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I've actually been quite busy lately, so I haven't been able to be as efficient as usual. If I get through Piloswine and Wormadam-G quickly, I'm going to write up the updates for some Pokemon, and Venusaur might be one of them, since it needs an author.
Can you directly add in Thund's Specially Defensive set into your Torterra analysis? One reason is because the set is using "he" instead of your "it", so it'd be good to stay consistent. I guess it doesn't hurt to over-grammar check it too.