Well, I would, but I'm really not a good team rater... I'm not the best at analyzing teams and finding holes in them.
Although, I saw Dcae's rate, and I have to agree with him on most oh his points. I was thinking Choice Scarf Latios would make a better Scarfer than Alakazam, though it seems I was beaten to it. One other thing I would suggest is that you change Surf on Jellicent to either Scald or Shadow Ball. Dcae already described Shadow Ball, and Scald would provide Jellicent with a way of applying pressure on the opponent for fear of a burn, since even resists dislike being burned.
Well, that wasn't much, but I hope that helped.