A Dance Revolution-A Gen 5 OU warstory

[BTzz]

You've got your formatting down just brush up on your prediction skills! Also the battle and commentary werent great. The battle didn't have any significant predictions, double switches, stategies etc. You commentary was lacking, but if you incorperate the battle elements I mentioned there bound to expand.

keep it up!

 

[Lone_Prodigy]

What happened at the end? He conceded?

 

[xMistyx]

Your formatting was enjoyable and your commentary wasn't half bad.

The battle itself whilst not overly amazing certainly wasn't terrible (there's certainly worse battles that have been war-storied) But I will second the notion that you should wait till you're certain that it's an amazing match, compare it with archived ones etc.

 

[Yamata no Orochi]

This is quite a nice warstory but I've seen better 5/10

 

[Bugdomking]

Cliches I can do without: "Hax rearing its ugly head" and "Taking it like a Champ". You only did one. Don't insult hax for being ugly. Insult hax for being fat. :)

 

[soul_survivor]

It wasn't that great, and you made a lot of mistakes, and won because of a focus blast miss, which would've gave your opponent the win, but its your 1st warstory, and hopefully you'll improve.