A Second Chance->WARSTORY: Shady vs. Zarmak

A variation of this war story was recently closed. The two are nothing alike, as i have completely redone it. Please don't let that stop you from enjoying my work.

Before i start, i would like to say that i've been lurking here for about a year, but i've had shoddy for a mere 3 days. So, if you're the type that enjoys smashing n00bs (lol) and posting comments like LuRk mOaR! don't read this. I would like to receive constructive criticism and comments that promote discussion and learning. Pretty much anything but that kind of nonsense :P [rant over ;) ]
That said:

Shady Fellow vs. Zarmak


My Squad (in no particular order):


Jirachi Celebi Gengar Gyarados Tyranitar Blissey

His Squad (In order of appearance)


Gengar Tyranitar Foretress Salamence Heracross Blissey


A Couple Notes: i saw this format somewhere and really liked it

All nicknames will be replaced by the actual name of the pokemon
If two of the same pokemon are on the battle field
The names of my pokes will be in Green
Names in Red will represent a burned pokemon
Names in orange will represent paralyzed pokemon(yellow is hard to see)
Names in Blue will represent sleeping pokemon

LET'S GET STARTED!

Rules: Evasion Clause, Freeze Clause, Sleep Clause, Timed Battle

Zarmak sent out Gengar (lvl 100 Gengar ?).
Shady Fellow sent out Lil' Fella (lvl 100 Jirachi).

Man, i dislike gengar leads. I switched really didn't think i had an option here, so i switched to
my most suitable counter Blissey. For those of you that are thinking i should have absorbed the
hypnosis and then switched, i didn't really want to eat a STABed shadow ball.

GMX has entered the room.
Shady Fellow switched in Try Me (lvl 100 Blissey ?).
Gengar used Hypnosis.
Blissey fell asleep!

Alright, this i can handle. I was kind of hoping that he would miss, but i
have (or had as you'll soon see) bad luck. Now i have two options:stay
in for the focus blast, or worse focus punch, or switch to something immune.
luckily he didn't predict my switch.
---
GMX: EPIC BATTLE!!!
americo71 has entered the room.
Zarmak: lol
GMX: Lets see

Shady Fellow switched in Don't I look cool? (lvl 100 Gengar ?).
Gengar used Focus Blast.
It doesn't affect Gengar

Ha! i don't think i'll be letting bliss die so early. I fooled him into wasting a move
by switching to an immune pokemon. now i'll just sleep him and get ready for the swe...
---
Gengar used Hypnosis.
Gengar's attack missed!
Gengar used Hypnosis.
Gengar fell asleep!

...or not. Damn! How unfortunate, now i'm between a rock and a hard place. i can switch
and let something else get pounded, or i can hope to wake up and hit him first. i realize that
i could have shadow balled and killed him, but i thought he might be faster. i also realize that
blissey could easily eat the shadow ball, but a sleeping Gar is about as useful as a poopy flavored lollipop:naughty:
---
Zarmak: luck h4x
Shady Fellow: haha
Shady Fellow: i'm pretty unlucky
GMX: That's reminds me.. I need to make a suicide Gengar.
Zarmak: same here
americo71 has left the room.

Gengar is fast asleep!
Gengar used Shadow Ball.
It's super effective!
Gengar lost 153% of its health.
Shady Fellow's Gengar fainted.

I decided to try and let gengar wake up and kill his since i was faster. No sir, no luck for me.
---
Shady Fellow switched in Try Me (lvl 100 Blissey ?).
Gengar used Hypnosis.
Blissey fell asleep!
Blissey is fast asleep!

C'mon, three in a row! I'm not sure what the accuracy on hypnosis is, but i know it
usually doesn't hit three times in a row.
---
Shady Fellow: no misses
Shady Fellow: that kills

Gengar used Focus Blast.
Gengar's attack missed!
Blissey is fast asleep!

Now i stay in, knowing that he doesn't run a focus punch set. I decided to let bliss
try to wake up and t-wave his sweeper. this is funny because we both ran into bad luck.
---
Zarmak: i <3 my gengar
Gengar used Focus Blast.
Gengar's attack missed!
Blissey is fast asleep!

I'm asleep but he missed. Please, Gods of Luck, all i need is...
---
Shady Fellow: i love mine too
GMX: lol
Shady Fellow: but it's dead
Shady Fellow: murderer
Shady Fellow: lol
Zarmak: lol
Gengar used Focus Blast.
Gengar's attack missed!
Blissey woke up!
Blissey used Thunder Wave.
Gengar is paralysed! It may be unable to move!

... For that to happen! yes, finally i caught a break. More importantly, now i have
crippled a powerful sweeper.
---

GMX: lol
Blissey used Flamethrower.
Gengar lost 33% of its health.
Gengar is paralysed! It can't move!

If you didn't notice, i took, ahem, borrowed the Blissey, Jirachi, and Celebi sets
from Obi's RMT. they all work wonderfully, as one would expect from a man of
such brilliance. Now he has to make a choice, make a switch and potentially
get t-waved, or let gengar die to my pink whore.
---
Zarmak: wow
Blissey used Flamethrower.
Gengar lost 34% of its health.
Gengar is paralysed! It can't move!

I figured that he would make the same choice i made so i used flamethrower
to finish him off. i was about to unleash the final blast when...
---
Zarmak switched in Tyranitar (lvl 100 Tyranitar ?).
Tyranitar's Sand Stream whipped up a sandstorm!
A sandstorm brewed!
Blissey used Flamethrower.
It's not very effective...
Tyranitar lost 6% of its health.
Tyranitar was burned!

He switched in tyranitar. why would you risk being burned just to save a paralyzed
gengar? oh well, he certainly paid the price for his stupidity here.
---
Zarmak switched in Gengar (lvl 100 Gengar ?).
Shady Fellow switched in Bad Ass (lvl 100 Gyarados ?).
Gyarados's intimidate cut Gengar's attack!

i switched in my gyarados to setup on his weakened rock titan, only to be met
by his crippled ghost. this would be simple enough. just a simple waterfall and...
---
Gyarados used Dragon Dance.
Gyarados's attack was raised.
Gyarados's speed was raised.
Gengar used Thunderbolt.
It's super effective!
Gyarados lost 118% of its health.
Shady Fellow's
Gyarados fainted.

Noooo! DD? i guess i didn't press down on waterfall hard enough. wow, so my
tauntdos didn't get to shine. what a waste because of my stupidity.
---
Shady Fellow: wow
Zarmak: good read
Zarmak: lol
Shady Fellow: what was i thinking

Shady Fellow switched in Grande Amigo (lvl 100 Tyranitar ?).
Grande Amigo's Sand Stream whipped up a sandstorm!
Zarmak: i was expecting twave Shady Fellow: you're already burned
Tyranitar used Pursuit.
It's super effective!
Gengar lost 265% of its health.
Zarmak's Gengar fainted.
The sandstorm rages.

Upon losing my bulky sweeper, i decided it was time to end this phantom's reign of terror.
Gengar, say hi to CB pursuit. there would be no more of this switching nonsense

---
Shady Fellow: death

Zarmak switched in Forretress (lvl 100 Forretress ?).
GMX: g2g gg both you
Shady Fellow switched in Lil' Fella (lvl 100 Jirachi).
Forretress used Spikes.
Spikes were scattered everywhere!
Spikes were scattered around the foe's team!
The sandstorm rages.

so since i couldn't risk ol' forry exploding on me, i switched to my paraflinch
jirachi to absorb the blow. unfortunately he was able to lay down a layer of spikes.
---
Zarmak: this is an awesome game
GMX has left the room.

Zarmak switched in Tyranitar (lvl 100 Tyranitar ?).
Tyranitar's Sand Stream whipped up a sandstorm!
Jirachi used Stealth Rock.
Pointed stones float in the air around your foe's team!
The sandstorm rages.

i figured that he would switch, so i used the opportunity to set up my own
form of passive damage. he must have forgotten that his tar was burned.
well, i knew i had nothing to fear, so i attacked.
---
Shady Fellow: yep
Jirachi used Body Slam.
It's not very effective...
Tyranitar lost 9% of its health.
Tyranitar used Stone Edge.
It's not very effective...
Jirachi lost 14% of its health.
Not sure exactly why he would
use stone edge, a 2x resisted attack, with a choice band. oh
well, maybe he thought that i would switch again.
---
Choice Band prohibits the use of this move.
Shady Fellow: hmm...not cb
Shady Fellow: not dd
Shady Fellow: not scarf
Shady Fellow: or maybe it is cb
Shady Fellow: jk
Zarmak: phone
Zarmak: i need a minute
Shady Fellow: alright
Alright my ass, who takes a break in the middle of an epic Battle!?!?!?!1? Lol
Choice Band prohibits the use of this move.
Shady Fellow: don't forget about the time thing in the corner

Zarmak switched in Forretress (lvl 100 Forretress ?).
Pointed stones dug into Forretress.
Forretress lost 12% of its health.
Jirachi used Body Slam.
It's not very effective...
A critical hit!
Forretress lost 11% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
---
Jirachi used Body Slam.
It's not very effective...
Forretress lost 5% of its health.
Forretress is paralysed! It may be unable to move!
Forretress used Earthquake.
It's super effective!
Jirachi lost 30% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.

Ah, serene grace. how, well... serene. i figured that it wouldn't hurt to
paralyze another member of his team, as revealed by Obi.
---
Jirachi used Zen Headbutt.
It's not very effective...
Forretress lost 8% of its health.
Forretress used Earthquake.
It's super effective!
Jirachi lost 27% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.

i thought he might switch or explode, either way i couldn't leave now, no
other members of my team liked taking earthquakes or explosions. i decided
to make sure that he was in Ko range for ttar's eq.
---
Jirachi used Wish.
Jirachi made a wish!
Forretress used Earthquake.
It's super effective!
Jirachi lost 30% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
---
Zarmak switched in Tyranitar (lvl 100 Tyranitar ?).
Tyranitar's Sand Stream whipped up a sandstorm!
Pointed stones dug into Tyranitar.
Tyranitar lost 12% of its health.
Shady Fellow switched in Tyranitar (lvl 100 Tyranitar ?).
Tyranitar's Sand Stream whipped up a sandstorm!
Tyranitarwas hurt by Spikes!
Tyranitarlost 12% of its health.
The wish came true!
Tyranitarrestored 50% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.

I decided to heal up my own tyranitar so that it could easily recover from the forry eq.
i don't know why but he switched in his own scarred behemoth. maybe he was going to
try and crunch me to death? seriously, this thing was merely a shadow of it's former
self:pirate:, ripe for the KOing.
---
Tyranitar used Earthquake.
It's super effective!
Tyranitarlost 47% of its health.
Tyranitarused Earthquake.
It's super effective!
Tyranitar lost 115% of its health.
Zarmak's Tyranitar fainted.
The sandstorm rages.

I'm not sure how his was faster, but i'm sure glad i wished with jirachi. Otherwise
i would have been toast:toast:. C'mon, i just had to use that smiley ;)
---
Zarmak switched in Heracross (lvl 100 Heracross ?).
Pointed stones dug into Heracross.
Heracross lost 12% of its health.
Shady Fellow switched in Jirachi (lvl 100 Jirachi).
Jirachi' was hurt by Spikes!
Jirachi lost 12% of its health.
Heracross used Close Combat.
Jirachi lost 64% of its health.
Shady Fellow's
Jirachi fainted.
Heracross's defence was lowered.
Heracross's special defence was lowered.
The sandstorm rages.

well i couldn't let ttar die just yet, so i predicted a megahorn, probably the
more prudent choice, and switched to jirachi. seriously, with the knowledge
he had of the rest of my team why would he risk the defense drops just to
kill one pokemon?
---
Zarmak: lol
Shady Fellow switched in Celebi (lvl 100 Celebi).
was hurt by Spikes!
Celebi lost 12% of its health.
Choice Band prohibits the use of this move.
Choice Band prohibits the use of this move. <- he obviously hasn't accepted this item yet. lol

Zarmak switched in Salamence (lvl 100 Salamence ?).
Salamence's intimidate cut Pixie's attack!
Pointed stones dug into Salamence.
Salamence lost 25% of its health.
Celebi used Thunder Wave.
Salamence is paralysed! It may be unable to move!
The sandstorm rages.

Now i was at the advantage, i knew that he was CB, so i t-waved the switch.
man did this work out well. now it was time for Obi's dragonslayer celebi to work
it's magic.
---
Shady Fellow: that sucks hardcoreCelebi used Hidden Power.
It's super effective!
Salamence lost 77% of its health.
Zarmak's Salamence fainted.
The sandstorm rages.

with the help of stealth rock, i scored a one hit KO on his dragon. Haha HP Ice FTW!

Alright a quick recap: me-> Celebi, Ttar, and bliss... all megahorn weak
him-> a CB hera, a crippled Forry, and one unknown
---
Zarmak switched in Heracross (lvl 100 Heracross ?).
Pointed stones dug into Heracross.
Heracross lost 12% of its health.
Shady Fellow: dragon slayer=celebi lol
Zarmak: -.-

Heracross used Megahorn.

Heracross's attack missed!


Celebi used Thunder Wave.
Heracross is paralysed! It may be unable to move!
The sandstorm rages.

Yes!!!!! Omg what a great time for a miss. with that i should have this thing in the bag. now
i'll just make sure that he's in ttar eq KO range.

---
Shady Fellow: you would have won if that had hit
Zarmak: told you i had bad luck
Shady Fellow: that really sucks
Celebi used Hidden Power.
Heracross lost 21% of its health.
Heracross used Megahorn.
It's super effective!
A critical hit!
Celebi lost 765% of its health. -> wow, a 4xgutscritSTABBED megahorn
Shady Fellow's Celebi fainted. -> that's a little overkill
The sandstorm rages.
---
Zarmak: meh
Shady Fellow: 765%haha

Shady Fellow switched in Tyranitar (lvl 100 Tyranitar ?).
Tyranitar 's Sand Stream whipped up a sandstorm!
Tyranitar was hurt by Spikes!
Tyranitar lost 12% of its health.
Tyranitar used Earthquake.
It's not very effective...
Heracross lost 45% of its health.
Zarmak's Heracross fainted.
The sandstorm rages.

alright, i'm faster so i use eq to get him and forry if it tries to switch into crunch.
those damned spikes put me into KO range for Forry though.
---
Zarmak switched in Forretress (lvl 100 Forretress ?).
Pointed stones dug into Forretress.
Forretress lost 12% of its health.
Tyranitar used Earthquake.
Forretress lost 32% of its health.
Forretress used Earthquake.
It's super effective!
Tyranitar lost 32% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
Forretress's leftovers restored its health a little!
Forretress restored 6% of its health.

---
Tyranitar used Earthquake.
Forretress lost 32% of its health.
Forretress used Earthquake.
It's super effective!
Tyranitar lost 37% of its health.
Shady Fellow's
Tyranitar fainted.
The sandstorm rages.
Forretress's leftovers restored its health a little!
Forretress restored 6% of its health.

Two eq volleys later my valiant killer died. but not before severely hampering
his bagworms hp. as a side note, without those lefties it would have died
anyway, and i would have won this thing out right.
---
Shady Fellow switched in
Blissey(lvl 100 Blissey ?).
Blissey was hurt by Spikes!
Blissey lost 12% of its health.
Blissey used Flamethrower.
It's super effective!
Forretress lost 119% of its health.
Zarmak's Forretress fainted.
The sandstorm rages.

I could never thank Obi enough for his help with this moveset. thanks to
him i KO'd his wall. now i think i'm set, and the only thing that could possibly
stop me is ...
---
Zarmak switched in Blissey (lvl 100 Blissey ?).
Pointed stones dug into Blissey.
Blissey lost 12% of its health.

NOOOOOO! not that, anything but that. now we have to have a giant stall war.

Try Me used Thunder Wave.
Blissey is paralysed! It may be unable to move!
Blissey used Thunder Wave.
Try Me is paralysed! It may be unable to move!
The sandstorm rages.

to avoid having you read this giant wall of text, i'll only highlight the critical exchanges.
---
Shady Fellow: lol
Zarmak: wow
Try Me used Grass Knot.
Blissey lost 6% of its health.
Blissey is paralysed! It can't move!
The sandstorm rages.
Try Me is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Try Me lost 6% of its health.
Blissey is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Blissey lost 6% of its health.
Try Me's leftovers restored its health a little!
Try Me restored 6% of its health.
Blissey's leftovers restored its health a little!
Blissey restored 6% of its health.
---
Try Me used Flamethrower.
Blissey lost 7% of its health.
Blissey used Seismic Toss.
Try Me lost 14% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
Try Me is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Try Me lost 6% of its health.
Blissey is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Blissey lost 6% of its health.
Try Me's leftovers restored its health a little!
Try Me restored 6% of its health.
Blissey's leftovers restored its health a little!
Blissey restored 6% of its health.
---
Try Me is paralysed! It can't move!
Blissey used Seismic Toss.
Try Me lost 14% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
Try Me is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Try Me lost 6% of its health.
Blissey is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Blissey lost 6% of its health.
Try Me's leftovers restored its health a little!
Try Me restored 6% of its health.
Blissey's leftovers restored its health a little!
Blissey restored 6% of its health.
---
Try Me used Flamethrower.
Blissey lost 7% of its health.
Blissey used Seismic Toss.
Try Me lost 14% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
Try Me is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Try Me lost 6% of its health.
Blissey is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Blissey lost 6% of its health.
Try Me's leftovers restored its health a little!
Try Me restored 6% of its health.
Blissey's leftovers restored its health a little!
Blissey restored 6% of its health.
---
Zarmak: draw?
Shady Fellow: you should win-
i was referring to the megahorn miss
Zarmak: this may take forever
Shady Fellow: lets do a couple more then draw
Shady Fellow: aight>
Zarmak: kk

Shady Fellow: just in case
Shady Fellow: gg
Try Me is paralysed! It can't move!
Blissey used Seismic Toss.
Try Me lost 14% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
Try Me is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Try Me lost 6% of its health.
Blissey is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Blissey lost 6% of its health.
Try Me's leftovers restored its health a little!
Try Me restored 6% of its health.
Blissey's leftovers restored its health a little!
Blissey restored 6% of its health.
---
Zarmak: definitaly a great game
Try Me used Softboiled.
Try Me restored 50% of its health.
Blissey used Seismic Toss.
Try Me lost 14% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
Try Me is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Try Me lost 6% of its health.
Blissey is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Blissey lost 6% of its health.
Try Me's leftovers restored its health a little!
Try Me restored 6% of its health.
Blissey's leftovers restored its health a little!
Blissey restored 6% of its health.
---
Shady Fellow: wish i knew how to do a warstory
Shady Fellow: sigh
Shady Fellow: this would be great
Zarmak: lol i do!
Shady Fellow: want to do it
Zarmak: we can try
Zarmak: sure
Shady Fellow: alrighty
Shady Fellow: to make it better
Shady Fellow: i'll even let you win
Shady Fellow: lol

Try Me is paralysed! It can't move!
Blissey used Seismic Toss.
Try Me lost 14% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
Try Me is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Try Me lost 6% of its health.
Blissey is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Blissey lost 6% of its health.
Try Me's leftovers restored its health a little!
Try Me restored 6% of its health.
Blissey's leftovers restored its health a little!
Blissey restored 6% of its health.
---
Zarmak: lets finish
Zarmak: i don't want to have forfeit matches
Try Me used Flamethrower.
Blissey lost 7% of its health.
Blissey used Seismic Toss.
Try Me lost 14% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
Try Me is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Try Me lost 6% of its health.
Blissey is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Blissey lost 6% of its health.
Try Me's leftovers restored its health a little!
Try Me restored 6% of its health.
Blissey's leftovers restored its health a little!
Blissey restored 6% of its health.
---
Shady Fellow: i mean i won't softboil
Try Me used Flamethrower.
Blissey lost 8% of its health.
Blissey used Seismic Toss.
Try Me lost 14% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
Try Me is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Try Me lost 6% of its health.
Blissey is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Blissey lost 6% of its health.
Try Me's leftovers restored its health a little!
Try Me restored 6% of its health.
Blissey's leftovers restored its health a little!
Blissey restored 6% of its health.
---
Zarmak: i had 11 people forfeit on me yesterday
Shady Fellow: yeah i hate that
Zarmak: my gengar went through 5 of 6 pokemonm
Shady Fellow: so is me doing this cool
Zarmak: and he quit
Zarmak: well
Shady Fellow: or would you rather have the stall war?
Zarmak: its a draw k
Shady Fellow: okay

Zarmak: stall war
Try Me used Flamethrower.
Blissey lost 8% of its health.
Blissey is paralysed! It can't move!
The sandstorm rages.
Try Me is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Try Me lost 6% of its health.
Blissey is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Blissey lost 6% of its health.
Try Me's leftovers restored its health a little!
Try Me restored 6% of its health.
Blissey's leftovers restored its health a little!
Blissey restored 6% of its health.
---
Try Me used Flamethrower.
Blissey lost 7% of its health.
Blissey used Seismic Toss.
Try Me lost 14% of its health.
The sandstorm rages.
Try Me is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Try Me lost 6% of its health.
Blissey is buffetted by the sandstorm!
Blissey lost 6% of its health.
Try Me's leftovers restored its health a little!
Try Me restored 6% of its health.
Blissey's leftovers restored its health a little!
Blissey restored 6% of its health.
---
Shady Fellow: gg
Zarmak: stall war
Shady Fellow: excellent game

Try Me used Flamethrower.
Blissey lost 8% of its health.
Blissey used Seismic Toss.
Try Me lost 14% of its health.
Shady Fellow's Try Me fainted.
---
Zarmak wins!
Zarmak: yepo
Zarmak: gg
Shady Fellow: so how do we make a war story?

i for one thought that this battle, although it has some beginner mistakes
sprinkled in, was excellent. we both put forth our best efforts to make this
battle one to remember.

Props: Celebi the Dragon Slayer
Hera missed the winning megahorn
Ttar raped
I effectively paralyzed half of his team, showing what a difference
that makes

Slops: I let Gyarados die
There were some times that i made noobish moves
Blissey vs. Blissey (dumb bitches :P)
Lefties saved his forry, taking away the ttar sweep
A good bit of hax plagued this battle

In closure i would like to thank all of the contributing members of smogon.
Thanks to you, i, a tenth grade three sport varsity starter and state champ wrestler, was
able to pick up this great game. i'm one of the least likely types of people to play. This just goes to show that anyone, and i mean anyone can
enter and enjoy the wonderful world of pokemon.
 

Stallion

Tree Young
is a Tiering Contributoris a Battle Simulator Moderator Alumnusis a Three-Time Past WCoP Champion
I don't like the fact that you stayed in this story for so long based on luck, you left your sleeping Gar it when it wasn't sleeping for even a turn and how your opponent didnt sac a half dead burned Gengar. Skipped over the stall war aswell.
 
Umm...I lost. That unfair hax is why i didn't partake in the full stall and gave him the victory
i told you it has some mistakes. lol
your comment is the kind of thing i want so that i can learn
thank you
 

Stallion

Tree Young
is a Tiering Contributoris a Battle Simulator Moderator Alumnusis a Three-Time Past WCoP Champion
Thats fine, and I'm sorry if I came across as a douche. I should've come across as more constructive, but things like this can help you learn both with writing warstories, and battling itself. Good luck in future.
 
I suppose it was fairly well written, although I usually prefer War Stories that involve skill, instead of luck, but maybe thats just me. This was your first try so I don't want to put it down any further, hopefully your next one will be a lot better.
 
i do too. for this one i was trying to make sure that i had the format down and it was easy to read. besides the reason i wrote it was because this thing came down to the wire, and we would still probably be having that stall war right now if we hadn't ended it.
 
Scores may help out a bit.

The warstory itself was alright, lots of hax and bad mistakes in the story though.
 
Not a bad battle but... You should have left Blissey in on Gengar IMO because it can't do anything to Blissey, even with SE Focus Blast unless it has Choice Specs. So you would have thunder waved as you woke up, and got in a Softboiled.
 
Hey! great redo (Im a failure), i did the stone edge on Jirachi because i thought it was part flying or had levitate thats why i didn't go with earthquake.
 
Not a bad battle but... You should have left Blissey in on Gengar IMO because it can't do anything to Blissey, even with SE Focus Blast unless it has Choice Specs. So you would have thunder waved as you woke up, and got in a Softboiled.
as you may have read, i didn't want to let blissey to be killed by focus punches. after i knew it had focus blast, i let her stay in. thanks for the advice though
 
Oh, how i LOL'ed.

Not a bad story overall, a couple of errors in typing it up, but nothing a bit of practice won't fix.
What errors? these are the things that i want to know. in the future i want to strive to provide you with entertaining and well written warstories of the highest caliber. i would ask you to point out specific examples. And haha, i laughed for about five minutes about that one. overkill is an understatemant!
 

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