STAB Cloyster [DONE]

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[SET]
name: Shell Smash Sweeper
move 1: Shell Smash
move 2: Water Shuriken
move 3: Freeze-Dry
move 4: Icicle Spear
item: Life Orb
ability: Skill Link
nature: Rash
evs: 168 Atk / 252 SpA / 88 Spe
ivs: 29 HP

[SET COMMENTS]

Cloyster is a terrifying sweeper on hyper offense, utilizing the unique combination of Shell Smash, Skill Link, and Water Shuriken to snowball through teams with ease. With an incredibly high Defense stat, it gets many opportunities to set up on Pokemon like Seismitoad and Weavile. Water Shuriken always hits five times thanks to Skill Link, and it preempts Accelerock users like Aerodactyl and Terrakion after Shell Smash, preventing Cloyster from being revenge killed as easily. It also lets Cloyster reliably deal with weakened Choice Scarf users like Gengar, as well as naturally faster Pokemon like Zeraora. Freeze-Dry hits bulky Water-types like Rotom-W and Toxapex, which would otherwise wall it completely. Icicle Spear provides stronger neutral coverage for bulky Pokemon like Ferrothorn, Blissey, and Clefable, and it being physical lets Cloyster better threaten Kyurem and Sylveon. Life Orb gives Cloyster the extra power it needs to break past bulky walls like Galarian Slowking and Buzzwole. 88 Speed EVs let Cloyster outspeed Aerodactyl, and 29 HP IVs minimize Life Orb recoil. Teammates like Buzzwole and Mimikyu can soften up teams for Cloyster to clean up. Cloyster's ability to remove Water-types like Toxapex and Rotom-W massively benefits teammates that tend to struggle against them, like Urshifu-R and Scizor. Due to entry hazards severely cutting into Cloyster's longevity and making it vulnerable to priority moves, entry hazard control is very important. Taunt leads like Mew and Heatran can prevent hazards from going up in the first place, and offensive entry hazard removers like Obstagoon, Tornadus-T, and Diggersby can remove them.

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[SET]
name: Shell Smash Sweeper
move 1: Shell Smash
move 2: Water Shuriken
move 3: Freeze Dry
move 4: Icicle Spear
item: Life Orb
ability: Skill Link
nature: Rash
evs: 168 Atk / 252 SpA / 88 Spe
ivs: 29 HP

[SET COMMENTS]

Cloyster is a terrifying sweeper on hyper offense, utilizing the unique combination of Shell Smash, Skill Link, and Water Shuriken to snowball teams with ease. With an incredibly high Defense stat, it is given many opportunities to set up on Pokemon like Seismitoad and Weavile. Water Shuriken always hits five times thanks to Skill Link and out-prioritizes Accelerock users like Aerodactyl and Terrakion, preventing Cloyster from being revenge killed as easily. It also lets Cloyster reliably deal with Choice Scarf users like Gengar, as well as naturally faster Pokemon like Zeraora. Freeze Dry allows Cloyster to hit bulky Water-types like Rotom-W and Toxapex, as they would otherwise wall it completely. Icicle Spear provides stronger, neutral coverage that hits Pokemon like Ferrothorn, Blissey, and Clefable, and lets Cloyster adequately threaten the likes of Tornadus-T, Zapdos, and Latios Freeze Dry OHKOs all 3 of these mons at +2. You could mention Pokemon like Kyurem and Sylveon instead if you want. Life Orb gives Cloyster the extra power boost it needs to break past bulky walls like Galarian Slowking and Buzzwole. 88 Speed EVs allow Cloyster to outspeed Aerodactyl to hit Aerodactyl with Water Shuriken before it can revenge kill with Accelerock you already mention Water Shuriken to go before Accelerock earlier in the paragraph so mentioning it again isnt needed, and 29 HP IVs let Cloyster get off an extra attack before fainting of Life Orb recoil. Pokemon like Scizor and Crawdaunt appreciate Cloyster baiting bulky Water-types, and are therefore fantastic partners. Even with the Speed boost from Shell Smash, Cloyster is still outsped by Choice Scarf Latios. As such, Pokemon that can take advantage of Latios like Mimikyu and Scizor are good partners.


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[SET]
name: Shell Smash Sweeper
move 1: Shell Smash
move 2: Water Shuriken
move 3: Freeze Dry
move 4: Icicle Spear
item: Life Orb
ability: Skill Link
nature: Rash
evs: 168 Atk / 252 SpA / 88 Spe
ivs: 29 HP

[SET COMMENTS]

Cloyster is a terrifying sweeper on hyper offense, utilizing the unique combination of Shell Smash, Skill Link, and Water Shuriken to snowball teams with ease. With an incredibly high Defense stat, it is given many opportunities to set up on Pokemon like Seismitoad and Weavile. Water Shuriken always hits five times thanks to Skill Link and out-prioritizes Accelerock users like Aerodactyl and Terrakion, preventing Cloyster from being revenge killed as easily. It also lets Cloyster reliably deal with Choice Scarf users like Gengar, as well as naturally faster Pokemon like Zeraora. Freeze Dry allows Cloyster to hit bulky Water-types like Rotom-W and Toxapex, as they would otherwise wall it completely. Icicle Spear provides stronger, neutral coverage that hits Pokemon like Ferrothorn, Blissey, and Clefable, and lets Cloyster better threaten Kyurem and Sylveon. Life Orb gives Cloyster the extra power boost it needs to break past bulky walls like Galarian Slowking and Buzzwole. 88 Speed EVs let Cloyster outspeed Aerodactyl at +2, and 29 HP IVs let Cloyster get off an extra attack before fainting of Life Orb recoil. Pokemon like Scizor and Crawdaunt appreciate Cloyster baiting bulky Water-types, and are therefore fantastic partners. Teammates like Buzzwole and Mimikyu can soften up teams to allow Cloyster to clean up. Cloysters ability to remove Water-types like Toxapex and Rotom-W make it incredibly appreciated by teammates that tend to struggle against them like Urshifu-R and Scizor. Even with the Speed boost from Shell Smash, Cloyster is still outsped by Choice Scarf Latios. As such, Pokemon that can take advantage of Latios like Mimikyu and Scizor are good partners. Lastly, due to entry hazards severely cutting into Cloysters longevity and making it vulnerable to priority, entry hazard control is very important. Taunt leads like Mew and Heatran can prevent hazards from going up in the first place, and offensive hazard removers like Obstagoon, Tornadus-T, and Diggersby can also help.


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[SET]
name: Shell Smash Sweeper
move 1: Shell Smash
move 2: Water Shuriken
move 3: Freeze-Dry (added hyphen)
move 4: Icicle Spear
item: Life Orb
ability: Skill Link
nature: Rash
evs: 168 Atk / 252 SpA / 88 Spe
ivs: 29 HP

[SET COMMENTS]

Cloyster is a terrifying sweeper on hyper offense, utilizing the unique combination of Shell Smash, Skill Link, and Water Shuriken to snowball through teams with ease. With an incredibly high Defense stat, it is given gets many opportunities to set up on Pokemon like Seismitoad and Weavile. Water Shuriken always hits five times thanks to Skill Link and out-prioritizes Accelerock users like Aerodactyl and Terrakion, Link, and it preempts Accelerock users like Aerodactyl and Terrakion after Shell Smash, preventing Cloyster from being revenge killed as easily. It also lets Cloyster reliably deal with Choice Scarf users like Gengar before Shell Smash, (I imagine? as otherwise you could just use icicle spear? would specifying "weakened" Choice Scarf users or smth be appropriate?) as well as naturally faster Pokemon like Zeraora. Freeze Dry allows Cloyster to hit Freeze-Dry hits bulky Water-types like Rotom-W and Toxapex, as they which would otherwise wall it completely. Icicle Spear provides stronger (RC) neutral coverage that hits for bulky ("bulky" optional) Pokemon like Ferrothorn, Blissey, and Clefable, and it being physical (i mean, just the power lets cloyster "better threaten" these mons; i imagine it being physical is what moves the needle towards putting kyurem and sylveon in a diff clause? if i misunderstand, maybe kyurem and sylveon can just be moved right after clefable in the comma list?) lets Cloyster better threaten Kyurem and Sylveon. Life Orb gives Cloyster the extra power boost it needs to break past bulky walls like Galarian Slowking and Buzzwole. 88 Speed EVs let Cloyster outspeed Aerodactyl, and 29 HP IVs let Cloyster get off an extra attack before fainting of minimize (i dont think the extra attack is guaranteed for all different values of prior damage, so i imagine this change works? you can change or we can talk if you want smth different though) Life Orb recoil. Teammates like Buzzwole and Mimikyu can soften up teams to allow for Cloyster to clean up. Cloyster's ability to remove Water-types like Toxapex and Rotom-W make it incredibly appreciated by massively benefits (diction changeable, but the intent is passive voice -> active voice) teammates that tend to struggle against them, (AC) like Urshifu-R and Scizor. Due to entry hazards severely cutting into Cloyster's longevity and making it vulnerable to priority moves, entry hazard control is very important. Taunt leads like Mew and Heatran can prevent entry hazards from going up in the first place, (AC) and offensive entry hazard removers like Obstagoon, Tornadus-T, and Diggersby can also help. remove them.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Sulo, 528036]]
- Quality checked by: [[in the hills, 324242], [pannu, 517892]]
- Grammar checked by: [[Adeleine, 517429]]
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Sulo

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[SET]
name: Shell Smash Sweeper
move 1: Shell Smash
move 2: Water Shuriken
move 3: Freeze-Dry (added hyphen)
move 4: Icicle Spear
item: Life Orb
ability: Skill Link
nature: Rash
evs: 168 Atk / 252 SpA / 88 Spe
ivs: 29 HP

[SET COMMENTS]

Cloyster is a terrifying sweeper on hyper offense, utilizing the unique combination of Shell Smash, Skill Link, and Water Shuriken to snowball through teams with ease. With an incredibly high Defense stat, it is given gets many opportunities to set up on Pokemon like Seismitoad and Weavile. Water Shuriken always hits five times thanks to Skill Link and out-prioritizes Accelerock users like Aerodactyl and Terrakion, Link, and it preempts Accelerock users like Aerodactyl and Terrakion after Shell Smash, preventing Cloyster from being revenge killed as easily. It also lets Cloyster reliably deal with Choice Scarf users like Gengar before Shell Smash, (I imagine? as otherwise you could just use icicle spear? would specifying "weakened" Choice Scarf users or smth be appropriate?) as well as naturally faster Pokemon like Zeraora. Freeze Dry allows Cloyster to hit Freeze-Dry hits bulky Water-types like Rotom-W and Toxapex, as they which would otherwise wall it completely. Icicle Spear provides stronger (RC) neutral coverage that hits for bulky ("bulky" optional) Pokemon like Ferrothorn, Blissey, and Clefable, and it being physical (i mean, just the power lets cloyster "better threaten" these mons; i imagine it being physical is what moves the needle towards putting kyurem and sylveon in a diff clause? if i misunderstand, maybe kyurem and sylveon can just be moved right after clefable in the comma list?) lets Cloyster better threaten Kyurem and Sylveon. Life Orb gives Cloyster the extra power boost it needs to break past bulky walls like Galarian Slowking and Buzzwole. 88 Speed EVs let Cloyster outspeed Aerodactyl, and 29 HP IVs let Cloyster get off an extra attack before fainting of minimize (i dont think the extra attack is guaranteed for all different values of prior damage, so i imagine this change works? you can change or we can talk if you want smth different though) Life Orb recoil. Teammates like Buzzwole and Mimikyu can soften up teams to allow for Cloyster to clean up. Cloyster's ability to remove Water-types like Toxapex and Rotom-W make it incredibly appreciated by massively benefits (diction changeable, but the intent is passive voice -> active voice) teammates that tend to struggle against them, (AC) like Urshifu-R and Scizor. Due to entry hazards severely cutting into Cloyster's longevity and making it vulnerable to priority moves, entry hazard control is very important. Taunt leads like Mew and Heatran can prevent entry hazards from going up in the first place, (AC) and offensive entry hazard removers like Obstagoon, Tornadus-T, and Diggersby can also help. remove them.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Sulo, 528036]]
- Quality checked by: [[in the hills, 324242], [pannu, 517892]]
- Grammar checked by: [[Adeleine, 517429]]
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