VGC Incineroar

Yoko

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:Incineroar:
[OVERVIEW]

* Incineroar serves as an extremely good utility Pokemon on all types of teams thanks to its ability Intimidate, as well as its good support movepool including Fake Out and Parting Shot; these traits have great synergy, together letting it come in to hinder the opposing team and pivot out the following turn.

* Rillaboom and Urshifu-R are good partners for Incineroar, forming a fantastic balance core with it, being able to pivot each other in to cover their respective weaknesses and put pressure on the majority of teams defensive structure.

* Incineroar can struggle against Water-types like Urshifu-R that force it out, making it appreciate redirection support from Pokemon like Amoonguss; Amoonguss can also provide it with healing and sleep support to make it even harder to remove, and Regenerator makes it consistently easy for it to pivot into Amoonguss. In return, Incineroar can force out other Grass-types like Rillaboom, Whimsicott, and opposing Amoonguss.

[SET]
Offensive Support (Incineroar) @ Sitrus Berry / Safety Goggles
Level: 50
Ability: Intimidate
EVs: 252 HP / 4 Atk / 140 Def / 76 SpD / 36 Spe
Tera Type: Water / Ghost / Grass
Careful Nature
- Fake Out
- Flare Blitz
- Parting Shot
- Knock Off

[SET COMMENTS]

* Knock Off can debilitate Pokemon like Latias, Dondozo, and opposing Incineroar; it also gives Incineroar great synergy with Pokemon like Amoonguss, as it can remove Safety Goggles from foes.

* Incineroar utilizes Sitrus Berry to extend its longevity late-game, letting it survive Surging Strikes from Urshifu-R, while Safety Goggles helps against Amoonguss.

* The given EV spread lets Incineroar notably survive two uses of Moonblast from Special Attack Flutter Mane and prevents it from being OHKOed by Iron Bundle's Hydro Pump. It also lets Incineroar outspeed Landorus when in Tailwind.

* Tera Water is a great defensive typing that allows Incineroar to escape its weaknesses, notably to Urshifu-R's Surging Strikes. Tera Ghost allows Incineroar to become immune to Fake Out and also assists against Dragonite; Tera Grass helps Incineroar answer Urshifu-R and Ogerpon-W and can aid against Amoonguss if Incineroar is not using Safety Goggles.

[CREDITS]
Written by:
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Its pretty well-written overall but will do another check to see how you implemented the first part
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[OVERVIEW]

* Incineroar serves as an extremely good utility Pokemon on all types of teams thanks to its ability Intimidate, as well as its good supporting movepool. (Go more in depth here, about how Fake Out, Intimidate and Parting Shot all work together so well in 2 more lines ish)

* Rillaboom and Urshifu-R are good partners with Incineroar, forming a fantastic balance core, being able to pivot each other in to cover their weaknesses and put pressure on the majority of teams.

* Incineroar can struggle against Water-types like Urshifu-R which force it out, making it appreciate redirection support from Pokemon like Amoonguss, it can also provide Incineroar with healing and sleep in form of Pollen Puff and Spore respectively to make it even harder to remove. In return, Incineroar can force out other Grass-types like Rillaboom, Whimsicott, and opposing Amoonguss.

[SET]
Incineroar @ Sitrus Berry / Safety Goggles
Level: 50
Ability: Intimidate
EVs: 252 HP / 4 Atk / 140 Def / 76 SpD / 36 Spe
Tera Type: Water / Ghost / Grass
Careful Nature
- Fake Out
- Flare Blitz
- Parting Shot
- Knock Off

[SET COMMENTS]

* Knock Off can cripple Pokemon like Landorus-T Latias, Dondozo, and opposing Incineroar, it also makes Incineroar have great synergy with Pokemon like Amoonguss as it can remove Safety Goggles from foes.

* Incineroar utilises Sitrus Berry to extend its longevity late-game, letting it live Surging Strikes from Urshifu-R with its nature Careful, while Safety Goggles provides it with a immunity to powder moves, helping helps against Amoonguss.

* This given EV spread lets Incineroar notably live 2 Moonblasts from Booster Energy Flutter Mane, and Hydro Pump from Iron Bundle. It also lets Incineroar outspeed Iron Hands, as well as Landorus when in Tailwind.

* Tera Water helps against opposing Incineroar matchups while keeping its resist to Make It Rain, it also helps to be a great answer to Chien-pao, is a great defensive typing that allows it to tera out of its weaknesses, notably Urshifu-R's Surging Strikes. Tera Ghost allows Incineroar to be immune to Fake Out from Rillaboom, and also helps it not get revenge killed by against (Revenge Killing is not a great term for VGC) Dragonite, and Tera Grass helps Incineroar answer Urshifu-R and Ogerpon-W, also when not running Safety Goggles it can help against Amoonguss.
 

Yoko

I COULD BE BANNED!
Its pretty well-written overall but will do another check to see how you implemented the first part
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[OVERVIEW]

* Incineroar serves as an extremely good utility Pokemon on all types of teams thanks to its ability Intimidate, as well as its good supporting movepool. (Go more in depth here, about how Fake Out, Intimidate and Parting Shot all work together so well in 2 more lines ish)

* Rillaboom and Urshifu-R are good partners with Incineroar, forming a fantastic balance core, being able to pivot each other in to cover their weaknesses and put pressure on the majority of teams.

* Incineroar can struggle against Water-types like Urshifu-R which force it out, making it appreciate redirection support from Pokemon like Amoonguss, it can also provide Incineroar with healing and sleep in form of Pollen Puff and Spore respectively to make it even harder to remove. In return, Incineroar can force out other Grass-types like Rillaboom, Whimsicott, and opposing Amoonguss.

[SET]
Incineroar @ Sitrus Berry / Safety Goggles
Level: 50
Ability: Intimidate
EVs: 252 HP / 4 Atk / 140 Def / 76 SpD / 36 Spe
Tera Type: Water / Ghost / Grass
Careful Nature
- Fake Out
- Flare Blitz
- Parting Shot
- Knock Off

[SET COMMENTS]

* Knock Off can cripple Pokemon like Landorus-T Latias, Dondozo, and opposing Incineroar, it also makes Incineroar have great synergy with Pokemon like Amoonguss as it can remove Safety Goggles from foes.

* Incineroar utilises Sitrus Berry to extend its longevity late-game, letting it live Surging Strikes from Urshifu-R with its nature Careful, while Safety Goggles provides it with a immunity to powder moves, helping helps against Amoonguss.

* This given EV spread lets Incineroar notably live 2 Moonblasts from Booster Energy Flutter Mane, and Hydro Pump from Iron Bundle. It also lets Incineroar outspeed Iron Hands, as well as Landorus when in Tailwind.

* Tera Water helps against opposing Incineroar matchups while keeping its resist to Make It Rain, it also helps to be a great answer to Chien-pao, is a great defensive typing that allows it to tera out of its weaknesses, notably Urshifu-R's Surging Strikes. Tera Ghost allows Incineroar to be immune to Fake Out from Rillaboom, and also helps it not get revenge killed by against (Revenge Killing is not a great term for VGC) Dragonite, and Tera Grass helps Incineroar answer Urshifu-R and Ogerpon-W, also when not running Safety Goggles it can help against Amoonguss.
implemented ready for a recheck!
 
One thing i missed is that the synergy between Regenerator and Parting Shot should problaby be mentioned when bringing up Amoonguss as a partner, ready for GP after that's implemented
 

Yoko

I COULD BE BANNED!
One thing i missed is that the synergy between Regenerator and Parting Shot should problaby be mentioned when bringing up Amoonguss as a partner, ready for GP after that's implemented
was kinda confused on how i should mentioned the synergy so i just added it to the comment sections
implemented let me know if i should change something otherwise GP Team good morning
 
Ill do it like this then rq, this is essentially what i meant
OVERVIEW]

* Incineroar serves as an extremely good utility Pokemon on all types of teams thanks to its ability Intimidate, as well as its good supporting movepool like Fake Out and Parting Shot, which all have great synergy together letting Incineroar come in to hinder the opposing team and pivot out the following turn.

* Rillaboom and Urshifu-R are good partners with Incineroar, forming a fantastic balance core, being able to pivot each other in to cover their weaknesses and put pressure on the majority of teams.

* Incineroar can struggle against Water-types like Urshifu-R which force it out, making it appreciate redirection support from Pokemon like Amoonguss, it can also provide Incineroar with healing and sleep to make it even harder to remove and Regenerator makes it consistently easy for Incineroar to pivot into. In return, Incineroar can force out other Grass-types like Rillaboom, Whimsicott, and opposing Amoonguss

[SET]
Incineroar @ Sitrus Berry / Safety Goggles
Level: 50
Ability: Intimidate
EVs: 252 HP / 4 Atk / 140 Def / 76 SpD / 36 Spe
Tera Type: Water / Ghost / Grass
Careful Nature
- Fake Out
- Flare Blitz
- Parting Shot
- Knock Off

[SET COMMENTS]


* Parting Shot lets Incineroar weaken foes like Kingambit and Raging Bolt, it also has great synergy with Regenerator teammates like Amoonguss, letting them pivot out to regain their health.

*Knock Off can cripple Pokemon like Latias, Dondozo, and opposing Incineroar, it also makes Incineroar have great synergy with Pokemon like Amoonguss as it can remove Safety Goggles from foes.

* Incineroar utilises Sitrus Berry to extend its longevity late-game, letting it live Surging Strikes from Urshifu-R, while Safety Goggles helps against Amoonguss.

* This given EV spread lets Incineroar notably live 2 Moonblasts from Booster Energy Flutter Mane, and Hydro Pump from Iron Bundle. It also lets Incineroar outspeed Landorus when in Tailwind.

* Tera Water is a great defensive typing that allows it to tera out of its weaknesses, notably Urshifu-R's Surging Strikes. Tera Ghost allows Incineroar to be immune to Fake Out , and also helps against Dragonite, and Tera Grass helps Incineroar answer Urshifu-R and Ogerpon-W, also when not running Safety Goggles it can help against Amoonguss

[CREDITS]
Written by:

https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/yoko.617542/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/robbie35646.562330/
Grammar checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user5.104/
 

Yoko

I COULD BE BANNED!
Ill do it like this then rq, this is essentially what i meant
OVERVIEW]

* Incineroar serves as an extremely good utility Pokemon on all types of teams thanks to its ability Intimidate, as well as its good supporting movepool like Fake Out and Parting Shot, which all have great synergy together letting Incineroar come in to hinder the opposing team and pivot out the following turn.

* Rillaboom and Urshifu-R are good partners with Incineroar, forming a fantastic balance core, being able to pivot each other in to cover their weaknesses and put pressure on the majority of teams.

* Incineroar can struggle against Water-types like Urshifu-R which force it out, making it appreciate redirection support from Pokemon like Amoonguss, it can also provide Incineroar with healing and sleep to make it even harder to remove and Regenerator makes it consistently easy for Incineroar to pivot into. In return, Incineroar can force out other Grass-types like Rillaboom, Whimsicott, and opposing Amoonguss

[SET]
Incineroar @ Sitrus Berry / Safety Goggles
Level: 50
Ability: Intimidate
EVs: 252 HP / 4 Atk / 140 Def / 76 SpD / 36 Spe
Tera Type: Water / Ghost / Grass
Careful Nature
- Fake Out
- Flare Blitz
- Parting Shot
- Knock Off

[SET COMMENTS]


* Parting Shot lets Incineroar weaken foes like Kingambit and Raging Bolt, it also has great synergy with Regenerator teammates like Amoonguss, letting them pivot out to regain their health.

*Knock Off can cripple Pokemon like Latias, Dondozo, and opposing Incineroar, it also makes Incineroar have great synergy with Pokemon like Amoonguss as it can remove Safety Goggles from foes.

* Incineroar utilises Sitrus Berry to extend its longevity late-game, letting it live Surging Strikes from Urshifu-R, while Safety Goggles helps against Amoonguss.

* This given EV spread lets Incineroar notably live 2 Moonblasts from Booster Energy Flutter Mane, and Hydro Pump from Iron Bundle. It also lets Incineroar outspeed Landorus when in Tailwind.

* Tera Water is a great defensive typing that allows it to tera out of its weaknesses, notably Urshifu-R's Surging Strikes. Tera Ghost allows Incineroar to be immune to Fake Out , and also helps against Dragonite, and Tera Grass helps Incineroar answer Urshifu-R and Ogerpon-W, also when not running Safety Goggles it can help against Amoonguss

[CREDITS]
Written by:

https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/yoko.617542/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/robbie35646.562330/
Grammar checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user5.104/
ok implemented!
 
236 HP EVs will give you 200 HP, an even number for sitrus berry. If you look at pikalytics most of the spreads run that number
 

TheRealBigC

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[OVERVIEW]
* Incineroar serves as an extremely good utility Pokemon on all types of teams thanks to its ability Intimidate, as well as its good supporting support movepool like including Fake Out and Parting Shot; (ASC) , (RC) which all these traits have great synergy, (AC) letting Incineroar come in to hinder the opposing team and pivot out the following turn.

* Rillaboom and Urshifu-R are good partners with Incineroar, forming a fantastic balance core, being able to pivot each other in to cover their respective weaknesses and put pressure on the majority of teams.

* Incineroar can struggle against Water-types like Urshifu-R which that force it out, making it appreciate redirection support from Pokemon like Amoonguss; (ASC) , (RC) it Amoonguss can also provide Incineroar with healing and sleep support to make it even harder to remove, and Regenerator makes it consistently easy for Incineroar to pivot into it. In return, Incineroar can force out other Grass-types like Rillaboom, Whimsicott, and opposing Amoonguss. (AP)

[SET]
Offensive Support (Incineroar) @ Sitrus Berry / Safety Goggles
Level: 50
Ability: Intimidate
EVs: 252 HP / 4 Atk / 140 Def / 76 SpD / 36 Spe
Tera Type: Water / Ghost / Grass
Careful Nature
- Fake Out
- Flare Blitz
- Parting Shot
- Knock Off

[SET COMMENTS]

* (AS) Knock Off can cripple Pokemon like Latias, Dondozo, and opposing Incineroar; (ASC) , (RC) it also makes gives Incineroar have great synergy with Pokemon like Amoonguss, (AC) as it can remove Safety Goggles from foes.

* Incineroar utilises utilizes (American English) Sitrus Berry to extend its longevity late-game, letting it live survive Surging Strikes from Urshifu-R, while Safety Goggles helps against Amoonguss.

* This given EV spread lets Incineroar notably live 2 Moonblasts survive two uses of Moonblast from (what kind? Presumably Special Attack) Booster Energy Flutter Mane, (RC) and (how many? If it's just one Hydro Pump, rewrite to "prevents it from being OHKOed by Iron Bundle's Hydro Pump") Hydro Pump from Iron Bundle. It also lets Incineroar outspeed Landorus when in Tailwind.

* Tera Water is a great defensive typing that allows it Incineroar to tera Terastallize out of its weaknesses, notably including Urshifu-R's Surging Strikes. Tera Ghost allows Incineroar to be become immune to Fake Out, (RC) and also helps assists (repetition following) against Dragonite; (ASC) , and Tera Grass helps Incineroar answer Urshifu-R and Ogerpon-W, also when not running Safety Goggles it can help against Amoonguss and can aid against Amoonguss if Incineroar is not using Safety Goggles.

[CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/yoko.617542/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/robbie35646.562330/
Grammar checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user5.104/
 

Yoko

I COULD BE BANNED!
This is an AMGP check, implement as desired

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[OVERVIEW]
* Incineroar serves as an extremely good utility Pokemon on all types of teams thanks to its ability Intimidate, as well as its good supporting support movepool like including Fake Out and Parting Shot; (ASC) , (RC) which all these traits have great synergy, (AC) letting Incineroar come in to hinder the opposing team and pivot out the following turn.

* Rillaboom and Urshifu-R are good partners with Incineroar, forming a fantastic balance core, being able to pivot each other in to cover their respective weaknesses and put pressure on the majority of teams.

* Incineroar can struggle against Water-types like Urshifu-R which that force it out, making it appreciate redirection support from Pokemon like Amoonguss; (ASC) , (RC) it Amoonguss can also provide Incineroar with healing and sleep support to make it even harder to remove, and Regenerator makes it consistently easy for Incineroar to pivot into it. In return, Incineroar can force out other Grass-types like Rillaboom, Whimsicott, and opposing Amoonguss. (AP)

[SET]
Offensive Support (Incineroar) @ Sitrus Berry / Safety Goggles
Level: 50
Ability: Intimidate
EVs: 252 HP / 4 Atk / 140 Def / 76 SpD / 36 Spe
Tera Type: Water / Ghost / Grass
Careful Nature
- Fake Out
- Flare Blitz
- Parting Shot
- Knock Off

[SET COMMENTS]

* (AS) Knock Off can cripple Pokemon like Latias, Dondozo, and opposing Incineroar; (ASC) , (RC) it also makes gives Incineroar have great synergy with Pokemon like Amoonguss, (AC) as it can remove Safety Goggles from foes.

* Incineroar utilises utilizes (American English) Sitrus Berry to extend its longevity late-game, letting it live survive Surging Strikes from Urshifu-R, while Safety Goggles helps against Amoonguss.

* This given EV spread lets Incineroar notably live 2 Moonblasts survive two uses of Moonblast from (what kind? Presumably Special Attack) Booster Energy Flutter Mane, (RC) and (how many? If it's just one Hydro Pump, rewrite to "prevents it from being OHKOed by Iron Bundle's Hydro Pump") Hydro Pump from Iron Bundle. It also lets Incineroar outspeed Landorus when in Tailwind.

* Tera Water is a great defensive typing that allows it Incineroar to tera Terastallize out of its weaknesses, notably including Urshifu-R's Surging Strikes. Tera Ghost allows Incineroar to be become immune to Fake Out, (RC) and also helps assists (repetition following) against Dragonite; (ASC) , and Tera Grass helps Incineroar answer Urshifu-R and Ogerpon-W, also when not running Safety Goggles it can help against Amoonguss and can aid against Amoonguss if Incineroar is not using Safety Goggles.

[CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/yoko.617542/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/robbie35646.562330/
Grammar checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/user5.104/
implemented tysm
 
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:Incineroar:
[OVERVIEW]

* Incineroar serves as an extremely good utility Pokemon on all types of teams thanks to its ability Intimidate, as well as its good support movepool including Fake Out and Parting Shot; these traits have great synergy, together letting Incineroar it come in to hinder the opposing team and pivot out the following turn.

* Rillaboom and Urshifu-R are good partners with for Incineroar, forming a fantastic balance core with it, being able to pivot each other in to cover their respective weaknesses and put pressure on the majority of teams. (this is vague)

* Incineroar can struggle against Water-types like Urshifu-R that force it out, making it appreciate redirection support from Pokemon like Amoonguss; Amoonguss can also provide Incineroar it with healing and sleep support to make it even harder to remove, and Regenerator makes it consistently easy for Incineroar it to pivot into it Amoonguss. In return, Incineroar can force out other Grass-types like Rillaboom, Whimsicott, and opposing Amoonguss.

[SET]
Offensive Support (Incineroar) @ Sitrus Berry / Safety Goggles
Level: 50
Ability: Intimidate
EVs: 252 HP / 4 Atk / 140 Def / 76 SpD / 36 Spe
Tera Type: Water / Ghost / Grass
Careful Nature
- Fake Out
- Flare Blitz
- Parting Shot
- Knock Off

[SET COMMENTS]

* Knock Off can cripple debilitate Pokemon like Latias, Dondozo, and opposing Incineroar; it also gives Incineroar great synergy with Pokemon like Amoonguss, as it can remove Safety Goggles from foes.

* Incineroar utilizes Sitrus Berry to extend its longevity late-game, letting it survive Surging Strikes from Urshifu-R, while Safety Goggles helps against Amoonguss.

* This The given EV spread lets Incineroar notably survive two uses of Moonblasts Moonblast from Booster Energy Special Attack Booster Energy Flutter Mane and prevents it from being OHKOed by Iron Bundle's Hydro Pump. It also lets Incineroar outspeed Landorus when in Tailwind.

* Tera Water is a great defensive typing that allows Incineroar to Terastallize out of escape its weaknesses, notably including to Urshifu-R's Surging Strikes. Tera Ghost allows Incineroar to become immune to Fake Out and also assist assists against Dragonite; Tera Grass helps Incineroar answer Urshifu-R and Ogerpon-W, (comma) and can aid against Amoonguss if Incineroar is not using Safety Goggles.

[CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/yoko.617542/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/robbie35646.562330/
Grammar checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/therealbigc.532450/

1/1 GP Team done
Credit TheRealBigC too.
 

Yoko

I COULD BE BANNED!
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:Incineroar:
[OVERVIEW]

* Incineroar serves as an extremely good utility Pokemon on all types of teams thanks to its ability Intimidate, as well as its good support movepool including Fake Out and Parting Shot; these traits have great synergy, together letting Incineroar it come in to hinder the opposing team and pivot out the following turn.

* Rillaboom and Urshifu-R are good partners with for Incineroar, forming a fantastic balance core with it, being able to pivot each other in to cover their respective weaknesses and put pressure on the majority of teams. (this is vague)

* Incineroar can struggle against Water-types like Urshifu-R that force it out, making it appreciate redirection support from Pokemon like Amoonguss; Amoonguss can also provide Incineroar it with healing and sleep support to make it even harder to remove, and Regenerator makes it consistently easy for Incineroar it to pivot into it Amoonguss. In return, Incineroar can force out other Grass-types like Rillaboom, Whimsicott, and opposing Amoonguss.

[SET]
Offensive Support (Incineroar) @ Sitrus Berry / Safety Goggles
Level: 50
Ability: Intimidate
EVs: 252 HP / 4 Atk / 140 Def / 76 SpD / 36 Spe
Tera Type: Water / Ghost / Grass
Careful Nature
- Fake Out
- Flare Blitz
- Parting Shot
- Knock Off

[SET COMMENTS]

* Knock Off can cripple debilitate Pokemon like Latias, Dondozo, and opposing Incineroar; it also gives Incineroar great synergy with Pokemon like Amoonguss, as it can remove Safety Goggles from foes.

* Incineroar utilizes Sitrus Berry to extend its longevity late-game, letting it survive Surging Strikes from Urshifu-R, while Safety Goggles helps against Amoonguss.

* This The given EV spread lets Incineroar notably survive two uses of Moonblasts Moonblast from Booster Energy Special Attack Booster Energy Flutter Mane and prevents it from being OHKOed by Iron Bundle's Hydro Pump. It also lets Incineroar outspeed Landorus when in Tailwind.

* Tera Water is a great defensive typing that allows Incineroar to Terastallize out of escape its weaknesses, notably including to Urshifu-R's Surging Strikes. Tera Ghost allows Incineroar to become immune to Fake Out and also assist assists against Dragonite; Tera Grass helps Incineroar answer Urshifu-R and Ogerpon-W, (comma) and can aid against Amoonguss if Incineroar is not using Safety Goggles.

[CREDITS]
Written by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/yoko.617542/
Quality checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/robbie35646.562330/
Grammar checked by:
https://www.smogon.com/forums/members/therealbigc.532450/

1/1 GP Team done
Credit TheRealBigC too.
implemented tysm this is ready for upload
 

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