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Well, in my opinion warstories try to give the reader a look inside the player's head as they battle. it's more like a sharing of experiences than merely a recounting of an event. but to each their own I suppose.
comments were great, match quality was great, format was bearable (=great) and nothing horrible sticking out make this a once-in-a-while great warstory. Excellent for your first try, and Silent Verse's comments were superb too.