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Mamoswine is an incredible Choice Band user for Ground-type teams thanks to its raw power and excellent STAB coverage, making it a force to be reckoned with. Earthquake is a common STAB move for Mamoswine, and thanks to its monstrous Physical Attack stat boosted with Choice...
-> I think Cinderace is probably a better example than Torkoal as a target EP hits;
-> In the Contrary Superpower sentence, mention Superpower is able to snowball through Normal and Rock teams;
-> Saying "Corviknight handles Sneasler" and "Mantine handles rain teams" feels a bit too specific and...
-> Move order should be Icicle Crash, EQ, Shard, Knock / Superpower;
-> You could say "Mamoswine is an incredible Choice Band user for Ground-type teams because of its raw power and excellent STAB coverage, making it a force to be reckoned with" instead of what you have in the introductory...
-> Slash Fire Blast with Thrower in the first slot;
-> Instead of "Mega Charizard Y makes for a great wallbreaker under sun", I think "Mega Charizard Y is a great wallbreaker Flying teams have access to" or something along these lines is probably better. It's great outside of sun as well;
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-> Move order should be hh, sball, focus blast, thrower / hyper voice as a slash
-> Focus Blast doesn't really ease the matchup against Normal teams because it's walled by the blobs. Heatran is probably a better target mention than Garg too
-> On the other hand, mention Focus Blast +...