PU Jolteon

[avarice]

[OVERVIEW]
Jolteon makes good use of its high Speed stat and decent power on bulky offense teams to threaten faster offense teams. It most notably outpaces Ribombee and other Pokemon like Sneasel and Cinccino. It becomes a nightmare for hyper offensive teams that fail to fit a Ground-type, as they are just frail enough for Jolteon to pressure effectively. However, against bulkier teams, its lesser power is more noticeable, as it struggles to make much progress on its own. This lesser power on top of its frailty allows foes like Gallade and Scrafty to trade with it. Jolteon's coverage options are also terrible, making it easier to pivot around even without an Electric-immune Pokemon, as Jolteon struggles against Ferroseed and Eldegoss regardless.

[SET]
name: Offensive Pivot
move 1: Thunderbolt
move 2: Shadow Ball
move 3: Volt Switch
move 4: Hyper Voice / Toxic / Heal Bell
item: Choice Specs / Heavy-Duty Boots
ability: Volt Absorb
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Shadow Ball hits Ground-types such as Sandslash and Rhydon, as well as other Electric-immune Pokemon like Lightning Rod Togedemaru. Hyper Voice functions as additional neutral coverage, not as spammable as Shadow Ball but doing a little more to neutral Pokemon like opposing Jolteon. With Heavy-Duty Boots, Toxic can cripple specially defensive Pokemon like Audino and Gigalith before Jolteon pivots out. Heal Bell provides more utility for teammates when Jolteon cannot make progress otherwise. Choice Specs gives Jolteon immediate power to clean up frail teams with Thunderbolt and notably OHKO Ribombee and Wishiwashi from full health. Heavy-Duty Boots lets Jolteon pivot more freely and run support moves but makes it struggle more to revenge kill foes. Jolteon can form reliable VoltTurn cores with Pokemon such as Wishiwashi and Whimsicott. These Pokemon also can deal with Ground-types like Sandaconda for Jolteon. Wallbreakers like Gallade and Scrafty can capitalize on bulky foes like Audino and Gigalith that Jolteon draws in as well. Fire-types like Centiskorch and Charizard take advantage of the Grass-types that check Jolteon, like Whimsicott. In return, Jolteon can pressure Water-types like Wishiwashi or spread Toxic poison onto foes like Gigalith.

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- Written by: [[avarice, 346653]]
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[S1nn0hC0nfirm3d]

AM QC, implement what you want!

Comments in Bold and Strikethrough

[OVERVIEW]
Jolteon makes good use of its high speed stat and decent power on bulky offense teams to threaten faster offense teams. Its naturally high speed stat most notably outpaces Ribombee and other Pokemon like Sneasel and Cinccino. It becomes a nightmare for offensive teams that fail to fit a Ground-type (Or Togedamaru? If you meant HO, which seldom has either, then that could be clarified. Otherwise, I'd add Toge here, as offensive VoltTurn teams could still fit that as well). However, against bulkier teams, its low power is more noticeable as it struggles to make much progress on its own. Even when there is no Ground-type present, foes like Ferroseed, Togedemaru, (above) and Eldegoss are difficult to wear down and can pivot around its attacks (more relevance mentioning that point here, as these are the walls pivoting around its attacks). Jolteon's coverage options are also nonexistent, making it easier to pivot around (Above. There's no mention of Jolteon's frailty thus far, and a good point to end on could be how bad it is at trading hits against bulky-offensive threats that Jolteon can't beat on its own)

[SET]
name: Offensive Pivot
move 1: Thunderbolt
move 2: Shadow Ball
move 3: Volt Switch
move 4: Hyper Voice / Toxic / Heal Bell
item: Choice Specs / Heavy-Duty Boots
ability: Volt Absorb
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Jolteon does not have a good movepool to choose from, but it is able to make do (Fluff statement. Later, if you wanted to write something like "Shadow Ball is Jolteon's best attack for..." then that would convey the coverage issue well enough to the reader). Choice Specs gives Jolteon immediate power that can clean up frail teams with Thunderbolt. Heavy-Duty Boots let Jolteon pivot more freely and can safely run support moves at the cost of being harder to revenge kill foes (This is fine as is, although a couple examples of the damage drop off if you wanted to add them would be the OHKOes on Wishiwashi and Ribombee that specs picks up and HDB doesn't). Shadow Ball hits Ground-types such as Sandslash and Rhydon as well as other Electric-immune Pokemon like Lightning Rod Togedemaru. Hyper Voice functions as additional neutral coverage that is not as spammable as Shadow Ball but does a little more to Pokemon like opposing Jolteon. Toxic is able to cripple specially defensive Pokemon like Audino and Gigalith before pivoting out. Heal Bell gives Jolteon the option for more utility when it can't make progress otherwise for teammates like its own Gigalith (I see this as an opportunity to reference Jolteon's inability to make progress at times, and how Heal Bell means that it can at least offer utility in the Toge / bulky Ground-type matchups it runs into. Saying it supports Gigalith is okay but that point ignores why Jolteon is being forced to run this move in the first place). Jolteon can form reliable VoltTurn cores with Pokemon such as Wishiwashi and Whimsicott. These Pokemon also can deal with Ground-types like Sandaconda for Jolteon. Wallbreakers like Gallade and Scrafty are able to capitalize on bulky foes like Audino and Gigalith that Jolteon draws in as well.


[CREDITS]
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[Hera]

Comments in bold

Jolting

[OVERVIEW]
Jolteon makes good use of its high speed stat and decent power on bulky offense teams to threaten faster offense teams. Its naturally high speed stat most notably outpaces Ribombee and other Pokemon like Sneasel and Cinccino. It becomes a nightmare for hyper offensive teams that fail to fit a Ground-type (mention specifically that HO can't take hits from Jolteon or revenge it easily, it's not super obvious as to why it's good against PU HO teams). However, against bulkier teams, its low power (base 110 SpA with Specs is in no way "low power", I would focus on its fragility and lack of coverage more) is more noticeable as it struggles to make much progress on its own. Its low power on top of its frailty allow foes like Gallade and Scrafty to trade. Even when there is no Ground-type present (more like no Electric immunity, LR Toge is a good mon and Lanturn exists I guess), foes like Ferroseed and Eldegoss are difficult to wear down (say Grass-types here). Jolteon's coverage options are also nonexistent making it easier to pivot around.

[SET]
name: Offensive Pivot
move 1: Thunderbolt
move 2: Shadow Ball
move 3: Volt Switch
move 4: Hyper Voice / Toxic / Heal Bell
item: Choice Specs / Heavy-Duty Boots
ability: Volt Absorb
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Choice Specs gives Jolteon immediate power that can clean up frail teams with Thunderbolt and notably OHKO Ribombee and Wishiwashi from full. Heavy-Duty Boots let Jolteon pivot more freely and can safely run support moves at the cost of being harder to revenge kill foes. (move the sentences about items to after the sentence about Hyper Voice) Shadow Ball hits Ground-types such as Sandslash and Rhydon as well as other Electric-immune Pokemon like Lightning Rod Togedemaru. Hyper Voice functions as additional neutral coverage that is not as spammable as Shadow Ball but does a little more to Pokemon like opposing Jolteon. Toxic is able to cripple specially defensive Pokemon like Audino and Gigalith before pivoting out. Heal Bell gives Jolteon the option for more utility for teammates when it cannot make progress otherwise. Jolteon can form reliable VoltTurn cores with Pokemon such as Wishiwashi and Whimsicott. These Pokemon also can deal with Ground-types like Sandaconda for Jolteon. Wallbreakers like Gallade and Scrafty are able to capitalize on bulky foes like Audino and Gigalith that Jolteon draws in as well. (specifically mention some wallbreakers that take advantage of Grass-types, like Centiskorch and Charizard)

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[avarice, 346653]]
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QC 1/2.

 

[asa]

[OVERVIEW]
Jolteon makes good use of its high speed stat and decent power on bulky offense teams to threaten faster offense teams. Its naturally high speed stat most notably outpaces Ribombee and other Pokemon like Sneasel and Cinccino. It becomes a nightmare for hyper offensive teams that fail to fit a Ground-type as they are just frail enough for Jolteon to pressure effectively. However, against bulkier teams, its low power is more noticeable as it struggles to make much progress on its own. Its low power on top of its frailty allow foes like Gallade and Scrafty to trade. Even when there is no Electric-immune Pokemon present, foes like Ferroseed and Eldegoss are difficult to wear down. Jolteon's coverage options are also nonexistent making it easier to pivot around. (there's probably a way to include that mons like ferro and elde sit on this thing in this sentence, which is probably worth doing see as one is a result of the other.)

[SET]
name: Offensive Pivot
move 1: Thunderbolt
move 2: Shadow Ball
move 3: Volt Switch
move 4: Hyper Voice / Toxic / Heal Bell
item: Choice Specs / Heavy-Duty Boots
ability: Volt Absorb
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Choice Specs gives Jolteon immediate power that can clean up frail teams with Thunderbolt and notably OHKO Ribombee and Wishiwashi from full. Heavy-Duty Boots let Jolteon pivot more freely and can safely run support moves at the cost of being harder to revenge kill foes. (this part should go after you explain all the moves, imo.) Shadow Ball hits Ground-types such as Sandslash and Rhydon as well as other Electric-immune Pokemon like Lightning Rod Togedemaru. Hyper Voice functions as additional neutral coverage that is not as spammable as Shadow Ball but does a little more to Pokemon like opposing Jolteon. Toxic is able to cripple specially defensive Pokemon like Audino and Gigalith before pivoting out. Heal Bell gives Jolteon the option for more utility for teammates when it cannot make progress otherwise. Jolteon can form reliable VoltTurn cores with Pokemon such as Wishiwashi and Whimsicott. These Pokemon also can deal with Ground-types like Sandaconda for Jolteon. Wallbreakers like Gallade and Scrafty are able to capitalize on bulky foes like Audino and Gigalith that Jolteon draws in as well. Fire-types like Centiscorch Centiskorch and Charizard take advantage of the Grass-types too. (may be worth mentioning that they like jolt's ability to pressure non-quag waters / potentially wear stuff like gig down with toxic.)

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[avarice, 346653]]
- Quality checked by: [[Heracross2.0, 414072], [asa, 400292]]
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qc deux out of deux :)

 

[Adeleine]

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[OVERVIEW]
Jolteon makes good use of its high speed Speed stat and decent power on bulky offense teams to threaten faster offense teams. Its naturally high speed stat most notably outpaces Ribombee and other Pokemon like Sneasel and Cinccino. It becomes a nightmare for hyper offensive teams that fail to fit a Ground-type, (AC) as they are just frail enough for Jolteon to pressure effectively. However, against bulkier teams, its low lesser power is more noticeable, (AC) as it struggles to make much progress on its own. Its low This lesser power on top of its frailty allow allows foes like Gallade and Scrafty to trade with it. Jolteon's coverage options are also nonexistent terrible, making it easier to pivot around even without an Electric-immune Pokemon, (AC) as Jolteon struggles against Ferroseed and Eldegoss regardless.

[SET]
name: Offensive Pivot
move 1: Thunderbolt
move 2: Shadow Ball
move 3: Volt Switch
move 4: Hyper Voice / Toxic / Heal Bell
item: Choice Specs / Heavy-Duty Boots
ability: Volt Absorb
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Shadow Ball hits Ground-types such as Sandslash and Rhydon, (AC) as well as other Electric-immune Pokemon like Lightning Rod Togedemaru. Hyper Voice functions as additional neutral coverage that is coverage, not as spammable as Shadow Ball but does doing a little more to neutral Pokemon like opposing Jolteon. With Heavy-Duty Boots, (I imagine?) Toxic is able to can cripple specially defensive Pokemon like Audino and Gigalith before pivoting Jolteon pivots out. Heal Bell gives Jolteon the option for more utility for teammates when it provides more utility for teammates when Jolteon cannot make progress otherwise. Jolteon can form reliable VoltTurn cores with Pokemon such as Wishiwashi and Whimsicott. Choice Specs gives Jolteon immediate power that can to clean up frail teams with Thunderbolt and notably OHKO Ribombee and Wishiwashi from full health. Heavy-Duty Boots let lets Jolteon pivot more freely and can safely run support moves at the cost of being harder run support moves but makes it struggle more (I imagine?) to revenge kill foes. Jolteon can form reliable VoltTurn cores with Pokemon such as Wishiwashi and Whimsicott. (I assume this sentence belongs here?) These Pokemon also can deal with Ground-types like Sandaconda for Jolteon. Wallbreakers like Gallade and Scrafty are able to can capitalize on bulky foes like Audino and Gigalith that Jolteon draws in as well. Fire-types like Centiskorch and Charizard take advantage of the Grass-types too. that check Jolteon, like ___. (maybe give an example here) In return, Jolteon can pressure Water-types like Wishiwashi or spread Toxic poison onto foes like Gigalith.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[avarice, 346653]]
- Quality checked by: [[Heracross2.0, 414072], [asa, 400292]]
- Grammar checked by: [[Adeleine, 517429]]

GP Team done

if specs jolteon can still run toxic/heal bell, which my edits imply is not the case, probably do the following changes:
change the sentence abt Toxic a bit, both bc i added "with hdb", and bc specs jolteon cant use toxic before pivoting out with volt switch
change "and run support" to "and safely use support"