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This kind of reminds me of that mono-poison warstory written a little while ago in a similar style. And while your writing is good, the reason that the other way of warstory-ing is standard, is because it (should be) easy to follow, and help us know what's going through your head. I like the...
So this is what it feels like to be a ninja...
Anywho, a while back I recall people in their avatars and sigs having images of pokemon wearing these triangular orange glasses. Namely Chou having one with Ferrothorn. What was that about?
Something that we should consider when making the new Gen V definition of Uber is the Pokemon that we have banned and discuss the rationale why. Ones I can recall are:
Blaziken
Darkrai
Manaphy
Garchomp
Deoxys-S
Thundurus
Excadrill
Drizzle + Swift Swim
(Not neccesarily in that order but you...
You're probably running HJK/U-Turn/???/??? Right? The last two moves are generally a toss up between HP Ice, Stone Edge, or Fake Out.
Compare it to Blizzard and Ice Beam. In other words they would generally go with Aura Sphere. Possibly out of sheer hatred of Focus Miss.
Edit:
I'd include links to the RMT archive as well as links to the threat lists. One of the biggest considerations for building a team is looking at sucessfull teams as well as what you need to prepare for.
RMT Archive
OU Threatlist
Why is it that people "don't like to overpredict on the first turn"? In the majority of the warstories I've read if the player had made a prediction they would likely have dealt decent damage, set up hazards etc. Like if you have a Mienshao in on a Mamoswine. Someone may say they think Mamo will...
Very nice warstory. You used a very...unorthodox team (not one OU mon!) but it still holds it's own. Very nice! ^^ The control shifted several times in the match, but that Stealth Rock with Metagross really helped out. 8/10