VGC Ting Lu (GP 1/1)

[OVERVIEW]
* With excellent bulk, Vessel of Ruin, and a strong support movepool, Ting-Lu makes for a good supportive attacker. Thanks to Vessel of Ruin, it can slow down the metagame's special attacking compositions, like Farigiraf + Ursaluna-B and Flutter Mane + Chi-Yu. These traits make for a good supportive attacker and defensive wall.

* Ting-Lu synergizes well with bulky disruptive Pokemon that can take advantage of Vessel of Ruin. Dondozo is the perfect example, as it appreciates Vessel of Ruin to more easily set up Yawns in combination with Ting Lu's Sand Tomb. Ting Lu's typing makes it weak to many of the strong physical attackers in the format, such as both Urshifu formes, Rillaboom, and the various Ogerpon formes, meaning it appreciates Incineroar's Intimidate and Amoonguss's redirection.


* Ting Lu struggles with passivity; it's vulnerable to being overwhelmed or weakened by Intimidate easily, relying on partners to make up for its low damage. These partners can include Dragonite, which is unaffected by Intimidate and threatens big damage with priority, or Gouging Fire, which can use Howl to increase Ting Lu's offensive presence.



[SET]
Sand Tomb Support (Ting-Lu) @ Rocky Helmet
Level: 50
Ability: Vessel of Ruin
EVs: 76 HP / 4 Atk / 172 Def / 252 SpD / 4 Spe
Tera Type: Poison
Careful Nature
- Sand Tomb
- Ruination
- Taunt / Body Press
- Stomping Tantrum

[SET COMMENTS]
* Sand Tomb is able to trap in opponents so they can't escape disruption like Yawn. Ruination and Rocky Helmet act as the main damage dealing methods, with Stomping Tantrum used as its STAB move and Body Press as a consistent source of damage when Intimidated. Taunt can be used to shut down Amoonguss and other status moves.

* The Special Defense investment allows Ting-Lu to live Moonblast from Choice Specs Tera Fairy Flutter Mane. The Defense investment allows Ting-Lu to survive Wood Hammer from Rillaboom and Ivy Cudgel from a Terastallized Ogerpon-W.

* Tera Poison is the most consistent Tera type for Ting-Lu, as it provides a resistance to Flutter Mane's Moonblast, the STAB moves of Rillaboom, and Close Combat from the Urshifu formes.

[SET]
Bulky Attacker (Ting-Lu) @ Assault Vest
Level: 50
Ability: Vessel of Ruin
EVs: 100 HP / 76 Atk / 116 Def / 212 SpD / 4 Spe
Tera Type: Poison
Adamant Nature
- Stomping Tantrum
- Ruination / Throat Chop
- Body Press
- Heavy Slam

[SET COMMENTS]
* Heavy Slam allows Ting-Lu to OHKO Flutter Mane, while Ruination and Body Press provide consistent damage. Alternatively, Throat Chop can be used as a reliable Dark-Type STAB move that can also prevent Parting Shot from Incineroar and Hyper Voice from Ursaluna-B.

* Ting-Lu uses Assault Vest to bolster its special bulk. The EV spread allows Ting-Lu to survive 3 Moonblasts from Flutter Mane, and it also almost always lives Surging Strikes from Tera Water Urshifu-R. The Attack investment ensures an OHKO on Flutter Mane with Heavy Slam.

* Tera Poison is the most consistent Tera type for Ting-Lu, as it provides a resistance to Flutter Mane's Moonblast, the STAB moves of Rillaboom, and Close Combat from the Urshifu formes.

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I'll do another check over, theres probs a more concise way to phrase everything but my eyes are so tired :<
Again, highlight Sand Tomb more, its the whole reason we choose to update this and its the big set rn
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[OVERVIEW]
* With incredibly massive HP and defense, with an amazing movepool and decent offensive stats excellent bulk, Vessel of Ruin and a strong supportive movepool, Ting-Lu makes for a good supportive attacker. potent bulky attacker or support. Lets not exaggerate here, also kinda weird to mention incredible hp and defenses when later you say it struggles against physical attackers. Also, I've put supportive movepool there, you may want to explain a few it has access to or what kinda vein its supporting in Thanks to Vessel of Ruin, it can slow down the metagame's special attacking compositions, like Farigiraf + Ursaluna-B and Flutter Mane + Chi-yu.

* Ting-Lu synergizes well with other bulky Pokemon so Vessel of Ruin makes them even more difficult to remove thanks to Vessel of Ruin further increasing their bulk Sounded kinda weird, phrase how you wan). Kommo-o is the perfect example, as the combination of Vessel of Ruin and Iron Defense makes Kommo-o difficult to remove and allows for a sweep Vessel of Ruin helps it set up Iron Defenses more easily. Another bulky pokemon that appreciates it's lower special bulk being patched up by Vessel of Ruin is Solo Dondozo also appreciates Ting Lu's added bulk, who can click also being able to set up deadly Yawn's when paired with Sand Tomb from Ting Lu several times in combination with Ting Lu's Sand Tomb to prevent opponents from switching out. Porygon-2 is another notable mention as the extra defense is even more potent thanks to Recover stalling, as well as setting Trick Room. as it is another pokemon made tough to remove with Vessel of Ruin active and can set Trick Room for more offensive Ting Lu sets to shine. Talked on disc, trimming the fat. I've probs rephrase this as I think it can be more concise, but the colours are hurting my eyes rn :<

* Ting-Lu generally struggles against strong physical attackers that threaten it for super effective damage like the Urshifu formes, Ogerpon-W, and Rillaboom. It relies on terastallization, Rocky Helmet, or teammates like Incineroar and Amoonguss with Intimidate and redirection support respectively to protect Ting-Lu. Ting Lu's typing makes it weak to many strong attackers in the format, such as to both Urshifu formes, Rillaboom, and the various Ogerpon, all of which are unaffected by Vessel of Ruin. Instead, relying on positioning, terastallization, and support from partners such as Incineroar and Amoonguss, the former providing Intimidate support and the latter providing Spore and redirection. Expanded a bit on what you were saying, it felt kinda weird to say its physical defenses are strong at the start then say its weak to physical attackers. TBH you can move Incin/Amoonguss to the above paragraph, and axe Kommo/P2, its really out of style right now. Ting Lu struggles with passivity, its vulnerable to being overwhelmed or weakened by Intimidate easily, relying on partners to make up for its damage. van also struggle to do damage, especially after an Intimidate so powerful offensive sweepers with ways to mitigate intimidate like Dragonite or Gouging Fire or sweepers with setup moves like the aforementioned Kommo-o are relied upon to make up for Ting Lu's relative passivity.

(Can you move the sand tomb set up? Its the most popular one rn)
[SET]
Bulky Attacker (Ting-Lu) @ Assault Vest
Level: 50
Ability: Vessel of Ruin
EVs: 100 HP / 76 Atk / 116 Def / 212 SpD / 4 Spe
Tera Type: Fairy / Poison
Adamant Nature
- Stomping Tantrum
- Ruination / Throat Chop
- Tera Blast / Snarl
- Heavy Slam

[SET COMMENTS]
* Heavy Slam allows Ting-Lu to OHKO Flutter Mane. Ruination provides consistent damage even when Ting-Lu is Intimidated. Alternatively, Throat Chop can be used as reliable dark-type STAB that can also prevent Parting Shot from opposing Incineroar and Hyper Voice from Ursaluna-B.

* Tera Blast with a Fairy Tera complements perfectly with Stomping Tantrum as coverage and also is used to hits targets like Urshifu-S. Snarl is also an option to further slow down opposing special attackers. can be considered on Tera Poison sets, as it slows down special attackers, which, in combination with Vessel of Ruin, allows Ting-Lu to shut down almost every special attacker.

* Ting-Lu uses Assault Vest to bolster its special bulk in combination with its ability, Vessel of Ruin. The EV spread allows Ting-Lu to survive Tera Fairy Choice Specs Flutter Mane Moonblast as well as almost always surviving Tera Water Surging Strikes from Urshifu-R. and avoid getting 2HKOed by Tera Fairy Choice Specs Dazzling Gleam from Flutter Mane. It also allows it to almost always take Tera Water 156 EV Adamant Surging Strikes from Urshifu-R and comfortably survive Tera Water Ivy Cudgel from Ogerpon-W. The Attack investment ensures an OHKO on Flutter Mane with Heavy Slam. when not Intimidated and a 2HKO on Incineroar and Raging Bolt with Stomping Tantrum. Dont need to mention everything about the spread.

* Tera Fairy is the most consistent Tera type for Ting-Lu, being a great neutral typing into the metagame as well as walling Urshifu-S. as it gives provides a resistance to both of Urshifu-S's STAB moves as well as give Ting-Lu a powerful Tera Blast and a typing neutral into the majority of the metagame. Poison can also be used as it provides a resistance to Flutter Mane's Moonblast, the STAB moves of Rillaboom, and Close Combat from the Urshifu formes. It also becomes neutral to Water-type attacks from Urshifu-R and Ogerpon-W. (This makes Poison sound like the better tera type, with I honestly agree with. Are you sure about this order?)

[SET]
Sand Tomb Support (Ting-Lu) @ Rocky Helmet
Level: 50
Ability: Vessel of Ruin
EVs: 76 HP / 4 Atk / 172 Def / 252 SpD / 4 Spe
Tera Type: Poison
Careful Nature
- Sand Tomb
- Ruination
- Taunt
- Stomping Tantrum

[SET COMMENTS]
* This set pairs excellently with Yawn Dondozo thanks to Sand Tomb being able to trap in opponents so they can't escape Yawn.

* This set doesn't have any offensive investment so Ruination is your primary method of damage dealing. Ruination and Rocky Helmet combined can put many pokemon into range of a Stomping Tantrum. Ruination and Rocky Helmet act as the main damage dealing method, with Stomping Tantrum used for coverage.

* Taunt is used to shut down Amoonguss and is a generally useful move to shut off opposing and other status moves.
Trimming, also combine these 3 points into 1 paragraph

* Ting-Lu's special defensive investment patches up it's low base special defense , allowing it to live Choice Specs Tera Fairy Flutter Mane Moonblast. The defense investment can take Rillaboom Wood Hammer, Tera water Ivy Cudgel from Ogerpon-W, 156 Adamant Urshifu-R Surging Strikes. Huh, diden't you need AV to live tera fairy specs MB? Same with Urshifu, why the diff evs then. Can you find another calc for this or the above section. This also allows Ting-Lu to survive Urshifu-S Wicked Blow into Close Combat, allowing for easier mind games with Terastallization. Kinda wordy, I think this is fine?
 

Choruto

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Will probs do another look over but on disc, good work!
Also, theres a lot of spelling errors here, I'll try to mark them but yeah.
[OVERVIEW]
* With excellent bulk, Vessel of Ruin and a strong supportive movepool (RS),Ting-Lu makes for a good supportive attacker. Thanks to Vessel of Ruin, it can slow down the metagame's special attacking compositions, like Farigiraf + Ursaluna-B and Flutter Mane + Chi-yu. Can you add something about Sand Tomb? Or smh about ting being a strong defensive wall, chipping down opps

* Ting-Lu synergizes well with other bulky Pokemon thanks to Vessel of Ruin further increasing their bulk. Solo Dondozo is the perfect example, as it appreciates Vessel of Ruin to further increase it's bulk, Up to you, I think you can edit the above but yeah not rly needed. and can set up deadly Yawn's in combination with Ting Lu's Sand Tomb. (RS) Ting Lu's typing makes it weak to many strong attackers in the format, such as both Urshifu formes, Rillaboom, and the various Ogerpon, all of which are unaffected by Vessel of Ruin. Instead, Ting Lu relies on positioning, terastallization, and Ok I know I added this but it comes kinda out of nowhere, can you phrase this maybe as support from partners such as blah blah help it bypass these problems? I can help on disc if you want. support from partners such as Incineroar and Amoonguss, the former providing Intimidate support and the latter providing Spore and redirection.

* Ting Lu struggles with passivity, its vulnerable to being overwhelmed or weakened by Intimidate easily, relying on partners to make up for its low damage. These partners can include Dragonite, who is unaffected by both Intimidate and threatened big damage with priority, Vessel of Ruin, or Gouging Fire, who can use Howl to increase Ting Lu's offensive prescense make up for Intimidate.



[SET]
Sand Tomb Support (Ting-Lu) @ Rocky Helmet
Level: 50
Ability: Vessel of Ruin
EVs: 76 HP / 4 Atk / 172 Def / 252 SpD / 4 Spe
Tera Type: Poison
Careful Nature
- Sand Tomb
- Ruination
- Taunt Shoulden't this be Heavy Slam?
- Stomping Tantrum

[SET COMMENTS]
* This set pairs excellently with Yawn Dondozo thanks to Sand Tomb being able to trap in opponents so they can't escape Yawn. Ruination and Rocky Helmet act as the main damage dealing method, with Stomping Tantrum used for coverage. Taunt is used to shut down Amoonguss and other status moves.

* Ting-Lu's special defensive investment patches up it's low base special defense , allowing it The Special Defense investment allows Ting Lu to live Choice Specs Tera Fairy Flutter Mane Moonblast Moonblast from Choice Specs Tera Fairy Flutter Mane. The Defense investment can take allows Ting Lu to survive Wood Hammer from Rillaboom Wood Hammer, and Tera water Ivy Cudgel from a Terastallized Ogerpon-W, and 156 Adamant Urshifu-R Surging Strikes. This also allows Ting-Lu to survive Urshifu-S Wicked Blow into Close Combat, allowing for easier mind games with Terastallization. Trimming and changing the formats, also you dont really need that many calcs, like 2-3 max per stat.

Explain the choice of Tera here


[SET]
Bulky Attacker (Ting-Lu) @ Assault Vest
Level: 50
Ability: Vessel of Ruin
EVs: 100 HP / 76 Atk / 116 Def / 212 SpD / 4 Spe
Tera Type: Fairy / Poison
Adamant Nature
- Stomping Tantrum
- Ruination / Throat Chop
- Tera Blast / Snarl Snarl is barely used, shoulden't this be Body Press?
- Heavy Slam

[SET COMMENTS]
* Heavy Slam allows Ting-Lu to OHKO Flutter Mane. Ruination provides consistent damage. Alternatively, Throat Chop can be used as reliable dark-type STAB that can also prevent Parting Shot from opposing Incineroar and Hyper Voice from Ursaluna-B. Wait, so Ruination provides consistent damage, but throat chop is reliable? Those 2 words are practically synonyms. What is it? Can you be a bit more clear, say ruination is consistent but throat chop has a bit of utility and offers maybe more damage in some situations

* Tera Blast with a Fairy Tera is used to hit targets like Urshifu-S. Snarl is also an option to further slow down opposing special attackers.

* Ting-Lu uses Assault Vest to bolster its special bulk in combination with its ability to allow it to able to keep an Adamant nature. The EV spread likewise allows Ting-Lu to survive Tera Fairy Choice Specs Flutter Mane Moonblast. Mooblast from Choice Specs Tera Fairy Flutter Mane, also almost always surviving Surging Strikes from Tera Water Urshifu-R. It also almost always survives Tera Water Surging Strikes from Urshifu-R. (RS) The Attack investment ensures an OHKO on Flutter Mane with Heavy Slam.

* Tera Fairy is the most consistent Tera type for Ting-Lu, being a great neutral typing into the metagame as well as walling Urshifu-S. Poison can also be used as it provides a resistance to Flutter Mane's Moonblast, the STAB moves of Rillaboom, and Close Combat from the Urshifu formes. This sounds better than Tera Fairy, why is tera fairy used specifically on AV sets and not the sand tomb one. Ngl, dont even include Fairy, its almost always less than 50%, Poison just outclasses it.

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[OVERVIEW]
* With excellent bulk, Vessel of Ruin, and a strong supportive movepool, Ting-Lu makes for a good supportive attacker. Thanks to Vessel of Ruin, it can slow down the metagame's special attacking compositions, like Farigiraf + Ursaluna-B and Flutter Mane + Chi-yu. These traits make for a good supportive attacker and defensive wall.

* Ting-Lu synergizes well with other bulky Pokemon thanks to Vessel of Ruin further increasing their defensive capabilities. Solo Dondozo is the perfect example, as it appreciates Vessel of Ruin to further increase it's bulk, and can set up deadly Yawn's in combination with Ting Lu's Sand Tomb. Ting Lu's typing makes it weak to many strong attackers in the format, such as both Urshifu formes, Rillaboom, and the various Ogerpon, all of which are unaffected by Vessel of Ruin. Support from partners such as Incineroar and Amoonguss, the former providing Intimidate support and the latter providing Spore and redirection, as well as terastallization and careful positioning can help bypass these problems. (This is in general longer than it needs to be and a bit repetitive? "Ting-Lu synergises with Pokemon that take advantage of Vessel of Ruin, which includes bulky disruptive Pokemon like Incineroar, Amoonguss, and especially Dondozo, allowing them to take hits even better and disrupt with stat drops and sleep more reliably. Ting-Lu's Sand Tomb helps trap Pokemon to make Parting Shot and Yawn more impactful." is one way I'd word it, less than half! Then expand a little on offensive Pokemon in the next bullet point since there's already a mention of them to make up for Ting-Lu's less than ideal damage output. Remember you're free to word it differently.)

* Ting Lu struggles with passivity, its vulnerable to being overwhelmed or weakened by Intimidate easily, relying on partners to make up for its low damage. These partners can include Dragonite, who is unaffected by Intimidate and threatens big damage with priority or Gouging Fire, who can use Howl to increase Ting Lu's offensive presence.

[SET]
Sand Tomb Support (Ting-Lu) @ Rocky Helmet
Level: 50
Ability: Vessel of Ruin
EVs: 76 HP / 4 Atk / 172 Def / 252 SpD / 4 Spe
Tera Type: Poison
Careful Nature
- Sand Tomb
- Ruination
- Taunt / Body Press
- Stomping Tantrum

[SET COMMENTS]
* This set pairs excellently with Yawn Dondozo thanks to Sand Tomb being is able to trap in opponents so they can't escape disruption like Yawn and stat drops. (You already talked about how it pairs well with Dondozo earlier.) Ruination and Rocky Helmet act as the main damage dealing method, with Stomping Tantrum used for coverage as STAB, (Not really the definition of coverage.) and Body Press as a consistent source of damage when intimidated. Taunt is can be used to shut down Amoonguss and other status moves.

* The Special Defense investment allows Ting Lu to live Moonblast from Choice Specs Tera Fairy Flutter Mane. The Defense investment allows Ting Lu to survive Wood Hammer from Rillaboom Wood Hammer and Ivy Cudgel from a Terastallized Ogerpon-W.

* Tera Poison is the most consistent Tera Type for Ting-Lu, as it provides a resistance to Flutter Mane's Moonblast, the STAB moves of Rillaboom, and Close Combat from the Urshifu formes.

[SET]
Bulky Attacker (Ting-Lu) @ Assault Vest
Level: 50
Ability: Vessel of Ruin
EVs: 100 HP / 76 Atk / 116 Def / 212 SpD / 4 Spe
Tera Type: Poison
Adamant Nature
- Stomping Tantrum
- Ruination / Throat Chop
- Body Press
- Heavy Slam

[SET COMMENTS]
* Heavy Slam allows Ting-Lu to OHKO Flutter Mane. Ruination and Body Press provide consistent damage. Alternatively, Throat Chop can be used as reliable dark-type STAB that can also prevent Parting Shot from opposing Incineroar and Hyper Voice from Ursaluna-B.

* Ting-Lu uses Assault Vest to bolster its special bulk. The EV spread likewise allows Ting-Lu to survive Mooblast from Choice Specs Tera Fairy Flutter Mane, (You eat it really well, consider saying avoiding the 3HKO from Spe booster Flutter Mane or avoiding 2hko from +2 Raging Bolt.) also almost always surviving Surging Strikes from Tera Water Urshifu-R. The Attack investment ensures an OHKO on Flutter Mane with Heavy Slam.

* Tera Poison is also used here, following the logic of the above set.

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[OVERVIEW]
* With excellent bulk, Vessel of Ruin, (AC) and a strong supportive support movepool, (AS)Ting-Lu makes for a good supportive attacker. Thanks to Vessel of Ruin, it can slow down the metagame's special attacking compositions, like Farigiraf + Ursaluna-B and Flutter Mane + Chi-yu Chi-Yu. These traits make for a good supportive attacker and defensive wall.

* Ting-Lu synergizes well with bulky disruptive Pokemon who that can take advantage of Vessel of Ruin. Solo Dondozo is the perfect example, as it appreciates Vessel of Ruin to more easily set up deadly Yawn's Yawns in combination with Ting Lu's Sand Tomb. (RS) Ting Lu's typing makes it weak to many of the strong physical attackers in the format, such as both Urshifu formes, Rillaboom, and the various Ogerpon formes, meaning it appreciates Incineroar's Intimidate and Amoonguss's redirection.


* Ting Lu struggles with passivity, (RC) its; (ASC) it's vulnerable to being overwhelmed or weakened by Intimidate easily, relying on partners to make up for its low damage. These partners can include Dragonite, who which is unaffected by Intimidate and threatens big damage with priority, (AC) or Gouging Fire, who which can use Howl to increase Ting Lu's offensive presence.



[SET]
Sand Tomb Support (Ting-Lu) @ Rocky Helmet
Level: 50
Ability: Vessel of Ruin
EVs: 76 HP / 4 Atk / 172 Def / 252 SpD / 4 Spe
Tera Type: Poison
Careful Nature
- Sand Tomb
- Ruination
- Taunt / Body Press
- Stomping Tantrum

[SET COMMENTS]
* Sand Tomb is able to trap in opponents so they can't escape disruption like Yawn. Ruination and Rocky Helmet act as the main damage dealing method methods, with Stomping Tantrum used as its STAB move and Body Press as a consistent source of damage when intimidated Intimidated. Taunt can be used to shut down Amoonguss and other status moves.

* The Special Defense investment allows Ting Lu Ting-Lu to live Moonblast from Choice Specs Tera Fairy Flutter Mane. The Defense investment allows Ting Lu to survive Wood Hammer from Rillaboom and Ivy Cudgel from a Terastallized Ogerpon-W.

* Tera Poison is the most consistent Tera Type type for Ting-Lu, as it provides a resistance to Flutter Mane's Moonblast, the STAB moves of Rillaboom, and Close Combat from the Urshifu formes.

[SET]
Bulky Attacker (Ting-Lu) @ Assault Vest
Level: 50
Ability: Vessel of Ruin
EVs: 100 HP / 76 Atk / 116 Def / 212 SpD / 4 Spe
Tera Type: Poison
Adamant Nature
- Stomping Tantrum
- Ruination / Throat Chop
- Body Press
- Heavy Slam

[SET COMMENTS]
* Heavy Slam allows Ting-Lu to OHKO Flutter Mane. while Ruination and Body Press provide consistent damage. Alternatively, Throat Chop can be used as reliable dark-type a Dark-type STAB move that can also prevent Parting Shot from opposing Incineroar and Hyper Voice from Ursaluna-B.

* Ting-Lu uses Assault Vest to bolster its special bulk. The EV spread allows Ting-Lu to survive 3 Moonblasts from Flutter Mane, and it also almost always surviving lives (Removing redundancy) Surging Strikes from Tera Water Urshifu-R. The Attack investment ensures an OHKO on Flutter Mane with Heavy Slam.

* Tera Poison is also used here, following the logic of the above set. (Restate the Tera type information here so that readers aren't forced to read set one to understand set two)

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Yeah you have a bunch of double spaces throughout the analysis; make sure that these are removed.
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