BH undercooked birb (GP 1/1)

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[SET]
name: Physically Defensive
move 1: Recover
move 2: Nuzzle / Glare
move 3: Torch Song
move 4: U-turn
item: Covert Cloak / Heavy-Duty Boots
ability: Fur Coat
nature: Bold
evs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 252 SpA / 252 SpD / 252 Spe
ivs: 0 Atk
tera type: Steel

[SET COMMENTS]
Moltres's useful typing and decent bulk allow it to check various dangerous physical attackers such as Zacian-C, Groudon, and Hoopa-U. Nuzzle reliably slows down offensive threats and bypasses Good as Gold, whereas Glare paralyzes Ground-types and Covert Cloak users. U-turn allows Moltres to maintain momentum against Nuzzle or Glare switch-ins. Covert Cloak grants immunity to the secondary effects of moves like Nuzzle, Magical Torque, and Salt Cure; alternatively, Heavy-Duty Boots gives it an immunity to Stealth Rock. Dangerous wallbreakers like Miraidon are recommended to take maximum advantage of U-turn. Zacian-C is another good example, especially since Moltres can Imposter-proof Zacian-C. Moltres is threatened by powerful special attackers, like Miraidon, so a specially defensive Ground-type, like Ice Scales Groudon or Ting-Lu, is a strong partner. It's best to Imposter-proof Moltres with a teammate immune to Nuzzle and not weak to Torch Song, such as Miraidon or Ting-Lu.

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- Written by: [[Codename C.A.T, 537972]]
- Quality checked by: [[Tea Guzzler, 577920], [Chessking345, 355040]]
- Grammar checked by: [[Adeleine, 517429]]
 
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[SET]
name: Physically Defensive
move 1: Recover
move 2: Nuzzle / Glare
move 3: Torch Song
move 4: U-Turn
item: Covert Cloak / Heavy Duty Boots
ability: Fur Coat
nature: Bold
evs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 252 SpA / 252 SpD / 252 Spe
ivs: (optional) 0 Atk since there are phys attacks you need to specify 0 Atk
tera type: (optional) Steel consider water here too
in-battle alt: (optional)
shiny: (optional)


[SET COMMENTS]
Moltres's unique Fire/Flying useful typing and good decent bulk give it a unique role as a allow it to check to various dangerous physical attackers such as Zacian-C, Groudon, and Hoopa-U. Nuzzle allows Moltres to bypass the Magic Bounce that may threaten its paralysis otherwise allows Moltres to reliably slow down offensive threats and bypasses Good as Gold, although Glare is an option to paralyze whereas Glare paralyzes Ground-types (hyphen) and Covert Cloak users. Torch Song gives Moltres the potential to snowball if not dealt with via Prankster Haze or Imposter, allowing it to use U-Turn to pivot into a more threatening teammate U-turn allows Moltres to maintain momentum against Nuzzle switch-ins. A Bold nature and Fur Coat are needed to take on the physical attackers it should be stopping. not needed, prank also exists and does OK-ish Covert Cloak gives it an immunity to the side effects otherwise irritating moves grants immunity to secondary moves like Nuzzle, Magical Torque, and Salt Cure, but; alternatively, Heavy Duty Boots gives it an immunity to Stealth Rock that it would otherwise be crippled by. Miraidon can be used as a partner, both benefitting from its U-Turns giving it an opportunity to come in safely and serving as an Imposter proof for Moltres itself thanks to its resistance to Fire and immunity to paralysis. Dangerous wallbreakers like Miraidon and Zacian-C are recommended to take maximum advantage of U-turn. Due to Moltres being Moltres is threatened by powerful special attackers, (add comma) like Miraidon and Palkia-O, so a specially defensive Ground-type (hyphen) teammate such as Ice Scales Groudon or RegenVest Ting-Lu can be solid partners for it. is a strong partner. Imposter-proofing is best done with a teammate immune to Nuzzle and not weak to Torch Song, such as Miraidon or Ting-Lu.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Codename C.A.T, 537972]]
- Quality checked by: [[Tea Guzzler, 577920], [username2, userid2]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
qc 1/2
 
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[SET]
name: Physically Defensive
move 1: Recover
move 2: Nuzzle / Glare
move 3: Torch Song
move 4: U-Turn
item: Covert Cloak / Heavy Duty Boots
ability: Fur Coat
nature: Bold
evs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 252 SpA / 252 SpD / 252 Spe
ivs: (optional) 0 Atk since there are phys attacks you need to specify 0 Atk
tera type: (optional) Steel consider water here too
in-battle alt: (optional)
shiny: (optional)


[SET COMMENTS]
Moltres's unique Fire/Flying useful typing and good decent bulk give it a unique role as a allow it to check to various dangerous physical attackers such as Zacian-C, Groudon, and Hoopa-U. Nuzzle allows Moltres to bypass the Magic Bounce that may threaten its paralysis otherwise allows Moltres to reliably slow down offensive threats and bypasses Good as Gold, although Glare is an option to paralyze whereas Glare paralyzes Ground-types (hyphen) and Covert Cloak users. Torch Song gives Moltres the potential to snowball if not dealt with via Prankster Haze or Imposter, allowing it to use U-Turn to pivot into a more threatening teammate U-turn allows Moltres to maintain momentum against Nuzzle switch-ins. A Bold nature and Fur Coat are needed to take on the physical attackers it should be stopping. not needed, prank also exists and does OK-ish Covert Cloak gives it an immunity to the side effects otherwise irritating moves grants immunity to secondary moves like Nuzzle, Magical Torque, and Salt Cure, but; alternatively, Heavy Duty Boots gives it an immunity to Stealth Rock that it would otherwise be crippled by. Miraidon can be used as a partner, both benefitting from its U-Turns giving it an opportunity to come in safely and serving as an Imposter proof for Moltres itself thanks to its resistance to Fire and immunity to paralysis. Dangerous wallbreakers like Miraidon and Zacian-C are recommended to take maximum advantage of U-turn. Due to Moltres being Moltres is threatened by powerful special attackers, (add comma) like Miraidon and Palkia-O, so a specially defensive Ground-type (hyphen) teammate such as Ice Scales Groudon or RegenVest Ting-Lu can be solid partners for it. is a strong partner. Imposter-proofing is best done with a teammate immune to Nuzzle and not weak to Torch Song, such as Miraidon or Ting-Lu.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Codename C.A.T, 537972]]
- Quality checked by: [[Tea Guzzler, 577920], [username2, userid2]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
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[SET]
name: Physically Defensive
move 1: Recover
move 2: Nuzzle / Glare
move 3: Torch Song This is up to you but is Lava Plume worth a slash? If it is add a point on the two
move 4: U-Turn U-turn
item: Covert Cloak / Heavy-Duty Boots
ability: Fur Coat
nature: Bold
evs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 252 SpA / 252 SpD / 252 Spe
ivs: 0 Atk
tera type: Steel

[SET COMMENTS]
Moltres's useful typing and decent bulk allow it to check various dangerous physical attackers such as Zacian-C, Groudon, and Hoopa-U. Nuzzle allows Moltres to reliably slow down offensive threats and bypasses Good as Gold, whereas Glare paralyzes Ground-types and Covert Cloak users. U-turn allows Moltres to maintain momentum against Nuzzle switch-ins. Covert Cloak grants immunity to secondary moves not immunity to secondary moves, should be immunity to secondary effects from moves ... like Nuzzle, Magical Torque, and Salt Cure; alternatively, Heavy-Duty Boots gives it an immunity to Stealth Rock. Dangerous wallbreakers like Miraidon and Zacian-C are recommended to take maximum advantage of U-turn Moltres has 90 speed which isn't exactly a slow U-turn (esp considering the max speed), also consider mentioning how Moltres can improof Zacian-C. Moltres is threatened by powerful special attackers, like Miraidon and Palkia-O, so a specially defensive Ground-type is a strong partner This would make sense if you only mentioned Miraidon, but the specially defensive Ground-type loses hard to Palkia-O, also mention example like Ice Scales Groudon or Ting-Lu. Imposter-proofing is best done with a teammate immune to Nuzzle and not weak to Torch Song, such as Miraidon or Ting-Lu.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Codename C.A.T, 537972]]
- Quality checked by: [[Tea Guzzler, 577920], [Chessking345, 355040]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]

 
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[SET]
name: Physically Defensive
move 1: Recover
move 2: Nuzzle / Glare
move 3: Torch Song This is up to you but is Lava Plume worth a slash? If it is add a point on the two
move 4: U-Turn U-turn
item: Covert Cloak / Heavy-Duty Boots
ability: Fur Coat
nature: Bold
evs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 252 SpA / 252 SpD / 252 Spe
ivs: 0 Atk
tera type: Steel

[SET COMMENTS]
Moltres's useful typing and decent bulk allow it to check various dangerous physical attackers such as Zacian-C, Groudon, and Hoopa-U. Nuzzle allows Moltres to reliably slow down offensive threats and bypasses Good as Gold, whereas Glare paralyzes Ground-types and Covert Cloak users. U-turn allows Moltres to maintain momentum against Nuzzle switch-ins. Covert Cloak grants immunity to secondary moves not immunity to secondary moves, should be immunity to secondary effects from moves ... like Nuzzle, Magical Torque, and Salt Cure; alternatively, Heavy-Duty Boots gives it an immunity to Stealth Rock. Dangerous wallbreakers like Miraidon and Zacian-C are recommended to take maximum advantage of U-turn Moltres has 90 speed which isn't exactly a slow U-turn (esp considering the max speed), also consider mentioning how Moltres can improof Zacian-C. Moltres is threatened by powerful special attackers, like Miraidon and Palkia-O, so a specially defensive Ground-type is a strong partner This would make sense if you only mentioned Miraidon, but the specially defensive Ground-type loses hard to Palkia-O, also mention example like Ice Scales Groudon or Ting-Lu. Imposter-proofing is best done with a teammate immune to Nuzzle and not weak to Torch Song, such as Miraidon or Ting-Lu.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Codename C.A.T, 537972]]
- Quality checked by: [[Tea Guzzler, 577920], [Chessking345, 355040]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]

Moltres's useful typing and decent bulk allow it to check various dangerous physical attackers such as Zacian-C, Groudon, and Hoopa-U. Nuzzle allows Moltres to reliably slow down offensive threats and bypasses Good as Gold, whereas Glare paralyzes Ground-types and Covert Cloak users. U-turn allows Moltres to maintain momentum against Nuzzle switch-ins. Covert Cloak grants immunity to the secondary effects of moves like Nuzzle, Magical Torque, and Salt Cure; alternatively, Heavy Duty Boots gives it an immunity to Stealth Rock. Dangerous wallbreakers like Miraidon are recommended to take maximum advantage of U-turn. Zacian-C is also a threatening wallbreaker that is a good partner with Moltres, as Moltres can Imposter-proof Zacian-C. Moltres is threatened by powerful special attackers, like Miraidon, so a specially defensive Ground-type, like Ice Scales Groudon or Ting-Lu, is a strong partner. Imposter-proofing is best done with a teammate immune to Nuzzle and not weak to Torch Song, such as Miraidon or Ting-Lu.

how does this look? i've bolded the changes, and fixed the u-turn grammar error. will also consider lava plume mention, though im hesitant due to my lack of knowledge about lava plume moltres.
 

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[SET]
name: Physically Defensive
move 1: Recover
move 2: Nuzzle / Glare
move 3: Torch Song
move 4: U-turn
item: Covert Cloak / Heavy-Duty (added hyphen) Boots
ability: Fur Coat
nature: Bold
evs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 252 SpA / 252 SpD / 252 Spe
ivs: 0 Atk
tera type: Steel

[SET COMMENTS]
Moltres's useful typing and decent bulk allow it to check various dangerous physical attackers such as Zacian-C, Groudon, and Hoopa-U. Nuzzle allows Moltres to reliably slow reliably slows down offensive threats and bypasses Good as Gold, whereas Glare paralyzes Ground-types and Covert Cloak users. (if molt can ever, like, be a viable sweeping threat with torch song, smth like that would probably be good to mention. if torch song is more just like, a stab attack and boosting to not being passive, though, something pretty easy to infer, you don't need to add a sentence for it. just do or dont do whatever makes sense) U-turn allows Moltres to maintain momentum against Nuzzle or Glare (I imagine?) switch-ins. Covert Cloak grants immunity to the secondary effects of moves like Nuzzle, Magical Torque, and Salt Cure; alternatively, Heavy-Duty (added hyphen) Boots gives it an immunity to Stealth Rock. Dangerous wallbreakers like Miraidon are recommended to take maximum advantage of U-turn. Zacian-C is also a threatening wallbreaker that is a good partner with Moltres, as another good example, especially since (I imagine "especially" works?) Moltres can Imposter-proof Zacian-C. Moltres is threatened by powerful special attackers, like Miraidon, so a specially defensive Ground-type, like Ice Scales Groudon or Ting-Lu, is a strong partner. Imposter-proofing is best done It's best to Imposter-proof Moltres with a teammate immune to Nuzzle and not weak to Torch Song, such as Miraidon or Ting-Lu.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Codename C.A.T, 537972]]
- Quality checked by: [[Tea Guzzler, 577920], [Chessking345, 355040]]
- Grammar checked by: [[Adeleine, 517429]]
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[SET]
name: Physically Defensive
move 1: Recover
move 2: Nuzzle / Glare
move 3: Torch Song
move 4: U-turn
item: Covert Cloak / Heavy-Duty (added hyphen) Boots
ability: Fur Coat
nature: Bold
evs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 252 SpA / 252 SpD / 252 Spe
ivs: 0 Atk
tera type: Steel

[SET COMMENTS]
Moltres's useful typing and decent bulk allow it to check various dangerous physical attackers such as Zacian-C, Groudon, and Hoopa-U. Nuzzle allows Moltres to reliably slow reliably slows down offensive threats and bypasses Good as Gold, whereas Glare paralyzes Ground-types and Covert Cloak users. (if molt can ever, like, be a viable sweeping threat with torch song, smth like that would probably be good to mention. if torch song is more just like, a stab attack and boosting to not being passive, though, something pretty easy to infer, you don't need to add a sentence for it. just do or dont do whatever makes sense) U-turn allows Moltres to maintain momentum against Nuzzle or Glare (I imagine?) switch-ins. Covert Cloak grants immunity to the secondary effects of moves like Nuzzle, Magical Torque, and Salt Cure; alternatively, Heavy-Duty (added hyphen) Boots gives it an immunity to Stealth Rock. Dangerous wallbreakers like Miraidon are recommended to take maximum advantage of U-turn. Zacian-C is also a threatening wallbreaker that is a good partner with Moltres, as another good example, especially since (I imagine "especially" works?) Moltres can Imposter-proof Zacian-C. Moltres is threatened by powerful special attackers, like Miraidon, so a specially defensive Ground-type, like Ice Scales Groudon or Ting-Lu, is a strong partner. Imposter-proofing is best done It's best to Imposter-proof Moltres with a teammate immune to Nuzzle and not weak to Torch Song, such as Miraidon or Ting-Lu.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Codename C.A.T, 537972]]
- Quality checked by: [[Tea Guzzler, 577920], [Chessking345, 355040]]
- Grammar checked by: [[Adeleine, 517429]]
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