A weird way to sweep (Shoddy Warstory)

[SMZ]

I've been making new teams on Shoddy for fun, and the fact I've grown bored outta my original (main) team. I decided to give my SS team another battle, using the ladder, and it turned to be a good battle.
My (MMS's) team (in order of appearance):

e j fire2's team (also in order of appearance):

Rules: Ladder Match, Sleep Clause, Freeze Clause, OHKO Clause, Evasion Clause, Species Clause, Strict Damage Clause.

Just for easier reading (-) means summed stall/long battle, SS, Stealth Rock, Poison and confusion are all taken out (unless they're for necessary things such as a Pokemon fainting due to them) and I'm in blue, and my opponent (e j fire2)'s red, what can I say more, other than let the battle begin!

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MMS sent out NBNEV0.2 (lvl 100 Porygon2).
e j fire2 sent out Cant touch this (lvl 100 Dusknoir ?).
NBNEV0.2 traced Cant touch this's Pressure!
NBNEV0.2 used Magic Coat.
NBNEV0.2 created a barrier!
Cant touch this used Toxic.
Cant touch this's attack missed!
NBNEV0.2 used Magic Coat.
NBNEV0.2 created a barrier!
Cant touch this used Toxic.
Cant touch this was badly poisoned!
Cant touch this's Lum Berry cured its Poison!
NBNEV0.2 used Magic Coat.
NBNEV0.2 created a barrier!
Cant touch this used Shadow Sneak.
It doesn't affect NBNEV0.2...
(-)
NBNEV0.2 is hurt by poison!
NBNEV0.2 lost 62% of its health.
MMS's NBNEV0.2 fainted.
(5-6)

I start out with Magic Coat just in case he has Toxic/WoW, and even though he had Toxic, he had Lum Berry as well, and after I got poisoned, it basically became pressure PP chip off until P2 fainted (summed it up for you, it basically was Shadow Sneak/Recover/Ice Beam/Pain Split/Poisen worsen..until P2 fainted, both had Leftovers BTW).

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MMS switched in Aragon (lvl 100 Skarmory ?).
Aragon used Stealth Rock.
Pointed stones float in the air around your foe's team!
Cant touch this used Toxic.
It doesn't affect Aragon...
Cant touch this used Toxic.
Cant touch this's attack missed!
Aragon used Whirlwind.
e j fire2 switched in mr FRost (lvl 100 Weavile ?).
mr FRost used Ice Punch.
Aragon lost 24% of its health.
Aragon used Whirlwind.

Since he probably doesn't have WoW, I switch in Skarmory, had the chance to set up the rocks and Whirlwind him, I don't know why he used Toxic twice, maybe he expected a switch or wanted a Whirlwind ASAP, as Weavile comes in, I Whirlwind it just in case a fire counter switches in.

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e j fire2 switched in the killer (lvl 100 Charizard ?).
MMS switched in Godzilla the Pokemon (lvl 100 Tyranitar ?).
Godzilla the Pokemon's Sand Stream whipped up a sandstorm!
A sandstorm brewed!
the killer used Outrage.
the killer went on a rampage!
Godzilla the Pokemon lost 26% of its health.
the killer lost 10% of its health.
the killer used Outrage.
Godzilla the Pokemon lost 25% of its health.
Godzilla the Pokemon used Stone Edge.
It's super effective!
the killer lost 24% of its health.
e j fire2's the killer fainted.
e j fire2 switched in blade (lvl 100 Garchomp ?).
blade used Earthquake.
It's super effective!
Godzilla the Pokemon lost 49% of its health.
MMS's Godzilla the Pokemon fainted.
(4-5)

I ended up bringing in Charizard, luckily SR chips off 50%, and T-Tar isn't a real counter, but I hoped it was Physical, and it did 2LO Outrages, which T-Tar survived and SE for the SE KO XD.. and then a threat came (Garchomp), I had to sac T-Tar if I wanted to revenge kill.

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MMS switched in LOST.M (lvl 100 Metagross).
LOST.M used Ice Punch.
LOST.M's attack missed!
blade used Earthquake.
It's super effective!
LOST.M lost 87% of its health.
LOST.M used Ice Punch.
LOST.M's attack missed!
blade used Earthquake.
It's super effective!
LOST.M lost 13% of its health.
MMS's LOST.M fainted.
(3-5)

My Metagross was scarfed, so unless his Garchomp is also scarfed, I'm good, but Ice Punch missed didn't miss once, but twice! FUCK YOU SAND VEIL...

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MMS switched in Aragon (lvl 100 Skarmory ?).
blade used Outrage.
blade went on a rampage!
It's not very effective...
Aragon lost 19% of its health.
Aragon used Whirlwind.
e j fire2 switched in mr FRost (lvl 100 Weavile ?).
mr FRost is exerting its pressure!
e j fire2 switched in Kitty (lvl 100 Espeon ?).
Aragon used Roost.
Aragon restored 43% of its health.

I'm worried about Garchomp (having no real way of countering it now), I just whirlwind it while it Outrages, bringing in Weavile as he switches to Espeon (Stealth Rock, is really helping me, and will better later in battle).

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MMS switched in PinKRoStein (lvl 100 Cradily ?).
Kitty used Psychic.
PinKRoStein lost 27% of its health.
e j fire2 switched in TreeHater (lvl 100 Torterra ?).
PinKRoStein used Confuse Ray.
TreeHater used Earthquake.
PinKRoStein lost 38% of its health.
PinKRoStein used Toxic.
(-)
TreeHater is hurt by poison!
TreeHater lost 21% of its health.
e j fire2's TreeHater fainted.
(3-4)

My Cradily has Confuse Ray for Phaze + annoyance, and it helped me take out Tor (with poisen being main reason of course, and the summed up part was Rock Slide/EQ/Recover/Poisen/Confusion until Tor fainted).

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e j fire2 switched in blade (lvl 100 Garchomp ?).
blade used Outrage.
blade went on a rampage!
PinKRoStein lost 47% of its health.
PinKRoStein used Confuse Ray.
blade became confused!
blade is confused!
blade used Outrage.
PinKRoStein lost 54% of its health.
PinKRoStein used Recover.
PinKRoStein restored 50% of its health.
blade snapped out of confusion!
blade used Outrage.
PinKRoStein lost 48% of its health.
PinKRoStein used Toxic.
blade was badly poisoned!
blade's rampage ended.
blade became confused!
MMS switched in Aragon (lvl 100 Skarmory ?).
It hurt itself in its confusion!
blade snapped out of confusion!
blade used Outrage.
blade went on a rampage!
It's not very effective...
Aragon lost 18% of its health.
Aragon used Brave Bird.
blade lost 35% of its health.
Aragon was hit by recoil!
Aragon lost 12% of its health.
MMS switched in PinKRoStein (lvl 100 Cradily ?).
blade used Outrage.
PinKRoStein lost 19% of its health.
MMS's PinKRoStein fainted.
blade is hurt by poison!
blade lost 1% of its health.
e j fire2's blade fainted.
(2-3)

Don't know why I switched in Cradily again, but atleast Garchomp died (Toxic + Confuse Ray FTW!)

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MMS switched in AraSto (lvl 100 Torterra ?).
e j fire2 switched in mr FRost (lvl 100 Weavile ?).
MMS switched in Aragon (lvl 100 Skarmory ?).
mr FRost used Ice Punch.
Aragon lost 20% of its health.
mr FRost used Brick Break.
Aragon lost 14% of its health.
Aragon used Roost.
Aragon restored 50% of its health.
mr FRost used Ice Punch.
Aragon lost 20% of its health.
Aragon used Whirlwind.

---Switch/Whirlwind

e j fire2 switched in Kitty (lvl 100 Espeon ?).
Kitty used Psychic.
It's not very effective...
Aragon lost 37% of its health.
Aragon used Roost.
Aragon restored 50% of its health.
Kitty used Psychic.
It's not very effective...
Aragon lost 38% of its health.
Aragon used Whirlwind.

---Another Switch/Whirlwind

e j fire2 switched in Cant touch this (lvl 100 Dusknoir ?).
Aragon used Roost.
Aragon restored 50% of its health.
Cant touch this used Pain Split.
Cant touch this restored 18% of its health.
Aragon lost 17% of its health.
Cant touch this used Shadow Sneak.
It's not very effective...
Aragon lost 4% of its health.
Aragon used Whirlwind.
e j fire2 switched in mr FRost (lvl 100 Weavile ?).
Pointed stones dug into mr FRost.
mr FRost lost 7% of its health.
e j fire2's mr FRost fainted.
(2-2 tie)

Another switch/Whirlwind, and Weavile dying to Stealth Rock :). Now to deal with Espeon and Dusknoir.

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e j fire2 switched in Kitty (lvl 100 Espeon ?).
Kitty used Calm Mind.
Kitty's special attack was raised.
Kitty's special defence was raised.
Aragon used Roost.
Aragon restored 31% of its health.
Kitty used Calm Mind.
Kitty's special attack was raised.
Kitty's special defence was raised.
Aragon used Whirlwind.

I Roosted and Whirlwinded while it set up 2CMS (thank god it didn't attack), so now let's just Whirlwind them away so Stealth Rock can kill Espeon (lower than 50%) and chipp off Dusknoir's HP.

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e j fire2 switched in Cant touch this (lvl 100 Dusknoir ?).
Cant touch this used Protect.
Cant touch this protected itself!
(-)
Cant touch this used Pain Split.
Cant touch this restored 5% of its health.
Aragon lost 4% of its health.
Aragon used Whirlwind.
e j fire2 switched in Kitty (lvl 100 Espeon ?).
Pointed stones dug into Kitty.
Kitty lost 12% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
Kitty is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Kitty lost 1% of its health.
e j fire2's Kitty fainted.
(2-1)

Just like What I had said, I decided to Whirlwind to let Espeon die to Stealth Rock and SS (the sum is that Dusk kept using Pain Split, and Skarm Brave Bird/Roost)...now only Dusknoir is left..

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e j fire2 switched in Cant touch this (lvl 100 Dusknoir ?).
Cant touch this used Shadow Sneak.
It's not very effective...
Aragon lost 4% of its health.
Aragon used Brave Bird.
Cant touch this lost 30% of its health.
Aragon was hit by recoil!
Aragon lost 7% of its health.
Aragon used Brave Bird.
Cant touch this lost 29% of its health.
Aragon was hit by recoil!
Aragon lost 7% of its health.
Cant touch this used Pain Split.
Cant touch this restored 26% of its health.
Aragon lost 18% of its health.
Aragon used Brave Bird.
Cant touch this lost 31% of its health.
Aragon was hit by recoil!
Aragon lost 7% of its health.
Cant touch this used Pain Split.
Cant touch this restored 13% of its health.
Aragon lost 9% of its health.
Aragon used Brave Bird.
Cant touch this lost 18% of its health.
e j fire2's Cant touch this fainted.
MMS wins!
MMS: gg
e j fire2: good battle
(2-0 I win!)

And so, Skarmory killed the killer (grim) by being Brave (Brave Bird), and able to rest (Roost)..Skarmory sweep! .. I guess

Pros:
* Cradily with Toxic and Confuse Ray for being awesome.
* Skarmory for setting up rocks and killing Dusknoir.
* One of the few battles I enjoyed.

Cons:
* Porygon2 didn't do anything (except for burning Dusk's PPs)
* Sand Veil for making Ice Punch missing twice..
* This battle didn't have much prediction (I killed many things due to Toxic/Confusion/SS/Stealth Rock).

 

[Jugrenae]

It was a bit dull reading it. More of a log than a warstory. Nice win at least.

 

[SMZ]

Well I did try to sum it as much as possible (removing standard things/summing some boring to read things), thanks for C+C.

 

[Rhykune]

Good Battle, but I don't like the (-)'s at all. Could you replace them with say, 20 turns of stall later: or something, because I was really confused at the beginning.

EDIT: Yay 400 posts...

 

[Jugrenae]

The battle seemed nice, but the way it was presented wasn't the best. But of course, I don't do warstories so I feel out of place...

 

[SMZ]

Good Battle, but I don't like the (-)'s at all. Could you replace them with say, 20 turns of stall later: or something, because I was really confused at the beginning.

EDIT: Yay 400 posts...

Well with the sum, and it seems long, and imagine the long stall turns, at the beginning it was basically PP burn (Dusknoir using Shadow Sneak, and my P2 using Recover, until the poison finally killed my virtual duck), and thanks Jugrenae, I'll try to improve the style.

 

[Rhykune]

Well with the sum, and it seems long, and imagine the long stall turns, at the beginning it was basically PP burn (Dusknoir using Shadow Sneak, and my P2 using Recover, until the poison finally killed my virtual duck), and thanks Jugrenae, I'll try to improve the style.

I don't think you got what I meant. Or I'm just reading this wrong but w.e... I meant that instead of putting (-) which doesn't make much sense, put something like however many turns of stall later in the brackets.

 

[SMZ]

I don't think you got what I meant. Or I'm just reading this wrong but w.e... I meant that instead of putting (-) which doesn't make much sense, put something like however many turns of stall later in the brackets.

I don't think it'll matter, the main reason I put the (-) is just to note that there should be a long, boring stall/turns, but thanks for your opinions anyway.

 

[scorchedsky]

People actually use Outrage Charizard? Oh boy...Toxic against Skarm twice? Wow...misplays by your opponent all around.

 

[SMZ]

People actually use Outrage Charizard? Oh boy...Toxic against Skarm twice? Wow...misplays by your opponent all around.

Yeah, I've seen outraging Charizard more than you can imagine (and this one was Life Orbed), as for Toxic twice, I wondered about that as well, he either didn't know, or mispredict.