Monotype Togekiss (Fairy)

[maroon]

[SET]
name: Nasty Plot Sweeper (Fairy)
move 1: Air Slash
move 2: Nasty Plot
move 3: Fire Blast
move 4: Aura Sphere / Psychic
item: Heavy-Duty Boots
ability: Serene Grace
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
ivs: 0 Atk

[SET COMMENTS]
Togekiss acts as a special setup sweeper for Fairy; with Nasty Plot and Max Airstream, Togekiss can quickly snowball by picking up Special Attack and Speed boosts. After Dynamaxing, it is able to outspeed almost everything and cause them to flinch thanks to Serene Grace. Heavy-Duty Boots allows Togekiss to ignore Stealth Rock so it can set up more easily. Air Slash is its main STAB attack, and Fire Blast and Aura Sphere allow it to break past Steel- and Rock-types that resist Air Slash. This enables it to break past many Pokemon that would otherwise give it trouble, such as Aegislash and Duraludon. Max Flare can also be used to get rid of rain and sand, allowing Togekiss to more easily threaten Pokemon like Barraskewda and Excadrill. Psychic is another option on Togekiss that enables it to break past Poison-type Pokemon such as Toxapex and Toxtricity easily. Togekiss's EV spread makes it as reliable and fast as possible.

Ribombee can set up Sticky Web for Togekiss, allowing it to outspeed grounded foes such as Durant. Grimmsnarl appreciates Togekiss's ability to get rid of physical walls such as Toxapex for it letting it more readily break through Water teams with a combination of Play Rough and Sucker Punch. Whimsicott appreciates Togekiss's ability to get rid of Steel-type Pokemon such as Corviknight and Aegislash with Fire Blast, allowing it to more easily wear down teams with Prankster Substitute + Leech Seed. Faster Steel- and Poison-type Pokemon, such as Durant and Gengar, pose a threat to Togekiss, as they can quickly come in and OHKO it. Choice Scarf Gardevoir is an excellent check to these Pokemon; with Psychic and Mystical Fire, it can get rid of a decent chunk of Togekiss's checks.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[maroon, 305839 ]]
- Fairy analysis by: [[maroon, 305839 ]]
- Quality checked by: [[Kev, 314540], [Izaya, 311872]]
- Grammar checked by: [[A Cake Wearing A Hat, 388157]]

 

[Kev]

- Explain boots
- could mention Ribombee being able to slow down the opponent with Sticky Web

rest looks good, QC 1/2

 

[Izaya]

"Togekiss acts as Fairy teams special set up sweeper, with access to Nasty Plot and Max Airstream Togekiss can quickly snowball out of control being able to flinch everything down due to its ability to accrue Speed, and Special Attack boosts"
- I know what you're trying to say here, but the ending of the sentence is really confusing. The current wording makes it seem like Togekiss can flinch everything because of Max Airstream and Nasty Plot. Make this more clear. If needed, you can consider leaving out the flinching aspect of Togekiss from the first line and bring it up in the line about Air Slash (as to why Air Slash is the most spammable move) because you don't bring up Serene Grace in name anywhere in the analysis.

Everything else is pretty good, 2/2

 

[A Cake Wearing A Hat]

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[SET]
name: Nasty Plot Sweeper (Fairy)
move 1: Air Slash
move 2: Nasty Plot
move 3: Fire Blast
move 4: Aura Sphere / Psychic
item: Heavy-Duty Boots
ability: Serene Grace
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
ivs: 0 Atk

[SET COMMENTS]
Togekiss acts as Fairy teams a special set up setup sweeper, (RC) with access to for Fairy; with Nasty Plot and Max Airstream, (AC) Togekiss can quickly snowball out of control by picking up Special Attack and Speed boosts. After Dynamax Dynamaxing, it is able to outspeed almost everything and flinch everything down cause them to flinch thanks to Serene Grace. Heavy-Duty Boots allows Togekiss to ignore Stealth Rock allowing it to set up easier so it can set up more easily. Air Slash is its main STAB attack while its coverage in, (AC) and Fire Blast and Aura Sphere allows allow it to break past Steel- and Rock-types that resist Air Slash. This enables it to break past many Pokemon that would otherwise give it trouble, such as Aegislash and Duraldon Duraludon. Max Flare can also be used to get rid of Rain and Sand rain and sand, allowing Togekiss to more easily threaten them (threaten who?). Psychic is another option on Togekiss that will enable enables it to break past Poison-type Pokemon such as Toxapex and Toxtricity easily. Togekiss's EV spread allows it to become the best sweeper making makes (calling it "the best sweeper" is a rather lofty and probably false claim) it as reliable and fast as possible.

Ribombee can set up Sticky Web for Togekiss, (AC) allowing it to outspeed grounded foes such as Durant. Grimmsnarl appreciates Togekiss's ability to get rid of physical walls such as Toxapex for it such as Toxapex, allowing it to letting it (just doing *something* to fix the redundant sentence structure) more readily break through Water teams with a combination of Play Rough and Sucker Punch. Whimsicott appreciates Togekiss's ability to get rid of Steel-type Pokemon such as Corviknight and Aegislash with Fire Blast, allowing it to more easily wear down teams with Prankster Substitute + Leech Seed. Faster Steel Steel- and Poison-type Pokemon, such as Gengar and Durant and Gengar, pose a threat to Togekiss, (AC) as they can quickly come in and OHKO it. Choice Scarf Gardevoir is an excellent check to these Pokemon; (ASC) with STAB Psychic and coverage in Mystical Fire, (AC) it can get rid of a decent chunk of Togekiss's checks.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[maroon, 305839 ]]
- Fairy analysis by: [[maroon, 305839 ]]
- Quality checked by: [[Kev, 314540], [Izaya, 311872]]
- Grammar checked by: [[A Cake Wearing A Hat, 388157]]

GP 1/1

 

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