Rate my first team please

Hello everyone, this is my first competitive team so please help me with suggestions

Ferrothorn @ Rocky Helmet/Leftovers
Ability: Iron Barbs
Relaxed Nature
Evs: 170 HP/170 Def/170 Sp.Def
- Spikes
- Stealth Rocks
- Toxic
- Gyro Ball/Power Whip

Ferrothorn is used as my lead and to set up traps as well as a mixed wall.

Chandelure @ Life orb
Ability: Flash Fire
Timid Nature
Evs: 252 Sp.Atk/252 Spe/4 Hp
- Flamethrower/Fire Blast
- Shadow Ball
- Energy Ball
- Will-o-wisp

Chandelure will be my main special sweeper.

Alakazam @ Life orb
Ability: Magic Guard
Timid Nature
Evs: 252 Sp.Atk/252 Spe/4hp
-Psychic
-Substitute
-Shadow Ball
-Focus Blast

Alakazam will be my second special sweeper.

Salamence @ Choice Scarf
Ability: Intimidate
Naive Nature
Evs: 252 Atk/252 Spe/4 SpA
-Outrage
-Dragon Claw
-Earthquake
-Fire Blast

Salamence will be my main physical sweeper.

Metagross @ Choice Band
Ability: Clear body
Adament Nature
Evs: 252 Atk/164 Hp/92 Spe
-Meteor Mash
-Bullet Punch
-Hammer Arm
-Earthquake

Metagross will be a bulky physical sweeper.

Hydreigon @ Expert Belt
Ability: Levitate
Naive Nature
Evs: 170 SpA/170 Atk/170 Spe
-Draco Meteor
-Flamethrower
-Superpower
-U-turn

Hydreigon is my mixed attacker.

This is my first RMT on Smogon so I'm sorry if this is not as detailed. I have tested this team a bit and it seems to work decently, but i want to make my team better since I'm fairly new to the competitive scene.
 
Hi and welcome to Smogon !

As stated in the rules, I would like it if you'd make your descriptions a bit longer. About 3 lines per poke should suffice.
Thank you :)
 

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