OU Calm Mind Iron Valiant [QC 2/2] [GP 1/1]

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name: Calm Mind
move 1: Calm Mind
move 2: Moonblast
move 3: Thunderbolt
move 4: Psyshock
item: Booster Energy
tera type: Fairy / Electric
ability: Quark Drive
nature: Timid
evs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Iron Valiant utilizes a deadly combination of offensive power, coverage, and Speed to function as one of the best sweepers in OU. After a Quark Drive boost, Iron Valiant outspeeds and OHKOes a plethora of premier offensive threats in the tier, such as Chien-Pao, Dragapult, Meowscarada, and Roaring Moon. Thunderbolt allows Iron Valiant to damage Corviknight and bulky Water-types like Dondozo, Azumarill, Toxapex, and Tera Water Garganacl, while Psyshock scores a 2HKO on any Clodsire looking to stop Iron Valiant's sweep. With Calm Mind, Iron Valiant can switch roles from an endgame sweeper to a powerful wallbreaker. After one Calm Mind, Moonblast 2HKOes defensive Garganacl, and +1 Tera Electric Thunderbolt 2HKOes specially defensive Slowking and OHKOes Corviknight. Tera Fairy powers up Moonblast, which can now 2HKO Garganacl and Hatterene. Tera Electric boosts the power of Thunderbolt, which secures important 2HKOs on specially defensive Dodonzo, Corviknight, and Toxapex, lets Iron Valiant survive Scizor's Bullet Punch, and grants Iron Valiant an immunity to paralysis from Hatterene's Nuzzle.

Iron Valiant relies heavily on its super-effective coverage moves for damage output. As a result, it struggles to make progress against Pokemon like Volcarona, Skeledirge, and Gholdengo. Thus, teammates like Clodsire and Ting-Lu are good defensive partners for Iron Valiant, with the added benefit of being able to set up entry hazards. Iron Moth has strong offensive synergy with Iron Valiant, being able to threaten Amoonguss, Iron Treads, and Tera Fairy Garganacl, while also being able to chip down special walls like Clodsire. On offense teams, Iron Valiant complements powerful wallbreakers like Chien-Pao, Nasty Plot Gholdengo, and Kingambit, since they can overwhelm defensive cores and open up the path for Iron Valiant to sweep. Finally, Iron Valiant is highly reliant on Booster Energy to sweep, as it cannot normally outspeed common revenge-killers like Chien-Pao, Dragapult, Cinderace, and Meowscarada. Therefore, it is important to time when to switch in to Iron Valiant to ensure defensive counters like Skeledirge and Volcarona are either removed or heavily damaged so it can sweep or break through the opposing team effectively. Along these lines, it is important to conserve Iron Valiant's health, since it can survive key priority moves such as Extreme Speed from Tera Normal Dragonite after a Dragon Dance and Ice Shard from Choice Band Chien-Pao. Therefore, Pokemon that can remove entry hazards, such as Great Tusk and Iron Treads, are great teammates for Iron Valiant.

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name: Calm Mind
move 1: Moonblast
move 2: Thunderbolt
move 3: Psyshock
move 4: Calm Mind
item: Booster Energy
tera type: Electric
ability: Quark Drive
nature: Timid
evs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Rearrange the moveset so that Calm Mind is the first move. The move featured in the set name should always be the first move.

Iron Valiant utilizes a deadly combination of offensive power, coverage, and speed to function as one of the best sweepers in the tier. After a Quark Drive boost from Booster Energy, Iron Valiant outspeeds and OHKOs a plethora of premier offensive threats in the tier such as Chien-Pao, Dragapult Meowscarada, and Roaring Moon with Moonblast. Tera Electric Thunderbolt allows Iron Valiant to cleanly 2HKO Corviknight, Dondozo, Azumarill, Toxapex and Tera Water Garganacl while Psyshock scores a 2HKO on any Clodsire looking to stop Iron Valiants sweep. Thanks to Iron Valiant's passable physical bulk and its ability to force switches, it can often find situations to set up a Calm Mind to do even more damage. Calm Mind turns Iron Valiant from an endgame sweeper to a powerful breaker. with +1 After one Calm Mind, Moonblast 2HKOesing Defensive Garganacl and +1 Tera Electric Thunderbolt flat out OHKOesing Corviknight and specially defensive Slowking. I'd suggest to transfer the Calm Mind sentences to be earlier since it is the featured move of the set.

Iron Valiant relies heavily on its super-effective coverage for damage output and struggles to make progress against pokemon like Volcarona, Skeledirge, Amoonguss, Gholdengo and Tera Fairy Garganacl. Thus, pokemon like Clodsire and Ting-Lu which can shut down Volcarona, Skeledirge and non-Tera Flying Gholdengo (without Tera Flying) form good defensive partners for Iron Valiant and have the added benefit of being able to set up Stealth Rock or Spikes entry hazards. On offense, Iron Valiant complements powerful breakers like Chien-Pao, Nasty Plot Gholdengo and Kingambit since they can overwhelm defensive cores and open up the path for an Iron Valiant sweep. Finally, Iron Valiant is highly reliant on Booster Energy to sweep since it cannot normally outspeed common revenge-killers like Chien-Pao, Dragapult, Cinderace, and Meowscarada. Therefore, it is important to plan long-term before bringing in Iron Valiant to ensure defensive counters like Skeledirge and Volcarona are either removed or heavily damaged so it can sweep or break the opposing team effectively. You can also mention forms of hazard removal, since after Tera Iron Valiant becomes more susceptible to them.

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name: Calm Mind
move 1: Moonblast
move 2: Thunderbolt
move 3: Psyshock
move 4: Calm Mind
item: Booster Energy
tera type: Electric
ability: Quark Drive
nature: Timid
evs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe
Rearrange the moveset so that Calm Mind is the first move. The move featured in the set name should always be the first move.

Iron Valiant utilizes a deadly combination of offensive power, coverage, and speed to function as one of the best sweepers in the tier. After a Quark Drive boost from Booster Energy, Iron Valiant outspeeds and OHKOs a plethora of premier offensive threats in the tier such as Chien-Pao, Dragapult Meowscarada, and Roaring Moon with Moonblast. Tera Electric Thunderbolt allows Iron Valiant to cleanly 2HKO Corviknight, Dondozo, Azumarill, Toxapex and Tera Water Garganacl while Psyshock scores a 2HKO on any Clodsire looking to stop Iron Valiants sweep. Thanks to Iron Valiant's passable physical bulk and its ability to force switches, it can often find situations to set up a Calm Mind to do even more damage. Calm Mind turns Iron Valiant from an endgame sweeper to a powerful breaker. with +1 After one Calm Mind, Moonblast 2HKOesing Defensive Garganacl and +1 Tera Electric Thunderbolt flat out OHKOesing Corviknight and specially defensive Slowking. I'd suggest to transfer the Calm Mind sentences to be earlier since it is the featured move of the set.

Iron Valiant relies heavily on its super-effective coverage for damage output and struggles to make progress against pokemon like Volcarona, Skeledirge, Amoonguss, Gholdengo and Tera Fairy Garganacl. Thus, pokemon like Clodsire and Ting-Lu which can shut down Volcarona, Skeledirge and non-Tera Flying Gholdengo (without Tera Flying) form good defensive partners for Iron Valiant and have the added benefit of being able to set up Stealth Rock or Spikes entry hazards. On offense, Iron Valiant complements powerful breakers like Chien-Pao, Nasty Plot Gholdengo and Kingambit since they can overwhelm defensive cores and open up the path for an Iron Valiant sweep. Finally, Iron Valiant is highly reliant on Booster Energy to sweep since it cannot normally outspeed common revenge-killers like Chien-Pao, Dragapult, Cinderace, and Meowscarada. Therefore, it is important to plan long-term before bringing in Iron Valiant to ensure defensive counters like Skeledirge and Volcarona are either removed or heavily damaged so it can sweep or break the opposing team effectively. You can also mention forms of hazard removal, since after Tera Iron Valiant becomes more susceptible to them.

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name: Calm Mind
move 1: Calm Mind
move 2: Moonblast
move 3: Thunderbolt
move 4: Psyshock
item: Booster Energy
tera type: Electric / Fairy
ability: Quark Drive
nature: Timid
evs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe

Iron Valiant utilizes a deadly combination of offensive power, coverage, and speed to function as one of the best sweepers in the tier. After a Quark Drive boost from Booster Energy, Iron Valiant outspeeds and OHKOs a plethora of premier offensive threats in the tier such as Chien-Pao, Dragapult Meowscarada, and Roaring Moon with Moonblast. Tera Electric Thunderbolt allows Iron Valiant to cleanly 2HKO Corviknight, Dondozo, Azumarill, Toxapex and Tera Water Garganacl Since Tera Fairy should be slashed in, you should explain both Tera Electric and Tera Fairy in depth after all the moves get explanation. You can explain how Tera Electric boosts the power of Thunderbolt in that section. It should also be noted that Electric makes you resist Scizor's Bullet Punch and makes you immune to paralysis. while Psyshock scores a 2HKO on any Clodsire looking to stop Iron Valiant's sweep. Thanks to Iron Valiant's passable physical bulk and its ability to force switches, it can often find situations to set up a Calm Mind to do even more damage. Fluff. Calm Mind turns Iron Valiant from an endgame sweeper to a powerful breaker. After one Calm Mind, Moonblast 2HKOs Defensive Garganacl and +1 Tera Electric Thunderbolt flat out OHKOs Corviknight and specially defensive Slowking.

Iron Valiant relies heavily on its super-effective coverage for damage output and struggles to make progress against Pokemon like Volcarona, Skeledirge, Amoonguss, Gholdengo and Tera Fairy Garganacl. Thus, pokemon like Clodsire and Ting-Lu which can shut down Volcarona, Skeledirge and non-Tera Flying Gholdengo you mention these in the sentence prior, no need to mention them again form good defensive partners for Iron Valiant and have the added benefit of being able to set up entry hazards. On offense, Iron Valiant complements powerful breakers like Chien-Pao, Nasty Plot Gholdengo and Kingambit since they can overwhelm defensive cores and open up the path for an Iron Valiant sweep. Finally, Iron Valiant is highly reliant on Booster Energy to sweep since it cannot normally outspeed common revenge-killers like Chien-Pao, Dragapult, Cinderace, and Meowscarada. Therefore, it is important to plan long-term before bringing in Iron Valiant to ensure defensive counters like Skeledirge and Volcarona are either removed or heavily damaged so it can sweep or break the opposing team effectively. Along these lines, it is important to conserve Iron Valiant's health since it can live key priority moves such as Extreme Speed from Tera Normal Dragonite after a Dragon Dance and Ice Shard from Choice Band Chien-Pao. Therefore, Pokemon which can remove entry hazards such as Great Tusk and Iron Treads also form great teammates for Iron Valiant.

[CREDITS]
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name: Calm Mind
move 1: Calm Mind
move 2: Moonblast
move 3: Thunderbolt
move 4: Psyshock
item: Booster Energy
tera type: Fairy / Electric
ability: Quark Drive
nature: Timid
evs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe

Iron Valiant utilizes a deadly combination of offensive power, coverage, and speed to function as one of the best sweepers in the tier. After a Quark Drive boost from Booster Energy, Iron Valiant outspeeds and OHKOs a plethora of premier offensive threats in the tier such as Chien-Pao, Dragapult Meowscarada, and Roaring Moon. Thunderbolt allows Iron Valiant to damage Corviknight and bulky waters Water-types like Dondozo, Azumarill, Toxapex and Tera Water Garganacl while Psyshock scores a 2HKO on any Clodsire looking to stop Iron Valiants sweep. With Calm Mind, Iron Valiant can switch roles from an endgame sweeper to a powerful breaker. After one Calm Mind, Moonblast 2HKOs Defensive Garganacl and +1 Tera Electric Thunderbolt flat out OHKOs Corviknight and specially defensive Slowking (this is just not true. +1 252 SpA Tera Electric Iron Valiant Thunderbolt vs. 252 HP / 252+ SpD Slowking: 282-332 (71.5 - 84.2%) -- guaranteed 2HKO. I think what happened is that the calc will change the booster energy stat if you are holding the item and already boosted.). Tera Fairy powers up Moonblast which can now 2HKO Defensive Garganacl and Hatterene. Tera Electric boosted Thunderbolt secures critical 2HKOs on SpDef specially defensive Dondozo, Corviknight, and Toxapex while additionally letting Iron Valiant survive Bullet Punch from Scizor and being immune to paralysis from Hatterene's Nuzzle.

Iron Valiant relies heavily on its super-effective coverage for damage output and struggles to make progress against pokemon like Volcarona, Skeledirge, Amoonguss, and Gholdengo and Tera Fairy Garganacl. Thus, pokemon like Clodsire and Ting-Lu (Neither of these Pokemon actually threaten Amoonguss or Tera Fairy Garg, so I would take those out.) form good defensive partners for Iron Valiant and have the added benefit of being able to set up entry hazards. On offense, Iron Valiant complements powerful breakers like Chien-Pao, Nasty Plot Gholdengo and Kingambit since they can overwhelm defensive cores and open up the path for an Iron Valiant sweep. (Make mention of Iron Moth in its own sentence, which happens to threaten both Amoonguss and Tera Fairy Garg nicely while chipping special walls like Clodsire. It also threatens Iron Treads, a Pokemon that hard stops CM Valiant.) Finally, Iron Valiant is highly reliant on Booster Energy to sweep since it cannot normally outspeed common revenge-killers like Chien-Pao, Dragapult, Cinderace, and Meowscarada. Therefore, it is important to plan long-term before bringing in Iron Valiant to ensure defensive counters like Skeledirge and Volcarona are either removed or heavily damaged so it can sweep or break the opposing team effectively. Along these lines, it is important to conserve Iron Valiant's health since it can live key priority moves such as Extreme Speed from Tera Normal Dragonite after a Dragon Dance and Ice Shard from Choice Band Chien-Pao. Therefore, pokemon which can remove entry hazards such as Great Tusk and Iron Treads form great teammates for Iron Valiant.

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name: Calm Mind
move 1: Calm Mind
move 2: Moonblast
move 3: Thunderbolt
move 4: Psyshock
item: Booster Energy
tera type: Fairy / Electric
ability: Quark Drive
nature: Timid
evs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe

Iron Valiant utilizes a deadly combination of offensive power, coverage, and speed to function as one of the best sweepers in the tier. After a Quark Drive boost from Booster Energy, Iron Valiant outspeeds and OHKOs a plethora of premier offensive threats in the tier such as Chien-Pao, Dragapult Meowscarada, and Roaring Moon. Thunderbolt allows Iron Valiant to damage Corviknight and bulky waters Water-types like Dondozo, Azumarill, Toxapex and Tera Water Garganacl while Psyshock scores a 2HKO on any Clodsire looking to stop Iron Valiants sweep. With Calm Mind, Iron Valiant can switch roles from an endgame sweeper to a powerful breaker. After one Calm Mind, Moonblast 2HKOs Defensive Garganacl and +1 Tera Electric Thunderbolt flat out OHKOs Corviknight and specially defensive Slowking (this is just not true. +1 252 SpA Tera Electric Iron Valiant Thunderbolt vs. 252 HP / 252+ SpD Slowking: 282-332 (71.5 - 84.2%) -- guaranteed 2HKO. I think what happened is that the calc will change the booster energy stat if you are holding the item and already boosted.). Tera Fairy powers up Moonblast which can now 2HKO Defensive Garganacl and Hatterene. Tera Electric boosted Thunderbolt secures critical 2HKOs on SpDef specially defensive Dondozo, Corviknight, and Toxapex while additionally letting Iron Valiant survive Bullet Punch from Scizor and being immune to paralysis from Hatterene's Nuzzle.

Iron Valiant relies heavily on its super-effective coverage for damage output and struggles to make progress against pokemon like Volcarona, Skeledirge, Amoonguss, and Gholdengo and Tera Fairy Garganacl. Thus, pokemon like Clodsire and Ting-Lu (Neither of these Pokemon actually threaten Amoonguss or Tera Fairy Garg, so I would take those out.) form good defensive partners for Iron Valiant and have the added benefit of being able to set up entry hazards. On offense, Iron Valiant complements powerful breakers like Chien-Pao, Nasty Plot Gholdengo and Kingambit since they can overwhelm defensive cores and open up the path for an Iron Valiant sweep. (Make mention of Iron Moth in its own sentence, which happens to threaten both Amoonguss and Tera Fairy Garg nicely while chipping special walls like Clodsire. It also threatens Iron Treads, a Pokemon that hard stops CM Valiant.) Finally, Iron Valiant is highly reliant on Booster Energy to sweep since it cannot normally outspeed common revenge-killers like Chien-Pao, Dragapult, Cinderace, and Meowscarada. Therefore, it is important to plan long-term before bringing in Iron Valiant to ensure defensive counters like Skeledirge and Volcarona are either removed or heavily damaged so it can sweep or break the opposing team effectively. Along these lines, it is important to conserve Iron Valiant's health since it can live key priority moves such as Extreme Speed from Tera Normal Dragonite after a Dragon Dance and Ice Shard from Choice Band Chien-Pao. Therefore, pokemon which can remove entry hazards such as Great Tusk and Iron Treads form great teammates for Iron Valiant.

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- Quality checked by: [[chimp, 197439], [dex, 277988]]
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name: Calm Mind
move 1: Calm Mind
move 2: Moonblast
move 3: Thunderbolt
move 4: Psyshock
item: Booster Energy
tera type: Fairy / Electric
ability: Quark Drive
nature: Timid
evs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Iron Valiant utilizes a deadly combination of offensive power, coverage, and Speed speed to function as one of the best sweepers in OU. the tier. After a Quark Drive boost, from Booster Energy, Iron Valiant outspeeds and OHKOes a plethora of premier offensive threats in the tier, (AC) such as Chien-Pao, Dragapult, (AC) Meowscarada, and Roaring Moon. Thunderbolt allows Iron Valiant to damage Corviknight and bulky Water-types like Dondozo, Azumarill, Toxapex, (AC) and Tera Water Garganacl, (AC) while Psyshock scores a 2HKO on any Clodsire looking to stop Iron Valiant's (AA) sweep. With Calm Mind, Iron Valiant can switch roles from an endgame sweeper to a powerful wallbreaker. After one Calm Mind, Moonblast 2HKOes Defensive Garganacl and +1 Tera Electric Thunderbolt 2HKOes specially defensive Slowking and OHKOes flat out OHKOs Corviknight. Tera Fairy powers up Moonblast, (AC) which can now 2HKO defensive Defensive Garganacl and Hatterene. Tera Electric boosts the power of Thunderbolt, which secures important 2HKOes on specially defensive Dodonzo, Corviknight, and Toxapex, lets Iron Valiant survive Scizor's Bullet Punch, and grants Iron Valiant an immunity to paralysis from Hatterene's Nuzzle. boosted Thunderbolt secures critical 2HKOes on specially defensive Dondozo, Corviknight, and Toxapex while additionally letting Iron Valiant live Bullet Punch from Scizor and being immune to paralysis from Hatterene's Nuzzle.

Iron Valiant relies heavily on its super-effective (RH) coverage moves for damage output. (AP) and As a result, it struggles to make progress against Pokemon pokemon like Volcarona, Skeledirge, (AC) and Gholdengo. Thus, teammates pokemon like Clodsire and Ting-Lu are form good defensive partners for Iron Valiant, (AC) with and have the added benefit of being able to set up entry hazards. (separated sentences one and two because they make better sense to me when separated.) Iron Moth has strong offensive synergy with Iron Valiant, being able to threaten Amoonguss, Iron Treads, and Tera Fairy Garganacl, (AC) while also being able to chip down special walls like Clodsire. On offense teams, Iron Valiant complements powerful wallbreakers like Chien-Pao, Nasty Plot Gholdengo, (AC) and Kingambit, (AC) since they can overwhelm defensive cores and open up the path for an Iron Valiant to sweep. Finally, Iron Valiant is highly reliant on Booster Energy to sweep, (AC) as since it cannot normally outspeed common revenge-killers (RH) like Chien-Pao, Dragapult, Cinderace, and Meowscarada. Therefore, it is important to time when to switch in to plan long-term before bringing in Iron Valiant to ensure defensive counters like Skeledirge and Volcarona are either removed or heavily damaged, (AC) so it can sweep or break through the opposing team effectively. Along these lines, it is important to conserve Iron Valiant's health, (AC) since it can survive live key priority moves such as Extreme Speed from Tera Normal Dragonite after a Dragon Dance and Ice Shard from Choice Band Chien-Pao. Therefore, Pokemon pokemon which can remove entry hazards, (AC) such as Great Tusk and Iron Treads, (AC) are form great teammates for Iron Valiant.

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- Quality checked by: [[chimp, 197439], [dex, 277988]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
 

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name: Calm Mind
move 1: Calm Mind
move 2: Moonblast
move 3: Thunderbolt
move 4: Psyshock
item: Booster Energy
tera type: Fairy / Electric
ability: Quark Drive
nature: Timid
evs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Iron Valiant utilizes a deadly combination of offensive power, coverage, and Speed speed to function as one of the best sweepers in OU. the tier. After a Quark Drive boost, from Booster Energy, Iron Valiant outspeeds and OHKOes a plethora of premier offensive threats in the tier, (AC) such as Chien-Pao, Dragapult, (AC) Meowscarada, and Roaring Moon. Thunderbolt allows Iron Valiant to damage Corviknight and bulky Water-types like Dondozo, Azumarill, Toxapex, (AC) and Tera Water Garganacl, (AC) while Psyshock scores a 2HKO on any Clodsire looking to stop Iron Valiant's (AA) sweep. With Calm Mind, Iron Valiant can switch roles from an endgame sweeper to a powerful wallbreaker. After one Calm Mind, Moonblast 2HKOes Defensive defensive Garganacl, (AC) and +1 Tera Electric Thunderbolt 2HKOes specially defensive Slowking and OHKOes flat out OHKOs Corviknight. Tera Fairy powers up Moonblast, (AC) which can now 2HKO defensive Defensive Garganacl and Hatterene. Tera Electric boosts the power of Thunderbolt, which secures important 2HKOs (2hkos is the noun, 2hkoes is the verb) on specially defensive Dodonzo, Corviknight, and Toxapex, lets Iron Valiant survive Scizor's Bullet Punch, and grants Iron Valiant an immunity to paralysis from Hatterene's Nuzzle. boosted Thunderbolt secures critical 2HKOes on specially defensive Dondozo, Corviknight, and Toxapex while additionally letting Iron Valiant live Bullet Punch from Scizor and being immune to paralysis from Hatterene's Nuzzle. (you should explain tera fairy as well bc it's slashed)

Iron Valiant relies heavily on its super-effective (RH) coverage moves for damage output. (AP) and As a result, it struggles to make progress against Pokemon pokemon like Volcarona, Skeledirge, (AC) and Gholdengo. Thus, teammates pokemon like Clodsire and Ting-Lu are form good defensive partners for Iron Valiant, (AC) with and have the added benefit of being able to set up entry hazards. (separated sentences one and two because they make better sense to me when separated.) Iron Moth has strong offensive synergy with Iron Valiant, being able to threaten Amoonguss, Iron Treads, and Tera Fairy Garganacl, (AC) while also being able to chip down special walls like Clodsire. On offense teams, Iron Valiant complements powerful wallbreakers like Chien-Pao, Nasty Plot Gholdengo, (AC) and Kingambit, (AC) since they can overwhelm defensive cores and open up the path for an Iron Valiant to sweep. Finally, Iron Valiant is highly reliant on Booster Energy to sweep, (AC) as since it cannot normally outspeed common revenge-killers (RH) like Chien-Pao, Dragapult, Cinderace, and Meowscarada. Therefore, it is important to time when to switch in to plan long-term before bringing in Iron Valiant to ensure defensive counters like Skeledirge and Volcarona are either removed or heavily damaged so it can sweep or break through the opposing team effectively. Along these lines, it is important to conserve Iron Valiant's health, (AC) since it can survive live key priority moves such as Extreme Speed from Tera Normal Dragonite after a Dragon Dance and Ice Shard from Choice Band Chien-Pao. Therefore, Pokemon pokemon which that can remove entry hazards, (AC) such as Great Tusk and Iron Treads, (AC) are form great teammates for Iron Valiant.

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- Written by: [[hamiltonion, 40598]]
- Quality checked by: [[chimp, 197439], [dex, 277988]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
 

hamiltonion

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1/1 GP Team done
credit lunaflare here, really good check!

name: Calm Mind
move 1: Calm Mind
move 2: Moonblast
move 3: Thunderbolt
move 4: Psyshock
item: Booster Energy
tera type: Fairy / Electric
ability: Quark Drive
nature: Timid
evs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Iron Valiant utilizes a deadly combination of offensive power, coverage, and Speed speed to function as one of the best sweepers in OU. the tier. After a Quark Drive boost, from Booster Energy, Iron Valiant outspeeds and OHKOes a plethora of premier offensive threats in the tier, (AC) such as Chien-Pao, Dragapult, (AC) Meowscarada, and Roaring Moon. Thunderbolt allows Iron Valiant to damage Corviknight and bulky Water-types like Dondozo, Azumarill, Toxapex, (AC) and Tera Water Garganacl, (AC) while Psyshock scores a 2HKO on any Clodsire looking to stop Iron Valiant's (AA) sweep. With Calm Mind, Iron Valiant can switch roles from an endgame sweeper to a powerful wallbreaker. After one Calm Mind, Moonblast 2HKOes Defensive defensive Garganacl, (AC) and +1 Tera Electric Thunderbolt 2HKOes specially defensive Slowking and OHKOes flat out OHKOs Corviknight. Tera Fairy powers up Moonblast, (AC) which can now 2HKO defensive Defensive Garganacl and Hatterene. Tera Electric boosts the power of Thunderbolt, which secures important 2HKOs (2hkos is the noun, 2hkoes is the verb) on specially defensive Dodonzo, Corviknight, and Toxapex, lets Iron Valiant survive Scizor's Bullet Punch, and grants Iron Valiant an immunity to paralysis from Hatterene's Nuzzle. boosted Thunderbolt secures critical 2HKOes on specially defensive Dondozo, Corviknight, and Toxapex while additionally letting Iron Valiant live Bullet Punch from Scizor and being immune to paralysis from Hatterene's Nuzzle. (you should explain tera fairy as well bc it's slashed)

Iron Valiant relies heavily on its super-effective (RH) coverage moves for damage output. (AP) and As a result, it struggles to make progress against Pokemon pokemon like Volcarona, Skeledirge, (AC) and Gholdengo. Thus, teammates pokemon like Clodsire and Ting-Lu are form good defensive partners for Iron Valiant, (AC) with and have the added benefit of being able to set up entry hazards. (separated sentences one and two because they make better sense to me when separated.) Iron Moth has strong offensive synergy with Iron Valiant, being able to threaten Amoonguss, Iron Treads, and Tera Fairy Garganacl, (AC) while also being able to chip down special walls like Clodsire. On offense teams, Iron Valiant complements powerful wallbreakers like Chien-Pao, Nasty Plot Gholdengo, (AC) and Kingambit, (AC) since they can overwhelm defensive cores and open up the path for an Iron Valiant to sweep. Finally, Iron Valiant is highly reliant on Booster Energy to sweep, (AC) as since it cannot normally outspeed common revenge-killers (RH) like Chien-Pao, Dragapult, Cinderace, and Meowscarada. Therefore, it is important to time when to switch in to plan long-term before bringing in Iron Valiant to ensure defensive counters like Skeledirge and Volcarona are either removed or heavily damaged so it can sweep or break through the opposing team effectively. Along these lines, it is important to conserve Iron Valiant's health, (AC) since it can survive live key priority moves such as Extreme Speed from Tera Normal Dragonite after a Dragon Dance and Ice Shard from Choice Band Chien-Pao. Therefore, Pokemon pokemon which that can remove entry hazards, (AC) such as Great Tusk and Iron Treads, (AC) are form great teammates for Iron Valiant.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[hamiltonion, 40598]]
- Quality checked by: [[chimp, 197439], [dex, 277988]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]
Implemented, thanks!
 

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some of the changes from the gp check were missed with implementing, mostly comma additions. id advise you use the reply method (click rely to my check, delete the red removals, address the comments, and then reformat the post and paste it back into the op). there’s a good guide + video here (point 3).

The Tera Fairy sentence you added should also be changed to this:
Tera Fairy powers up Moonblast, which can now 2HKO defensive Garganacl and Hatterene.
By defensive, do you mean specially defensive? If you do, clarify that. If not, you can just remove the word defensive bc there isn’t an offensive set that exists, and Moonblast is a special move so saying physdef doesn’t make too much sense.
 

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some of the changes from the gp check were missed with implementing, mostly comma additions. id advise you use the reply method (click rely to my check, delete the red removals, address the comments, and then reformat the post and paste it back into the op). there’s a good guide + video here (point 3).

The Tera Fairy sentence you added should also be changed to this:

By defensive, do you mean specially defensive? If you do, clarify that. If not, you can just remove the word defensive bc there isn’t an offensive set that exists, and Moonblast is a special move so saying physdef doesn’t make too much sense.
This is why implementing GP at 5:30am isnt a good idea lol. Anyway caught all the rest, removed "defensive" from Garg sentence.
 

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