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Dragon Dance + 3 Attacks (Dragonite) @ Heavy-Duty Boots / Dragonium Z
Ability: Multiscale
Tera Type: Steel
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Dragon Dance
- Dual Wingbeat / Outrage / Extreme Speed
- Earthquake
- Ice Spinner / Fire Punch

[SET COMMENTS]
Dragonite is a threatening set up sweeper with its high Attack stat, colorful movepool, and good bulk in tandem with Multiscale to further support it. The aforementioned enables Dragonite to set up in front of revenge killers, such as Mega Diancie, Iron Valiant, and Mega Medicham. Dual Wingbeat provides good STAB for Dragonite, while Outrage with Dragonium Z gives Dragonite an immediate and powerful STAB that eliminates would-be checks like Landorus-T and Mega Tyranitar. Earthquake hits Pokemon like Heatran, Toxapex, and Mega Tyranitar. Ice Spinner let's Dragonite to heavily damage Gliscor, Landorus, and Zapdos. Fire Punch hits Steel-types that would check Dragonite like Ferrothorn and Mega Scizor for major damage. Tera Steel allows Dragonite to setup on Pokemon that otherwise threaten it, such as Weavile and Tapu Lele, and provide a Toxic immunity. Heavy Duty Boots prevents Dragonite from deactivating it's Multiscale from entry hazards. Dragonite plays a role as a set up sweeper on offensive teams, where Pokemon such as Choice Scarf Tapu Lele, Mega Lopunny, and Mega Diancie appreciate Dragonite’s ability to wear down or straight up remove the bulkier Pokemon like Heatran, Alomomola, and Iron Crown, respectively, so they can clean up after Dragonite. Dragonite utilizes its solid defensive utility with its typing to check Pokemon like Ogerpon-Wellspring and Rillaboom to benefit offensive teams in return. Dragonite also appreciates hazard support to weaken potential checks based on its coverage, such as Mega Scizor and Landorus-T, so Pokemon like Heatran, Gliscor, Hisuian Samurott, and Landorus-T pair well with it as well. Dragonite also fits well on Hyper Offensive teams with dual screens support from Tapu Koko or Grimmsnarl, where it can safely set up multiple Dragon Dances to lower the risk of being revenge killed by Pokemon like Iron Boulder, Tapu Lele, and Iron Valiant.

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Dragon Dance + 3 Attacks (Dragonite) @ Heavy-Duty Boots / Dragonium Z
Ability: Multiscale
Tera Type: Steel
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Dragon Dance
- Earthquake
- Dual Wingbeat / Fire Punch
- Ice Spinner / Outrage

[SET COMMENTS]
Even without Extreme Speed isn’t necessary to mention because what if a new player were to see this and be confused by not seeing espeed, Dragonite is still an imposing threat to the opposing team due to its vast coverage options and naturally high Attack this clarifies a bit what stat dnite is going to be using most of the time; you mentioned it’s solid bulk just after this and its speed isn’t THAT high stats that appreciate having both Speed and Physical Attack EV’s being maxed out and still having decent natural bulk for future reference, EVs go after the explanation of Tera, and you don’t need to explain obvious evs like max max. The combination of Dual Wingbeat, Earthquake, and Ice Spinner is capable of hitting every single pokemon allowed in National Dex OU for neutral damage at minimum, while hitting significant pokemon in the tier such as Landorus, Gliscor, Ogerpon-Wellspring, Iron Valiant, and Raging Bolt, and Heatran for super effective damage. Ok so you have the right idea here, but try and rearrange these moves into specific sentences explaining what they do. You don’t need to explain dwb because it’s a stab move self explanatory what it does but for ice spinner and eq do like “Ice spinner allows Dragonite to hit Pokemon like Landorus-T, Gliscor, and Zapdos. Earthquake is able to hit Pokemon that would otherwise take complete advantage of it such as Heatran and Toxapex.” Smth like that, or just put it in your own words [Multiscale enables Dragonite to set up Dragon Dance safely in scenarios other Pokemon that utilize set-up moves wouldn’t, most notability being able this is mainly just fluff; this isn’t an analysis on dnite compared to other setup sweepers but about dnite itself and explaining its traits so it’s clear why you’d use it to set up in front of Pokemon that otherwise OHKO it, such as Mega Diancie, Substitute Roost Kyurem, and Heavy Duty Boots Ice Fang Zamazenta.] what is in the brackets should be in the section about its role (before you explain its coverage) Multiscale also synergizes well with Terastal Type Steel to be able to eat another hit that Dragonite is otherwise weak to so you’ll be able to set up an additional Dragon Dance, even threatening to outspeed and KO Booster Energy users Allows Dragonite to setup on Pokemon that would otherwise threaten it greatly like Iron Boulder Tapu Lele and Iron Valiant Weavile Ok so from this section there are some things I’d like to note 1. I don’t see the correlation between Tera and multiscale 2. That line that was rewritten just added fluff that didn’t really make sense (as it can’t really setup and outspeed booster users, as it dances once when terad and then dies to both) 3. In that same line “You” is used, which shouldn’t be used in an analysis because the analysis is about dragonite itself, not how you use it as well as avoid Toxic from Pokémon like Alomomola and Toxapex. Heavy-Duty Boots protects Dragonite from deactivating Multiscale and losing ¼ of its health from Stealth Rocks. Additionally, you can A set running look above for why “you” is removed, “additionally” just makes the sentence sound weird since it’s not adding onto what boots does Fire Punch and Outrage over Dual Wingbeat and Ice Spinner run and Dragonium Z over Heavy Duty Boots can be used, and being able to Terstalize to still have perfect coverage while also with Fire Punch targeting Pokemon that would be either immune or take neutral damage from Earthquake such as Corviknight, Mega Scizor, and Ferrothorn, and Dragonium Z providing Dragonite with a nuke option to ensure a KO on pokemon such as Ursaluna Ting-Lu Ting is a much more quality example since it can whirlwind dnite out, Zapdos, and Unboosted Garganacl from at full HP, and Landorus-T, Alomomola and Dauntless Shield Boosted Zamazenta after chip damage. Dragonite plays a role as a win condition on Offensive and Bulky Offense teams, where Pokemon such as Choice Scarf Tapu Lele, Mega Lopunny, and Mega Diancie, Pokemon that have naturally high attacking stats but can’t incorporate set up moves into their movesets, fluff that doesn’t really add anything to what dnite does for its teammates appreciate Dragonite’s ability to wear down or straight up remove the bulkier Pokemon on the opponents team like Alomomola, Heatran, and Iron Crown so they can clean up after Dragonite. Tapu Lele in particular provides Dragonite with Psychic Terrain, protecting it from priority moves from Pokemon trying to revenge kill it such as Mega Lopunny and Mega Medicham’s Fake Out, Weavile’s Ice Shard, and Raging Bolt’s Thunderclap, Mega Mawile’s Sucker Punch and Mega Scizor and Mega Medicham’s Bullet Punch, moves that can overwhelm Dragonite and put it at risk of being KO’d, while also making Future Sight from Tapu Lele stronger to help with Dragonite’s ability to threaten and potentially sweep you don’t need to include that many examples and future sight doesn’t really help dnite THAT much. Mention here how it provides useful defensive utility for offensive teams by checking Pokémon like Serperior and Ogerpon-W Dragonite also appreciates hazard support to weaken potential checks depending on its coverage such as Mega Scizor and Landorus-T, so Pokemon like Heatran, Gliscor, Hisuian Samurott, and Landorus-T pair well with it as well. Dragonite also fits well on Hyper Offensive teams with Reflect and Light Screen dual screens support from Tapu Koko or Grimmsnarl, where it can safely set up multiple Dragon Dances without taking too much damage with the lowered threat of being revenge killed by Pokemon like Tapu Lele and Iron Valiant and have teammates that can simply out-muscle defensive mons that give it trouble, such as Pokemon with Unaware, Ferrothorn, Moltres, Zapdos, Slowbro, Corviknight, Skarmory, and Garganacl. this is way too many examples, making dnite appear less threatening than it already is; plus, this is what Ho is supposed to do and general knowledge of it anyways so it doesn’t need to be explained in an analysis about dnite

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Good analysis with the right content, just needed to be reworded and have certain things be removed to get the ideas across a little clearer.

This isn’t QC 1/2 yet, once you are done implementing this tag me and I’ll look through it again to make sure you did it all right / make sure I covered everything I saw. Good first analysis bro

 

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Dragon Dance + 3 Attacks (Dragonite) @ Heavy-Duty Boots / Dragonium Z
Ability: Multiscale
Tera Type: Steel
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Dragon Dance
- Earthquake
- Dual Wingbeat / Fire Punch
- Ice Spinner / Outrage

[SET COMMENTS]
Even without Extreme Speed isn’t necessary to mention because what if a new player were to see this and be confused by not seeing espeed, Dragonite is still an imposing threat to the opposing team due to its vast coverage options and naturally high Attack this clarifies a bit what stat dnite is going to be using most of the time; you mentioned it’s solid bulk just after this and its speed isn’t THAT high stats that appreciate having both Speed and Physical Attack EV’s being maxed out and still having decent natural bulk for future reference, EVs go after the explanation of Tera, and you don’t need to explain obvious evs like max max. The combination of Dual Wingbeat, Earthquake, and Ice Spinner is capable of hitting every single pokemon allowed in National Dex OU for neutral damage at minimum, while hitting significant pokemon in the tier such as Landorus, Gliscor, Ogerpon-Wellspring, Iron Valiant, and Raging Bolt, and Heatran for super effective damage. Ok so you have the right idea here, but try and rearrange these moves into specific sentences explaining what they do. You don’t need to explain dwb because it’s a stab move self explanatory what it does but for ice spinner and eq do like “Ice spinner allows Dragonite to hit Pokemon like Landorus-T, Gliscor, and Zapdos. Earthquake is able to hit Pokemon that would otherwise take complete advantage of it such as Heatran and Toxapex.” Smth like that, or just put it in your own words [Multiscale enables Dragonite to set up Dragon Dance safely in scenarios other Pokemon that utilize set-up moves wouldn’t, most notability being able this is mainly just fluff; this isn’t an analysis on dnite compared to other setup sweepers but about dnite itself and explaining its traits so it’s clear why you’d use it to set up in front of Pokemon that otherwise OHKO it, such as Mega Diancie, Substitute Roost Kyurem, and Heavy Duty Boots Ice Fang Zamazenta.] what is in the brackets should be in the section about its role (before you explain its coverage) Multiscale also synergizes well with Terastal Type Steel to be able to eat another hit that Dragonite is otherwise weak to so you’ll be able to set up an additional Dragon Dance, even threatening to outspeed and KO Booster Energy users Allows Dragonite to setup on Pokemon that would otherwise threaten it greatly like Iron Boulder Tapu Lele and Iron Valiant Weavile Ok so from this section there are some things I’d like to note 1. I don’t see the correlation between Tera and multiscale 2. That line that was rewritten just added fluff that didn’t really make sense (as it can’t really setup and outspeed booster users, as it dances once when terad and then dies to both) 3. In that same line “You” is used, which shouldn’t be used in an analysis because the analysis is about dragonite itself, not how you use it as well as avoid Toxic from Pokémon like Alomomola and Toxapex. Heavy-Duty Boots protects Dragonite from deactivating Multiscale and losing ¼ of its health from Stealth Rocks. Additionally, you can A set running look above for why “you” is removed, “additionally” just makes the sentence sound weird since it’s not adding onto what boots does Fire Punch and Outrage over Dual Wingbeat and Ice Spinner run and Dragonium Z over Heavy Duty Boots can be used, and being able to Terstalize to still have perfect coverage while also with Fire Punch targeting Pokemon that would be either immune or take neutral damage from Earthquake such as Corviknight, Mega Scizor, and Ferrothorn, and Dragonium Z providing Dragonite with a nuke option to ensure a KO on pokemon such as Ursaluna Ting-Lu Ting is a much more quality example since it can whirlwind dnite out, Zapdos, and Unboosted Garganacl from at full HP, and Landorus-T, Alomomola and Dauntless Shield Boosted Zamazenta after chip damage. Dragonite plays a role as a win condition on Offensive and Bulky Offense teams, where Pokemon such as Choice Scarf Tapu Lele, Mega Lopunny, and Mega Diancie, Pokemon that have naturally high attacking stats but can’t incorporate set up moves into their movesets, fluff that doesn’t really add anything to what dnite does for its teammates appreciate Dragonite’s ability to wear down or straight up remove the bulkier Pokemon on the opponents team like Alomomola, Heatran, and Iron Crown so they can clean up after Dragonite. Tapu Lele in particular provides Dragonite with Psychic Terrain, protecting it from priority moves from Pokemon trying to revenge kill it such as Mega Lopunny and Mega Medicham’s Fake Out, Weavile’s Ice Shard, and Raging Bolt’s Thunderclap, Mega Mawile’s Sucker Punch and Mega Scizor and Mega Medicham’s Bullet Punch, moves that can overwhelm Dragonite and put it at risk of being KO’d, while also making Future Sight from Tapu Lele stronger to help with Dragonite’s ability to threaten and potentially sweep you don’t need to include that many examples and future sight doesn’t really help dnite THAT much. Mention here how it provides useful defensive utility for offensive teams by checking Pokémon like Serperior and Ogerpon-W Dragonite also appreciates hazard support to weaken potential checks depending on its coverage such as Mega Scizor and Landorus-T, so Pokemon like Heatran, Gliscor, Hisuian Samurott, and Landorus-T pair well with it as well. Dragonite also fits well on Hyper Offensive teams with Reflect and Light Screen dual screens support from Tapu Koko or Grimmsnarl, where it can safely set up multiple Dragon Dances without taking too much damage with the lowered threat of being revenge killed by Pokemon like Tapu Lele and Iron Valiant and have teammates that can simply out-muscle defensive mons that give it trouble, such as Pokemon with Unaware, Ferrothorn, Moltres, Zapdos, Slowbro, Corviknight, Skarmory, and Garganacl. this is way too many examples, making dnite appear less threatening than it already is; plus, this is what Ho is supposed to do and general knowledge of it anyways so it doesn’t need to be explained in an analysis about dnite

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Good analysis with the right content, just needed to be reworded and have certain things be removed to get the ideas across a little clearer.

This isn’t QC 1/2 yet, once you are done implementing this tag me and I’ll look through it again to make sure you did it all right / make sure I covered everything I saw. Good first analysis bro

Adjustments have been made. Feel free to look over once more for edits.

 

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Dragonite utilizes its solid defensive utility with its typing to check Pokemon like Ogerpon-Wellspring, Serperior, and Rillaboom to benefit offensive teams in return.

This one is on me, I didn’t look at the context lolz

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put my user link in place of where under “quality checked by:” it says “user link 1 here”

QC 1/2! Make sure to reflect this in the title right next to where it says the name of the mon in the title

 

[Illouri]

awesome! thanks ineros

 

[hidin]

Dragon Dance + 3 Attacks (Dragonite) @ Heavy-Duty Boots / Dragonium Z
Ability: Multiscale
Tera Type: Steel
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Dragon Dance
- Dual Wingbeat / Outrage
- Earthquake
- Ice Spinner / Fire Punch

Make the set look like this, it's a little nitpicky but its neater.

[SET COMMENTS]
Dragonite is an imposing threat to the opposing team due to its vast coverage options, its naturally high Attack stat and decent natural bulk. Dragonite is a threatening set up sweeper with its high Attack stat, colorful movepool, and good bulk in tandem with Multiscale to further support it. Multiscale The aforementioned enables Dragonite to set up in front of Pokemon that otherwise OHKO it, revenge killers such as Mega Diancie, Substitute Roost Kyurem, and Ice Fang Zamazenta Iron Valiant, and Mega Medicham. Dual Wingbeat provides a strong Strong is generous, say good instead STAB move for Dragonite, while Outrage with Dragonium Z gives Dragonite an immediate and powerful STAB that eliminates would-be checks like Landorus-T and Mega Tyranitar. Earthquake hits Pokemon like Heatran, Toxapex, and Mega Tyranitar. Ice Spinner allows lets Dragonite to heavily damage Gliscor, Landorus-T, and Zapdos. and Earthquake allows it to hit Heatran, Toxapex, and Iron Crown. Fire Punch hits Steel-types that would check Dragonite like Ferrothorn and Mega Scizor for major damage. Tera Steel allows Dragonite to set up on Pokemon that otherwise threaten it immensely, such as Weavile and Tapu Lele, and to be immune to Pokemon like Toxapex and Alomomola clicking Toxic provides a Toxic immunity. Heavy-Duty Boots protects Prevents is probably better to say here Dragonite from deactivating its Multiscale and losing ¼ of its health from Stealth Rock from entry hazards. A set running Fire Punch, Outrage, and Dragonium Z over Dual Wingbeat and Ice Spinner and Heavy Duty Boots with Fire Punch threatening Pokemon that can shake off or are immune to an Earthquake, such as Corviknight, Ferrothorn, and Mega Scizor, and Dragonium Z providing Dragonite with a nuke option to ensure a KO on pokemon such as Ting-Lu, Zapdos, and Unboosted Garganacl from at full HP, and Landorus-T, Alomomola and Dauntless Shield Boosted Zamazenta after chip damage. Yeah this whole part is just really weird, I dont like it since its a major sidetrack Dragonite plays a role as a win condition Win con is acceptable to say I think but why not just say set up sweeper on Offensive and Bulky Offense teams, This confuses me as a setence... where Pokemon such as Choice Scarf Tapu Lele, Mega Lopunny I don't think Lop and Dnite are quite syngeristic in general but its fine, and Mega Diancie appreciate Dragonite’s ability to wear down or straight up remove the bulkier Pokemon like Alomomola, Heatran, and Iron Crown Order the checks in the way you order the offensive Pokemon, so "Heatran, Alomomola, and Iron Crown, respectively." so they can clean up after Dragonite. Tapu Lele in particular provides Dragonite with Psychic Terrain, protecting it from priority moves from Pokemon trying to revenge kill such as Mega Lopunny and Mega Medicham’s Fake Out, Weavile’s Ice Shard and Raging Bolt’s Thunderclap. It's a flying type... Dragonite utilizes its solid defensive utility with its typing to check Pokemon like Ogerpon-Wellspring and Rillaboom to benefit offensive teams in return. Dragonite also appreciates hazard support to weaken potential checks based on its coverage, such as Mega Scizor and Landorus-T, so Pokemon like Heatran, Gliscor, Hisuian Samurott, and Landorus-T pair well with it as well. Dragonite also fits well on Hyper Offensive teams with dual screens support from Tapu Koko or Grimmsnarl, where it can safely set up multiple Dragon Dances to lower the risk of being revenge killed by Pokemon like Iron Boulder, Tapu Lele, and Iron Valiant.

Will need to look this over again once implemented

 

[Illouri]

Will need to look this over again once implemented

i completely forgot about flyings being immune to terrain, thats my bad . Adjustments have been made, feel free to review once more.

 

[Illouri]

okay last time they didn't save but FOR REAL THIS TIME adjustments have been made. Thank you hidin for catching this for me

 

[hidin]

slash extreme speed behind dwb, you dont need to mention it since its p self explanatory
otherwise 2/2 sorry for the late response @ illouri

 

[Illouri]

slash extreme speed behind dwb, you dont need to mention it since its p self explanatory
otherwise 2/2 sorry for the late response @ illouri

at long last
I appreciate it though,regardless of how long it took
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Dragon Dance + 3 Attacks (Dragonite) @ Heavy-Duty Boots / Dragonium Z
Ability: Multiscale
Tera Type: Steel
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Dragon Dance
- Dual Wingbeat / Outrage / Extreme Speed
- Earthquake
- Ice Spinner / Fire Punch

[SET COMMENTS]
Dragonite is a threatening set up setup sweeper with its a high Attack stat, colorful movepool, and good bulk in tandem with Multiscale to further support it. The aforementioned Multiscale enables Dragonite to set up in front of revenge killers (RC) examples are needed to properly define 'revenge killers' such as Mega Diancie, Iron Valiant, and Mega Medicham. Dual Wingbeat provides a good STAB option STAB by itself refers to the bonus itself for Dragonite, while Outrage with Dragonium Z gives Dragonite an immediate, (AC) and powerful STAB move that eliminates to eliminate would-be checks like Landorus-T and Mega Tyranitar. Earthquake hits Pokemon like Heatran, Toxapex, and Mega Tyranitar. Ice Spinner let's lets Dragonite to heavily damage Gliscor, Landorus-T landorus is banned, and Zapdos. Fire Punch hits Steel-types that would check Dragonite implied like Ferrothorn and Mega Scizor for major damage. Tera Steel allows Dragonite to setup set up on Pokemon that otherwise threaten it, such as Weavile and Tapu Lele, and provide provides a Toxic immunity. Heavy Duty Boots prevents Dragonite from deactivating it's Multiscale from entry hazards entry hazards from deactivating Dragonite's Multiscale swapped subject. Dragonite plays a role as a set up sweeper fits best its role as a setup sweeper has already been established, and it does not highlight the subject shift to partners well on offensive teams, where Pokemon such as Choice Scarf Tapu Lele, Mega Lopunny, and Mega Diancie appreciate Dragonite’s ability to wear down or straight up remove the bulkier Pokemon like Heatran, Alomomola, and Iron Crown (RC) respectively (RC) unneeded so they can clean up after Dragonite. They also appreciate Dragonite's ability Dragonite utilizes its solid defensive utility with its typing to check Pokemon like Ogerpon-Wellspring and Rillaboom to benefit offensive teams in return this is a misuse of 'in return', given the preceding sentence already covered what Dragonite offers these teams. Dragonite also appreciates hazard support to weaken potential checks based on its coverage (RC) are you saying that it needs hazard chip to get these KOes with the coverage move, or are you saying that it needs it if it doesn't have the coverage move? It's arbitrary as written, but given that some variants of Mega Scizor need hazards chip to be OHKOed by Fire Punch and are unlikely to lose to non-fire punch sets regardless of hazards chip, I assumed the former. If this is incorrect, please clarify this such as Mega Scizor and Landorus-T, so Pokemon like Heatran, Gliscor, Hisuian Samurott, and Landorus-T also pair well with it as well. Dragonite also fits well on Hyper Offensive hyper offensive teams with dual screens support from Tapu Koko or Grimmsnarl, where it can safely set up multiple Dragon Dances to lower the risk of being revenge killed by Pokemon like Iron Boulder, Tapu Lele, and Iron Valiant.

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There is one aspect I'd like clarification on if at all possible, though.

Dragonite also appreciates hazard support to weaken potential checks based on its coverage (RC) are you saying that it needs hazard chip to get these KOes with the coverage move, or are you saying that it needs it if it doesn't have the coverage move? It's arbitrary as written, but given that some variants of Mega Scizor need hazards chip to be OHKOed by Fire Punch and are unlikely to lose to non-fire punch sets regardless of hazards chip, I assumed the former. If this is incorrect, please clarify this such as Mega Scizor and Landorus-T

 

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Dragon Dance + 3 Attacks (Dragonite) @ Heavy-Duty Boots / Dragonium Z
Ability: Multiscale
Tera Type: Steel
EVs: 252 Atk / 4 SpD / 252 Spe
Jolly Nature
- Dragon Dance
- Dual Wingbeat / Outrage / Extreme Speed
- Earthquake
- Ice Spinner / Fire Punch

[SET COMMENTS]
Dragonite is a threatening set up setup sweeper with its a high Attack stat, colorful movepool, and good bulk in tandem with Multiscale to further support it. The aforementioned Multiscale enables Dragonite to set up in front of revenge killers (RC) examples are needed to properly define 'revenge killers' such as Mega Diancie, Iron Valiant, and Mega Medicham. Dual Wingbeat provides a good STAB option STAB by itself refers to the bonus itself for Dragonite, while Outrage with Dragonium Z gives Dragonite an immediate, (AC) and powerful STAB move that eliminates to eliminate would-be checks like Landorus-T and Mega Tyranitar. Earthquake hits Pokemon like Heatran, Toxapex, and Mega Tyranitar. (random bolded period here, make sure to unbold) Ice Spinner let's lets Dragonite to heavily damage Gliscor, Landorus-T landorus is banned, and Zapdos. Fire Punch hits Steel-types that would check Dragonite like Ferrothorn and Mega Scizor for major damage. Tera Steel allows Dragonite to setup set up on Pokemon that otherwise threaten it, such as Weavile and Tapu Lele, and provide provides a Toxic immunity. Heavy-Duty (ah) Boots prevents Dragonite from deactivating it's Multiscale from entry hazards entry hazards from deactivating Dragonite's Multiscale swapped subject. Dragonite plays a role as a set up sweeper fits best its role as a setup sweeper has already been established, and it does not highlight the subject shift to partners well on offensive teams, where Pokemon such as Choice Scarf Tapu Lele, Mega Lopunny, and Mega Diancie appreciate Dragonite’s ability to wear down or straight up remove the bulkier Pokemon like Heatran, Alomomola, and Iron Crown (RC) respectively (RC) unneeded so they can clean up after Dragonite. Dragonite In addition, it benefits offensive teams by utilizes utilizing its solid defensive utility with its and typing to check Pokemon like Ogerpon-Wellspring and Rillaboom to benefit offensive teams in return this is a misuse of 'in return', given the preceding sentence already covered what Dragonite offers these teams. Dragonite also (reducing repetitive sentence beginnings between this sentence and the following sentence) appreciates hazard support to weaken potential checks based on its coverage (RC) are you saying that it needs hazard chip to get these KOes with the coverage move, or are you saying that it needs it if it doesn't have the coverage move? It's arbitrary as written, but given that some variants of Mega Scizor need hazards chip to be OHKOed by Fire Punch and are unlikely to lose to non-fire punch sets regardless of hazards chip, I assumed the former. If this is incorrect, please clarify this such as Mega Scizor and Landorus-T, so Pokemon like Heatran, Gliscor, Hisuian Samurott, and Landorus-T also pair well with it as well. Dragonite also fits well on Hyper Offensive hyper offense teams with dual screens support from Tapu Koko or Grimmsnarl, where it can safely set up multiple Dragon Dances to lower the risk of being revenge killed by Pokemon like Iron Boulder, Tapu Lele, and Iron Valiant.

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