mostly added new information and tweaked the sentences to not give the GP team much of a Nightmare)

Common Partners include Stakataka,The standard Incineroar, Rillaboom, Urshifu-R and Regieleki core (you mention them later so there's no need to quote them before). Stakataka is a great partner for Yveltal, as it gets rid of the fairy types that give Yveltal a hard time while also having giving the team a slow option in the fast metagame. Rillaboom checks Tapu Fini and provides Fake Out and U-turn support to pivot and put Yveltal in a better positions, Yveltal, in exchange, can get rid of Indedee-F, that is able to change Rillaboom's Grassy Terrain. Incineroar provides Fake Out, Snarl, Parting Shot and Intimidate support to lower down the stats of your opponent to gain momentum and protect Yveltal by softening damage dealt by opponents such as Xerneas and Zacian-C, possibly turning many OHKOs into 2HKOs instead. Regieleki provides speed control while also dishing out good damage. Yveltal is easily checked by boosted Xerneas, Interpid sword boosted Zacian-C while they are countered by snarl and intimidate Incineroar. (this isn't worth mentioning tbh)

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[PixxelsVGC, 554354]]
- Quality checked by: [[Giokio, 517038]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]

Implement this one and i'll give a final read

 

[Giokio]

Edited last little things myself, QC 1/1

 

[Lumari]

remove add / fix (comments); (AC=add comma; RC=remove comma; SC=semicolon)
GP 1/1

check

[SET]
name: Assault Vest
move 1: Oblivion Wing
move 2: Snarl
move 3: Foul Play
move 4: Sucker Punch
item: Assault Vest
ability: Dark Aura
nature: Timid / Modest
evs: 236 HP/ 4 Def / 68 SpA / 12 SpD / 188 Spe




[SET COMMENTS]
Even though Yveltal hasn't isn't been the most dominant restricted Pokemon, (AC) this meta it has made a name for itself by being able for its ability to deal good amount of damage thanks to Dark Aura (RC) while also providing good support to it's team mates its teammates. Oblivion Wing threatens common Grass-types such as Rillaboom and Whimsicott, is able to 2HKO bulky Urshifu-R, (AC) and provides a fairly reliable source of recovery while also being able to 2HKO Bulky Urshifu-R. Snarl is an awesome tool to lower the Special Attack of many threats such as Kyogre, Xerneas, and Palkia and has the added benefit of bypassing Calyrex-S's Substitute and to inflict an OHKO. Foul Play allows Yveltal to 2HKO Adamant Assault Vest Rillaboom and Interpid Intrepid Sword-boosted (AH) Zacian-C. Sucker Punch allows Yveltal to get the edge upper hand against faster Pokemon such as Calyrex-S and Regieleki (RC) and secure safe revenge kills. This EV spread is able enables it to live take a Magnet Thunderbolt from Magnet Regieleki and Play Rough from a neutral-natured Zacian-C.

Stakataka is a great partner of Yveltal, as it gets to get rid of the Fairy-types (AH) that give Yveltal a hard time while also giving the team a slow option. Rillaboom checks Tapu Fini and provides Fake Out and U-turn support to put Yveltal in better positions. Incineroar provides Fake Out, Snarl, Parting Shot and Intimidate support to gain momentum and protect Yveltal by softening damage dealt by opponents such as Xerneas and Zacian-C, possibly turning many OHKOs into 2HKOs.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[ PixxelsVGC, 554354]]
- Quality checked by: [[ Giokio, 517038 ]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]

 

[Giokio]

https://www.smogon.com/dex/ss/pokemon/yveltal/vgc21/
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