ZU [BW] Offensive Pivot Pelipper [DONE]

[Bella]

[SET]
name: Offensive Pivot
move 1: Hydro Pump / Scald
move 2: Hurricane
move 3: U-turn
move 4: Roost
item: Leftovers / Sky Plate / Splash Plate
ability: Rain Dish
nature: Modest
evs: 4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
With its high-power STAB moves that give it great coverage against most of the metagame, as well as strong pivoting potential thanks to U-turn and Roost, Pelipper can serve as one of BW ZU's best special wallbreakers and offensive pivots. Hydro Pump deals serious damage to Pokemon like Simisear and Solrock, as well as hitting foes like specially defensive Clefairy and Mienfoo decently. Scald can be run instead for its reliability and burn chance, though it lacks the power to reach certain damage thresholds such as OHKOing Persian after Stealth Rock. Hurricane chips Meganium, Frillish, and Gloom, which can take Hydro Pump. Pelipper's STAB combination is unresisted by the entire metagame, and the two types complement each other well, which gives it a niche over other offensive Water-types like Walrein and Whiscash that struggle to deal with opposing Water- and Grass-types, respectively. U-turn allows Pelipper to safely pivot against Pokemon that may switch in on it like Muk and Clefairy, as well as helping to bring in its teammates safely. Pelipper opts for Leftovers to slightly offset damage from Stealth Rock and have small amounts of reliable recovery. However, Sky Plate and Splash Plate can boost the power of Hurricane and Hydro Pump, respectively, allowing Pelipper to OHKO Persian and 2HKO physically defensive Clefairy with one of these moves. Rain Dish can provide a slight amount of recovery against rain teams.

Generally, Pelipper is seen on offense and balance teams looking for a strong special wallbreaker with the longevity to threaten special walls like Meganium and Clefairy over longer games. Ground-types like Hippopotas and Graveler that can deal with the Electric-types Pelipper is most immediately threatened by, such as Pikachu and Emogla, are great partners to have. Other wallbreakers like Mr. Mime and Exploud appreciate Pelipper's ability to beat their checks like Meganium and Graveler. Pelipper also enjoys having partners that can do residual damage to the opponents's team so it can have an easier time wallbreaking; Knock Off from Pokemon like Persian and Mienfoo and status from Pokemon such as Wormadam-S and Solrock are thus useful to have. Entry hazard support from Solrock and Clefairy can be helpful, as it allows Pelipper to get useful KOs on Pokemon like Persian and 2HKOs on physically defensive Clefairy and Walrein. Rapid Spin support from Staryu can remove Stealth Rock to allow Pelipper to enter the field more safely. Pelipper can weaken Pokemon like Gloom, Muk, and Clefairy for Raichu, allowing Raichu to take advantage of them later in the game. In return, Raichu takes Electric-type attacks aimed at Pelipper and can help wear down their shared checks, like Muk.

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[Monai]

Good start needs a lot of edits, qc1 when implemented Gangsta Spongebob

Qc1

[SET]
name: Offensive Pivot
move 1: Hydro Pump / Scald
move 2: Hurricane
move 3: U-turn
move 4: Roost
item: Leftovers / Sky Plate / Splash Plate
ability: Rain Dish
nature: Modest
evs: 4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
With its high power STAB moves, which gives it great coverage into most of the metagame, as well as still functioning as a decent pivot thanks to U-turn and Roost, Pelipper can become one of BW ZU's best special wallbreakers and offensive pivots. Bring up how Pelipper's STABs being unresisted allows it to get by easily on two attacks. Bring up Scald for reliability and status. Hydro Pump deals serious damage to Pokemon like Simisear and Solrock. Somewhat insufficient description. I'm not asking you to fluff for no reason but mention the power on other neutral targets. Hurricane chips Pokemon like Meganium, Frillish, Kingler and Gloom who otherwise can take Hydro Pump. Complementary Stabs, contrast this with Walrein which struggles to hit Waters without hp grass/elec or Whiscash who is outright walled by grasses. Generally, Pelipper opts for Leftovers to slightly negate damage. However, Sky Plate and Splash Plate can boost the power of Hurricane and Hydro Pump respectively at the cost of the free recovery Leftovers provides. Rain Dish can provide a slight amount of recovery against rain teams. You neglected to mention the purpose of uturn. Why should teams run uturn pelipper over a move like knock off? Are there any beneficiaries for the second section of the analysis? What type of Pokemon does uturn help Pelipper play around and or support?

Generally Pelipper is seen on offense and balance teams looking for a strong special wallbreaker with longevity to threaten help break through special walls like Meganium and Clefairy over longer games to help other attackers be able to clean up the opposing team. Ground-types like Hippopotas and Graveler who can deal with the Electric-types that Pelipper is most immediately threatened by, such as Pikachu and Emogla, are great partners to have. Other wallbreakers like Mr. Mime and Exploud appreciate Pelipper's ability to beat their checks like Meganium and Graveler, respectively. Rapid Spin support from Staryu or Sandshrew Not really relevant enough to mention can help remove Stealth Rock for Pelipper to enter the field wallbreak safer. If you wish to bring up partners that can help Pelipper break you should mention residual forms of damage like Knock, rocks from aforementioned grounds, tox, para, other offensive synergies etc. Raichu is a notable partner; Pelipper can remove Pokemon like Gloom and Clefairy Pelipper can't consistently beat Clefairy solo, any amount of Spdef makes it a favored matchup for Clef. I would either find a more relevant example, and/or explain how putting pressure on Clefairy allows Raichu to abuse a weakened Clefairy later for Raichu. In return, Raichu takes Electric-type attacks aimed at Pelipper and can help wear down their shared checks, like Muk.

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[5Dots]

Bella Please implement Monai's QC check

 

[Bella]

Bella Please implement Monai's QC check

sorry for taking literal ages, did

 

[Gangsta Spongebob]

Good job, QC 2/2 when implemented

QC 2/2

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[SET]
name: Offensive Pivot
move 1: Hydro Pump / Scald
move 2: Hurricane
move 3: U-turn
move 4: Roost
item: Leftovers / Sky Plate / Splash Plate
ability: Rain Dish
nature: Modest
evs: 4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
With its high power STAB moves, which gives it great coverage into most of the metagame, as well as still functioning as a decent pivot strong pivoting potential thanks to U-turn and Roost, Pelipper can become one of BW ZU's best special wallbreakers and offensive pivot pivots. Hydro Pump deals serious damage to Pokemon like Simisear and Solrock, as well as being a decent midground into Pokemon like Specially Defensive Clefairy and Mienfoo. Scald can be ran instead, trading off the power of Hydro Pump for a more reliable STAB and the burn chance. Give examples of XHKO tresholds that Scald misses, like Persian after Stealth Rocks Hurricane chips Meganium, Frillish and Gloom who that According to GP Pokemon are objects, so they should be referred to in terms of "which" and "that" as opposed to "who" otherwise can take Hydro Pump. The STAB combination is unresisted by the entire metagame and complements each other well, which gives Pelipper a niche over other offensive Water-types like Walrien and Whiscash who that struggle to deal with opposing Water- and Grass-types, respectively. U-turn allows Pelipper to safely pivot on Pokemon that may switch-in on it like Muk and Clefairy, as well as helping to bring in its teammates safely. Pelipper opts for Leftovers to slightly negate damage. This sentence is a bit incomplete, you need to go more in-depth as to how Lefties help, notably by mitigating Stealth Rock damage However, Sky Plate and Splash Plate can boost the power of Hurricane and Hydro Pump, (Add comma) respectively at the cost of the free recovery Leftovers provides. Self-explanatory. For the section about the Plates, mention KOes they can help achieve. Persian is a notable one, going from never being OHKOed by Hydro Pump/Hurricane to always with the respective plates Rain Dish can provide a slight amount of recovery against rain teams.

Generally Pelipper is seen on offense and balance teams looking for a strong special wallbreaker with longevity to threaten special walls like Meganium and Clefairy over longer games. Ground-types like Hippopotas and Graveler who that can deal with the Electric-types that Pelipper is most immediately threatened by, such as Pikachu and Emogla, are great partners to have. Other wallbreakers like Mr. Mime and Exploud appreciate Pelipper's ability to beat their checks like Meganium and Graveler, respectively. Pelipper also enjoys having partners that can do residual damage to the opponents' opponent's team so it can have it easier time wallbreaking easier; Knock Off from Pokemon like Persian and Mienfoo and status from Pokemon such as Wormadam-S and Solrock are thus useful to have. Mention entry hazard support, mainly Stealth Rock, and the KOes they can help achieve Rapid Spin support from Staryu can help remove Stealth Rock for Pelipper to enter the fielder safer. Raichu is a notiable notable partner; Pelipper can weaken Pokemon like Gloom and Clefairy for Raichu, Pelipper doesn't reliably 2HKO physically defensive Clefairy without a Plate, and can't easily break through specially defensive. Add it with Muk and put another example here allowing Raichu to take advantage of these two laater later in the game. In return, Raichu takes Electric-type attacks aimed at Pelipper and can help wear down their shared checks, like Muk.

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[Bella]

Good job, QC 2/2 when implemented

QC 2/2

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[SET]
name: Offensive Pivot
move 1: Hydro Pump / Scald
move 2: Hurricane
move 3: U-turn
move 4: Roost
item: Leftovers / Sky Plate / Splash Plate
ability: Rain Dish
nature: Modest
evs: 4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
With its high power STAB moves, which gives it great coverage into most of the metagame, as well as still functioning as a decent pivot strong pivoting potential thanks to U-turn and Roost, Pelipper can become one of BW ZU's best special wallbreakers and offensive pivot pivots. Hydro Pump deals serious damage to Pokemon like Simisear and Solrock, as well as being a decent midground into Pokemon like Specially Defensive Clefairy and Mienfoo. Scald can be ran instead, trading off the power of Hydro Pump for a more reliable STAB and the burn chance. Give examples of XHKO tresholds that Scald misses, like Persian after Stealth Rocks Hurricane chips Meganium, Frillish and Gloom who that According to GP Pokemon are objects, so they should be referred to in terms of "which" and "that" as opposed to "who" otherwise can take Hydro Pump. The STAB combination is unresisted by the entire metagame and complements each other well, which gives Pelipper a niche over other offensive Water-types like Walrien and Whiscash who that struggle to deal with opposing Water- and Grass-types, respectively. U-turn allows Pelipper to safely pivot on Pokemon that may switch-in on it like Muk and Clefairy, as well as helping to bring in its teammates safely. Pelipper opts for Leftovers to slightly negate damage. This sentence is a bit incomplete, you need to go more in-depth as to how Lefties help, notably by mitigating Stealth Rock damage However, Sky Plate and Splash Plate can boost the power of Hurricane and Hydro Pump, (Add comma) respectively at the cost of the free recovery Leftovers provides. Self-explanatory. For the section about the Plates, mention KOes they can help achieve. Persian is a notable one, going from never being OHKOed by Hydro Pump/Hurricane to always with the respective plates Rain Dish can provide a slight amount of recovery against rain teams.

Generally Pelipper is seen on offense and balance teams looking for a strong special wallbreaker with longevity to threaten special walls like Meganium and Clefairy over longer games. Ground-types like Hippopotas and Graveler who that can deal with the Electric-types that Pelipper is most immediately threatened by, such as Pikachu and Emogla, are great partners to have. Other wallbreakers like Mr. Mime and Exploud appreciate Pelipper's ability to beat their checks like Meganium and Graveler, respectively. Pelipper also enjoys having partners that can do residual damage to the opponents' opponent's team so it can have it easier time wallbreaking easier; Knock Off from Pokemon like Persian and Mienfoo and status from Pokemon such as Wormadam-S and Solrock are thus useful to have. Mention entry hazard support, mainly Stealth Rock, and the KOes they can help achieve Rapid Spin support from Staryu can help remove Stealth Rock for Pelipper to enter the fielder safer. Raichu is a notiable notable partner; Pelipper can weaken Pokemon like Gloom and Clefairy for Raichu, Pelipper doesn't reliably 2HKO physically defensive Clefairy without a Plate, and can't easily break through specially defensive. Add it with Muk and put another example here allowing Raichu to take advantage of these two laater later in the game. In return, Raichu takes Electric-type attacks aimed at Pelipper and can help wear down their shared checks, like Muk.

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Written by:
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[TheRealBigC]

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Peli

[SET]
name: Offensive Pivot
move 1: Hydro Pump / Scald
move 2: Hurricane
move 3: U-turn
move 4: Roost
item: Leftovers / Sky Plate / Splash Plate
ability: Rain Dish
nature: Modest
evs: 4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
With its high power STAB moves, which gives that give it great coverage into against most of the metagame, as well as strong pivoting potential thanks to U-turn and Roost, Pelipper can become serve as (slightly subjective change here but I feel like "serve as" moves Pelipper out of the realm of potential as opposed to "become" and is more conventional) one of BW ZU's best special wallbreakers and offensive pivot pivots. Hydro Pump deals serious damage to Pokemon like Simisear and Solrock, as well as being a decent midground into mid-ground against Pokemon foes (repetition) like Specially Defensive specially defensive Clefairy and Mienfoo. Scald can be ran instead, trading off the power of Hydro Pump, meaning it misses out on certain rolls like the OHKO on Persian after Stealth Rock, for a more reliable STAB and the burn chance Scald can be used as a more reliable STAB option that comes with a chance to burn; however, it lacks power compared to Hydro Pump, missing out on certain damage rolls such as the chance to OHKO Persian after Stealth Rock. Hurricane chips Meganium, Frillish and Gloom that otherwise can take Hydro Pump. The Pelipper's STAB combination is unresisted by the entire metagame and complements the two types complement each other well, which gives Pelipper it a niche over other offensive Water-types like Walrien Walrein and Whiscash who that struggle to deal with opposing Water- and Grass-types, respectively. U-turn allows Pelipper to safely pivot on against Pokemon that may switch-in switch in on it like Muk and Clefairy, as well as helping it to bring in its teammates safely. Pelipper opts for Leftovers to slightly negate offset damage from Stealth Rock and have provide small amounts of reliable recovery. However, Sky Plate and Splash Plate can boost the power of Hurricane and Hydro Pump, respectively, allowing Pelipper to OHKO Persian and 2HKO physically defensive Clefairy with one of these moves Hydro Pump and Hurricane as well as 2HKOing physically defensive Clefairy. Rain Dish can provide a slight amount of recovery against rain teams.

Generally, (AC) Pelipper is seen on offense and balance teams looking for a strong special wallbreaker with longevity to threaten special walls like Meganium and Clefairy over longer games. Ground-types like Hippopotas and Graveler that can deal with the Electric-types that Pelipper is most immediately threatened by, such as Pikachu and Emogla, are great partners to have. Other wallbreakers like Mr. Mime and Exploud appreciate Pelipper's ability to beat their checks like Meganium and Graveler, respectively. Pelipper also enjoys having partners that can do residual damage to the opponents's team so it can have it an easier time wallbreaking easier; Knock Off from Pokemon like Persian and Mienfoo and status from Pokemon such as Wormadam-S and Solrock are thus useful to have. Entry hazard support from Solrock and Clefairy can be helpful, as it allows Pelipper to get useful KO's KOs on Pokemon like Persian and 2HKO 2HKOs on physically defensive Clefairy and Walrien Walrein. Rapid Spin support from Staryu can help remove Stealth Rock for to allow Pelipper to enter the fielder field safer. Raichu is a notiable notable partner; Pelipper can weaken Pokemon like Gloom, Muk, and Clefairy for Raichu, allowing Raichu to take advantage of these two three later in the game. In return, Raichu takes Electric-type attacks aimed at Pelipper and can help wear down their shared checks, like Muk.

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[SET]
name: Offensive Pivot
move 1: Hydro Pump / Scald
move 2: Hurricane
move 3: U-turn
move 4: Roost
item: Leftovers / Sky Plate / Splash Plate
ability: Rain Dish
nature: Modest
evs: 4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
With its high power high-power STAB moves, which gives that give it great coverage into against most of the metagame, as well as strong pivoting potential thanks to U-turn and Roost, Pelipper can become serve as (slightly subjective change here but I feel like "serve as" moves Pelipper out of the realm of potential as opposed to "become" and is more conventional) one of BW ZU's best special wallbreakers and offensive pivot pivots. Hydro Pump deals serious damage to Pokemon like Simisear and Solrock, as well as being a decent midground into against Pokemon foes (repetition) like Specially Defensive specially defensive Clefairy and Mienfoo. (I don't really get the "midground" usage here because Hydro Pump is Pelipper's best move against Clefairy. Would something like "as well as hitting foes like specially defensive Clefairy and Meinfoo decently" work instead?) Scald can be ran instead, trading off the power of Hydro Pump, meaning it misses out on certain rolls like the OHKO on Persian after Stealth Rock, for a more reliable STAB and the burn chance. Scald can be run instead for its reliability and burn chance, though it lacks the power to reach certain damage thresholds such as OHKOing Persian after Stealth Rock. Hurricane chips Meganium, Frillish, (comma) and Gloom, (comma) that otherwise which can take Hydro Pump. The Pelipper's STAB combination is unresisted by the entire metagame, (comma) and complements the two types complement (does saying its STAB moves complement each other really add anything when you've already said the combination is unresisted?) each other well, which gives Pelipper it a niche over other offensive Water-types like Walrien Walrein and Whiscash who that struggle to deal with opposing Water- and Grass-types, respectively. U-turn allows Pelipper to safely pivot on against Pokemon that may switch-in switch in on it like Muk and Clefairy, as well as helping it to bring in its teammates safely. Pelipper opts for Leftovers to slightly negate offset damage from Stealth Rock and have small amounts of reliable recovery. However, Sky Plate and Splash Plate can boost the power of Hurricane and Hydro Pump, respectively, allowing Pelipper to OHKO Persian and 2HKO physically defensive Clefairy with one of these moves Hydro Pump and Hurricane as well as 2HKOing physically defensive Clefairy. Rain Dish can provide a slight amount of recovery against rain teams.

Generally, (AC) Pelipper is seen on offense and balance teams looking for a strong special wallbreaker with the longevity to threaten special walls like Meganium and Clefairy over longer games. Ground-types like Hippopotas and Graveler that can deal with the Electric-types that Pelipper is most immediately threatened by, such as Pikachu and Emogla, are great partners to have. Other wallbreakers like Mr. Mime and Exploud appreciate Pelipper's ability to beat their checks like Meganium and Graveler, (comma) respectively. (can't really use it like that) Pelipper also enjoys having partners that can do residual damage to the opponents's team so it can have it an easier time wallbreaking easier; Knock Off from Pokemon like Persian and Mienfoo and status from Pokemon such as Wormadam-S (if you meant Sandy rather than Trash [Steel], change this to Wormadam-G) and Solrock are thus useful to have. Entry hazard support from Solrock and Clefairy can be helpful, as it allows Pelipper to get useful KO's KOs on Pokemon like Persian and 2HKO 2HKOs on physically defensive Clefairy and Walrien Walrein. Rapid Spin support from Staryu can help remove Stealth Rock for to allow Pelipper to enter the fielder safer field more safely. Raichu is a notiable partner; Pelipper can weaken Pokemon like Gloom, Muk, and Clefairy for Raichu, allowing Raichu to take advantage of these two them later in the game. In return, Raichu takes Electric-type attacks aimed at Pelipper and can help wear down their shared checks, like Muk.

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- The "high-power" in "high-power STAB moves" should be hyphenated, as it's a compound adjective directly tied to a noun.
- "midground" is not hyphenated.
- There was a missing serial comma in the Hurricane sentence, and it should ideally be "which" over "that" because the latter implies Hurricane only hits variants of the listed Pokemon that can take Hydro Pump.
- When you changed the sentence about Pelipper's STAB combination, you made the clause after and independent, so you should've added a comma.
- Changing "as well as helping it bring in its teammates safely" to "helping it bring in its teammates safely" slightly alters the phrase's meaning, as it implies Pelipper can only help bring in its teammates safely when pivoting out of its switch-ins.
- Pelipper is the subject in the Leftovers sentence, so saying it can use Leftovers to "have recovery" was fine.
- It should be "enter the field more safely" rather than "enter the field safer", as "safer" is not an adverb.

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Credit TheRealBigC too!

 

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[SET]
name: Offensive Pivot
move 1: Hydro Pump / Scald
move 2: Hurricane
move 3: U-turn
move 4: Roost
item: Leftovers / Sky Plate / Splash Plate
ability: Rain Dish
nature: Modest
evs: 4 Def / 252 SpA / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
With its high power high-power STAB moves, which gives that give it great coverage into against most of the metagame, as well as strong pivoting potential thanks to U-turn and Roost, Pelipper can become serve as (slightly subjective change here but I feel like "serve as" moves Pelipper out of the realm of potential as opposed to "become" and is more conventional) one of BW ZU's best special wallbreakers and offensive pivot pivots. Hydro Pump deals serious damage to Pokemon like Simisear and Solrock, as well as being a decent midground into against Pokemon foes (repetition) like Specially Defensive specially defensive Clefairy and Mienfoo. (I don't really get the "midground" usage here because Hydro Pump is Pelipper's best move against Clefairy. Would something like "as well as hitting foes like specially defensive Clefairy and Meinfoo decently" work instead?) Scald can be ran instead, trading off the power of Hydro Pump, meaning it misses out on certain rolls like the OHKO on Persian after Stealth Rock, for a more reliable STAB and the burn chance. Scald can be run instead for its reliability and burn chance, though it lacks the power to reach certain damage thresholds such as OHKOing Persian after Stealth Rock. Hurricane chips Meganium, Frillish, (comma) and Gloom, (comma) that otherwise which can take Hydro Pump. The Pelipper's STAB combination is unresisted by the entire metagame, (comma) and complements the two types complement (does saying its STAB moves complement each other really add anything when you've already said the combination is unresisted?) each other well, which gives Pelipper it a niche over other offensive Water-types like Walrien Walrein and Whiscash who that struggle to deal with opposing Water- and Grass-types, respectively. U-turn allows Pelipper to safely pivot on against Pokemon that may switch-in switch in on it like Muk and Clefairy, as well as helping it to bring in its teammates safely. Pelipper opts for Leftovers to slightly negate offset damage from Stealth Rock and have small amounts of reliable recovery. However, Sky Plate and Splash Plate can boost the power of Hurricane and Hydro Pump, respectively, allowing Pelipper to OHKO Persian and 2HKO physically defensive Clefairy with one of these moves Hydro Pump and Hurricane as well as 2HKOing physically defensive Clefairy. Rain Dish can provide a slight amount of recovery against rain teams.

Generally, (AC) Pelipper is seen on offense and balance teams looking for a strong special wallbreaker with the longevity to threaten special walls like Meganium and Clefairy over longer games. Ground-types like Hippopotas and Graveler that can deal with the Electric-types that Pelipper is most immediately threatened by, such as Pikachu and Emogla, are great partners to have. Other wallbreakers like Mr. Mime and Exploud appreciate Pelipper's ability to beat their checks like Meganium and Graveler, (comma) respectively. (can't really use it like that) Pelipper also enjoys having partners that can do residual damage to the opponents's team so it can have it an easier time wallbreaking easier; Knock Off from Pokemon like Persian and Mienfoo and status from Pokemon such as Wormadam-S (if you meant Sandy rather than Trash [Steel], change this to Wormadam-G) and Solrock are thus useful to have. Entry hazard support from Solrock and Clefairy can be helpful, as it allows Pelipper to get useful KO's KOs on Pokemon like Persian and 2HKO 2HKOs on physically defensive Clefairy and Walrien Walrein. Rapid Spin support from Staryu can help remove Stealth Rock for to allow Pelipper to enter the fielder safer field more safely. Raichu is a notiable partner; Pelipper can weaken Pokemon like Gloom, Muk, and Clefairy for Raichu, allowing Raichu to take advantage of these two them later in the game. In return, Raichu takes Electric-type attacks aimed at Pelipper and can help wear down their shared checks, like Muk.

[SET CREDITS]
Written by:
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Quality checked by:
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- The "high-power" in "high-power STAB moves" should be hyphenated, as it's a compound adjective directly tied to a noun.
- "midground" is not hyphenated.
- There was a missing serial comma in the Hurricane sentence, and it should ideally be "which" over "that" because the latter implies Hurricane only hits variants of the listed Pokemon that can take Hydro Pump.
- When you changed the sentence about Pelipper's STAB combination, you made the clause after and independent, so you should've added a comma.
- Changing "as well as helping it bring in its teammates safely" to "helping it bring in its teammates safely" slightly alters the phrase's meaning, as it implies Pelipper can only help bring in its teammates safely when pivoting out of its switch-ins.
- Pelipper is the subject in the Leftovers sentence, so saying it can use Leftovers to "have recovery" was fine.
- It should be "enter the field more safely" rather than "enter the field safer", as "safer" is not an adverb.

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i did mean Wormadam Trash, btw.
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